Third round: boom, right here.
And we’re back.
This experiment has been kinda totally awesome so far.
This is the second to last part. Only one more round to go after this…
The rules are simple:
Look through the 600-word entries from last week (round three, linked above).
Pick one.
Add another 200 words to the story.
(Easiest way forward is to copy the chosen 600 words to your own blog, then add the next 200. Don’t forget to link to your unfinished 800-word story in the comments. Someone may want to continue the tale next week, for part four.)
You do not need to have participated in the earlier rounds to participate in this one.
Try to continue a story in which you have not yet participated.
Do not finish the story. This is a five-part fiction experiment: we’ll end the year with several 1000-word stories, each built out of 200-word chunks by you guys. This is a collaborative game. It is Whisper Down the Lane. It is Telephone. It should be very interesting by the end. One hopes.
You’ve got one week.
Due by Friday, December 20th, noon EST.
Join the narrative chain, won’t you?
Mark Gardner says:
My 207 word addition brings the story up to 826:
http://article94.blogspot.com/2013/12/making-merry-part-4.html?m=0
December 13, 2013 — 2:41 PM
mwebster76 says:
Oh cool, this is the one I started! Great work! I hope someone picks this one up so it can get an ending.
December 13, 2013 — 3:38 PM
Renee Elizabeths says:
I’d love to finish this one off in the next round!
December 16, 2013 — 11:08 AM
Shane Vaughan says:
Added the penultimate piece to The Corner, as begun by Heather, Susan and Mergatroid. Read on to find out about the pernicious forest pixie and the booming voice from the shadows.
http://writesomethingsmidge.blogspot.ie/
December 13, 2013 — 3:15 PM
Heather Milne Johnson says:
Woohoo! So glad it’s still going. Thanks, Shane.
December 13, 2013 — 4:55 PM
susanpen says:
Love this. Thanks for adding to it.
December 14, 2013 — 2:01 AM
murgatroid98 says:
I love it!
December 14, 2013 — 8:01 AM
Joanna Horrocks says:
Love it. I’m finishing it up now. I’ll have it up shortly.
December 21, 2013 — 3:27 PM
Joanna Horrocks says:
This was so much fun. I’m glad to finally know what my cat’s been freaking out about when she hisses at things I can’t see! Thank you, Heather, Susan, Murgatroid, and Shane.
The final piece of The Corner is here:
http://joannahorrocks.wordpress.com/2013/12/21/the-corner-flash-fiction-challenge-week-five/
December 21, 2013 — 4:23 PM
mwebster76 says:
Here is my part 4 submission. We have an untitled piece staring Joe, who is confused about his lost son in the grocery store. You may read the latest version here:
http://writeontheworld.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/part-4-200-words-at-a-time-flash-fiction-challenge/
I am picking up after Josee (http://joseedeangelis.wordpress.com/2013/12/06/chuck-wendings-flash-fiction-challenge-part-3/comment-page-1/#comment-6) who picked this story up after Tony Taylor… and I am sorry, but I’ve lost track of who had it before that. So, I’m not sure who started it. But I had fun with it and hope whoever writes the ending will be kind enough to post a link to my blog so my readers can see how it ends. Thanks!
December 13, 2013 — 3:29 PM
Josee De Angelis says:
Great! It worked! Love the continuation.
December 13, 2013 — 9:15 PM
Lynna Landstreet says:
I continued that one too, before I realized that you had: http://lynnalandstreet.com/stories/missing
BTW, the writer of part 1 was Ashley – I had to do some digging, but I’ve got links to the original posts above each part in my version.
December 15, 2013 — 4:54 PM
kurt bali says:
Oh, yeah. This’ll be sweet.
December 13, 2013 — 4:31 PM
mirymom says:
I continued “Forest Road” by Snellopy, David Kearney, and Doreen Queen. http://bit.ly/18JDYXI
December 13, 2013 — 4:34 PM
conniecockrell says:
Think I’ll try and finish this one off. I love where you left part 4!
December 20, 2013 — 6:46 PM
conniecockrell says:
OK, finished it up but it won’t appear on my blog until Friday. You can see it here: http://wp.me/p2AyuM-gk then.
December 23, 2013 — 12:43 AM
Josee De Angelis says:
Here’s the continuation of Within the Church. I picked it up from Courtney Cantrell.
http://joseedeangelis.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/terribleminds-com-chuck-wendings-flash-fiction-challenge-part-4/
A priest, a witch and possessed skeletons puppeteered by an evil purple-robe wearing fiend.
December 13, 2013 — 4:34 PM
Courtney Cantrell says:
And it’s a fabulous continuation! Love the twist. Thanks, Josée!
December 14, 2013 — 2:24 PM
Mozette says:
Oohh… twists’n’turns all the way!
I’ll take this one for the last! 😀 Being a practicing witch, I know a few good curses and spells – good and bad – to jump this along to the end. 😀
December 20, 2013 — 12:02 AM
Courtney Cantrell says:
Sounds intriguing, Mozette! Can’t wait to read how you wrap it up! : )
December 21, 2013 — 1:20 AM
mckkenzie says:
Argh, what to pick? What to pick????
December 13, 2013 — 5:20 PM
kurt bali says:
I went with a piece started by Jim Franklin, Lynna Landstreet, and CE Konicki. This little slice of weird is called “In Too Deep.”
http://sixgunwizard.blogspot.com/2013/12/in-too-deep.html
December 13, 2013 — 5:30 PM
Jim Franklin says:
Fantastic! Thanks for continuing this weird little story.
December 14, 2013 — 11:21 AM
kurt bali says:
No problem. Really want to see how it ends.
December 14, 2013 — 2:13 PM
hpetterson says:
Disregard mine back on part three…I didn’t see anyone tag it as being taken.
December 15, 2013 — 9:57 AM
Rebecca Douglass says:
Oops–I saw this wasn’t indicated as taken on the Part 3 post, so I picked it up and posted MY part 4 today–so I guess anyone wanting to finish can choose which direction. In fact, now I look, I followed a different part 3, too. Muchly branching story.
http://www.ninjalibrarian.com/2013/12/chuck-wendig-200-word-challenge-week-4.html
December 19, 2013 — 12:00 PM
Lynna Landstreet says:
I love|enjoy|get giggly at seeing the different ways others have carried on with the peculiar syntax I gave the alien’s auto-translator… 🙂
December 25, 2013 — 12:01 AM
kurt bali says:
I thought it was really original and creative. Hope someone finishes out the piece.
December 26, 2013 — 4:48 PM
Gabriella says:
Continuation of JDFitch, Doreen Queen, and John Baughman. So much fun to write 🙂 All about magic and some Telemages and an alternative universe as a side.
http://schreibenundwriting.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/flash-fiction-challenge-200-words-at-a-time-part-four/
December 13, 2013 — 5:55 PM
Kyra Dune says:
Here’s mine. A continuation of Winter Takes All. http://theshadowportal.blogspot.com/2013/12/flash-fiction-challenge_13.html
December 13, 2013 — 6:02 PM
momdude says:
Very nicely done, I like where this is going. A great setup for the big finale next week!
December 13, 2013 — 8:31 PM
Josee De Angelis says:
This is actually http://writeontheworld.wordpress.com/ ‘s contribution. She can’t post it here, for some reason. It’s her part 4 of the story of the lost boy in the grocery store.
http://joseedeangelis.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/part-4-200-words-at-a-time-flash-fiction-challenge/
December 13, 2013 — 7:10 PM
Mozette says:
I typed mine up late, late last night… well okay, just past midnight! I couldn’t sleep and so found one I loved and jumped in the deep end, sleep-deprived and got my mojo workin’… just like I did in the old days. And I paid dearly for it too… got to sleep at 2am after tossing and turning for 2 hours. :/
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2013/12/a-gifted-wizard-part-4.html
December 13, 2013 — 7:33 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
I claim this one to finish up with Part 5! Not until sometime next week, though.
December 19, 2013 — 12:05 PM
Joanna Horrocks says:
I took over “Unpredictable Magic,” started by JD Fitch and continued by Doreen Queen and Paul Baughman. Great fun – a novice mage, an accidental cake, and a surprise. Parts 1-4 are here:
http://joannahorrocks.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/flash-fiction-challenge-week-four/
December 14, 2013 — 12:39 AM
Paul Baughman says:
Oh, man! You got her out of trouble after all that work I went through! 🙂
Nice going.
December 14, 2013 — 3:23 PM
Joanna Horrocks says:
I dunno – is she really out of trouble? Guess we’ll have to wait ’til week 5 to find out…
December 14, 2013 — 3:29 PM
Paul Baughman says:
My part four of the Woods/linderan/Loomis mobsters and zombies story.
http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/14/fiction-jersey-city-of-the-dead-part-4-of-5/
December 14, 2013 — 3:21 PM
Josh Loomis says:
I may break a finger hanging from this cliff. Nice work!
December 16, 2013 — 9:01 AM
Paul Baughman says:
My part four of the Fatma Alici/Athena/Ely thread of the galactic mercs story.
http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/14/fiction-untitled-part-4-of-5-galactic-mercs/
December 14, 2013 — 4:09 PM
Ely says:
Very nice! I love that you continued the back-n-forth. It has a flow to it. Of course, I may be biased 😉
December 20, 2013 — 11:39 AM
jeffwroteit says:
Part four of “Going Home”, Part 1 by Shane Vaughn, part 2 by Paul Them, part 3 by Joyce Juzwik… Thank you all for a great 600 words to work with.
http://jeffwroteit.wordpress.com/2013/12/14/terribleminds-flash-fiction-going-home/
December 14, 2013 — 7:57 PM
Paul says:
I love it, Jeff! Thanks for adding to it!!
December 15, 2013 — 11:22 PM
Joyce Juzwik says:
Jeff, Thanks for carrying this forward. I love what you’ve done with it, adding yet another dark layer to this eerie mystery. Hope this makes it to the end!
December 17, 2013 — 6:31 PM
jeffwroteit says:
Thanks – I would like to see it finished as well. What will it take for John to rest eternally?
December 18, 2013 — 8:20 AM
Aaron says:
Part four of the untitled story about demon summoning by Meagan Wilson, Wanderer, and Danger Dean.
http://aaronswordtree.blogspot.com/2013/12/200-words-at-time-part-four.html
December 14, 2013 — 8:03 PM
Smoph says:
Damn, I was teasing the possibilities out with this one. 🙂
You got in there first with a great addition. 🙂
December 15, 2013 — 1:04 AM
Paul Baughman says:
Can’t wait to see how Stewart faces the ultimate challenge! In fact…for the big finale…MINE!
December 16, 2013 — 7:37 AM
Smoph says:
I did one too. Yours actually sparked it, but it wouldn’t leave me alone!
http://prose.smoph.org/2013/12/20/best-laid-plans/
December 21, 2013 — 12:31 AM
Adrienne says:
Part four, still untitled. From Mildred, Dean, J, and now myself. Take it, name it, finish it (please!). 🙂
http://thepaddedcastle.wordpress.com/2013/12/15/challenge-part-four-200-more/
December 15, 2013 — 8:17 AM
j says:
Excellent. Thank you.
December 20, 2013 — 12:13 PM
Renee Elizabeths says:
I continued the story started by Liz Neering (https://www.goodreads.com/author_blog_posts/5294833-200-words-at-a-time) and continued by Andrea Speed (http://andreaspeed.com/2013/flash-fic-challenge-round-robin-part-2/) and Kyra Dune (http://theshadowportal.blogspot.com/2013/12/flash-fiction-challenge.html).
Here’s my contribution: http://reneeelizabeths.blogspot.com/2013/12/flash-fiction-200-words-at-time-part_15.html
December 15, 2013 — 8:58 AM
Renee Elizabeths says:
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December 15, 2013 — 9:07 AM
Renee Elizabeths says:
Sorry about this random non-comment. Had a little keyboard+curious toddler incident this morning and now I can’t figure out how to delete it. At least she only managed this, rather than switching the language to Chinese or turning the screen upside-down or something.
December 15, 2013 — 9:10 AM
Samantha Gluck says:
My 16 yr old son, Iain, added to HPetterson’s contribution (HPetterson had added to Ely’s additions). It’s his very first time writing flash fiction in a public setting and with (I’m assuming) adults. He doesn’t have a blog, so I posted it onto mine.
Please check it out and let us know if we did anything wrong. I’m a journalist and NOT a fiction writer. LOL
http://www.freelancewritingdreams.com/flash-fiction-challenge-part-iv-by-iain-mackenzie/
December 15, 2013 — 1:58 PM
C. E. Coburn says:
I did the same on as well (comment below) nice job!
December 15, 2013 — 3:54 PM
hpetterson says:
Great Job Lain…I posted on your home page. Well done. Ready for another? Cheers Hank.
December 18, 2013 — 5:03 AM
C. E. Coburn says:
So this story is continued from Ely (Round 1) and HPETTERSON (Round 2). I brought the word count up to 600, who’s ready to do the next 200?
http://charlotteecoburn.wordpress.com/2013/12/15/220/
December 15, 2013 — 3:07 PM
Iain Mackenzie says:
I really liked your interpretation and the imagery you used. I put a comment on your site. Thanks for your nice words above. Iain.
December 15, 2013 — 5:11 PM
C. E. Coburn says:
Awesome, thank you!
December 16, 2013 — 1:41 AM
hpetterson says:
Great continuation…really well done. Now go find another you’re on a roll. Cheers Hank
December 18, 2013 — 5:01 AM
C. E. Coburn says:
Indeed! Thank you.
December 18, 2013 — 5:26 AM
Ely says:
Hey, thanks for giving this story some love guys! It has branched out in some pretty awesome ways.
December 20, 2013 — 11:13 AM
feralbulb says:
Howdy 2: sorry, meant to put part 4 here not where put earlier: http://feralbulb.wordpress.com/blurb-4/
December 15, 2013 — 3:16 PM
feralbulb says:
…200 words after those of Emmy Jackson’s, Andrew Linder’s and Michael Woods’.
December 16, 2013 — 9:48 AM
boydstun215 says:
Randomly chose another story. I can’t wait to see how someone ends this.
A world-renowned professor with either a secret or a trick of his sleeve visits a class to show them “the next level of human evolution” with his mysterious black box. He seems to take a particular interest in Alice. A smart girl, but a bit of an outsider . . .
The first 200 by Dave Kearney: http://scenesandsequels.wordpress.com/2013/11/26/chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge-200-words-at-a-time-part-one/
The next 200 by Rebecca B.: http://girlbooksblog.wordpress.com/2013/12/06/200-200-words-onto-words-a-flash-fiction-challenge/
The third installment by http://decayingorbits.wordpress.com/
My fourth installment, which takes this up to just past 900 words, can be found here: http://jeremiahboydstun.com/2013/12/16/200-words-part-iv-121513/
December 15, 2013 — 10:54 PM
Rebecca Burgeson says:
*cheers* This is awesome – am loving this story
December 16, 2013 — 8:19 PM
deanmcsmith says:
200 words added to the most enjoyable Gangster/Zombie piece created by the unholy trio of Linder, Jackson and Wood.
http://pilcrowsandcedillas.wordpress.com/2013/12/16/chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge-part-4/
December 16, 2013 — 8:04 AM
Josh Loomis says:
Carrying on the creepy horror started by De Angelis, Neering & Crump. http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2013/12/16/flash-fiction/
December 16, 2013 — 9:00 AM
David Wilson says:
I continued the Fair Folks Favor
http://pastebin.com/qiV4MKpE
http://erinmjustice.com/2013/12/14/flash-fiction-challenge-the-fair-folks-favor/
December 16, 2013 — 1:26 PM
Justice says:
I like it 🙂
December 19, 2013 — 9:44 PM
Greg says:
Looks like my link to my continue waitron of Kate Baker’s start didn’t post this morning …. Here it is again just in case…
http://deadwoodstories.blogspot.com/2013/12/further-continuation-of-kate-bakers.html
December 16, 2013 — 5:46 PM
hpetterson says:
Very nice continuation and addition. Really added depth and potential.
December 18, 2013 — 4:59 AM
Jon Jefferson says:
This took a strange turn…
http://jonjeffersonauthor.wordpress.com/2013/12/16/lost-in-the-lecture-hall/
December 16, 2013 — 7:48 PM
Rebecca Burgeson says:
A strange but intriguing turn
December 16, 2013 — 8:43 PM
Jon Jefferson says:
It’s the lecture hall. You never know what might happen.
December 16, 2013 — 10:08 PM
Meagan Wilson says:
I’ve added 200 words and a title to this story by murgatroid98, LC Hu, and Jeremy Podolski.
A stench, a scrap of silk, and a sword. What’s next?
http://burntgraphite.net/fiction3
December 17, 2013 — 11:57 AM
murgatroid98 says:
Oh my gosh, and there is only one more addition. I’ve been hoping someone would tell us what was in the garage. Great job.
December 17, 2013 — 6:45 PM
Simon B. says:
I had to miss part three as the day job got a bit hectic (thanks for getting born around now, Jesus) but will be throwing in another 200 or so this week. I feel the need to make up for my absence.
I’ll even be so bold as to tout myself as a pen-for-hire; if there’s anyone with a chunk of story waiting to be added to from the last three parts, add a comment below this and I’ll do my best to bring you a step forward.
As a side note, I love that there are so many of us surprised by the places our own words take us.
December 17, 2013 — 3:16 PM
Mike Young says:
Simon started, my friend Joyce did a part 2 for this, I added 3, into a darker direction. I have some ideas for it, but would like to see where someone would take it next http://www.ravensview.ca/ravens/2013/12/a-family-affair.html
December 17, 2013 — 11:18 PM
Smoph says:
Simon, I’d really love to see the story Threads of Time from last week continued. Nitromidget started it, I added. It’s only up to 400. Love to see it as a possibility for this week’s round.
http://prose.smoph.org/2013/12/06/threads-of-time-part-ii/
December 18, 2013 — 9:25 PM
Simon B. says:
Here you go. I’ve added a few humble words to the story, bringing us up to a very open-ended 597:
http://probablyfalse.tumblr.com/post/70515952322/threads-of-time-part-iii
Time for someone else to pick up the mantle!
December 19, 2013 — 3:54 PM
Smoph says:
Simon, this is great! I really enjoyed your addition, adding to the mysticism.
December 19, 2013 — 10:59 PM
Courtney Cantrell says:
Thanks, Simon! If the offer still stands, the story that I started for Part 1 is only up to 400 words. I’d love to see it go a bit further! http://courtcan.com/writing/new-flash-fiction-challenge-200-words/
December 19, 2013 — 10:10 AM
Simon B. says:
I really enjoyed reading and contributing to this story. The two of you managed to pack an incredible amount of atmosphere into such a small space.
Here is my part:
http://probablyfalse.tumblr.com/post/70531846356/house-of-memory-part-iii
December 19, 2013 — 6:54 PM
Renee Elizabeths says:
Oh, yay! I thought this one was going to get left behind. I love where you went with it. Thanks!
December 19, 2013 — 7:02 PM
Smoph says:
Decorum be damned is a great line.
December 19, 2013 — 11:02 PM
Courtney Cantrell says:
Thanks, Simon! I love your addition. And Smoph is right, that last line is excellent. I hope somebody picks this up for Parts 4 & 5. I wanna know what happens!
December 21, 2013 — 1:02 AM
Fatma Alici says:
Okay the story started by Megan, picked up the Wanderer, then Dave Kearney. And the last part by me.
It’s called Stewart, and there’s demons.
http://naharavensari.wordpress.com/2013/12/17/200-words-at-a-time-part-4/
December 17, 2013 — 9:45 PM
conniecockrell says:
OK, Since hpetterson did the 2nd 200 (ely did the first 200), I decided to keep the story on track and did the next 400. It’s up to date for the next person to finish. It still doesn’t have a title so the last person can name it. Here’s the link. It’ll be active 0300 Friday morning. http://wp.me/p2AyuM-g9
December 18, 2013 — 12:00 AM
C. E. Coburn says:
I added to this one as well (comment above) if you’re interested in checking it out. Nice work.
http://charlotteecoburn.wordpress.com/
December 18, 2013 — 1:39 AM
hpetterson says:
Couldn’t find the story. But I am excited to read it. Cheers Hank.
December 18, 2013 — 5:12 AM
Ely says:
Hm. Second reference to Hemingway in one story by two separate authors…that’s kind of cool! I’m interested to see what cost must be payed to keep his life…
Nicely done.
December 20, 2013 — 11:11 AM
Courtney Cantrell says:
I picked “Millions of Cats” by Rebecca Douglass, Connie Cockrell, and Andy Decker. My continuation of the story is here: http://courtcan.com/writing/flash-fiction-challenge-continuing-someone-elses-story-part-4/
December 18, 2013 — 12:24 AM
Courtney Cantrell says:
P.S. I’m enjoying the whole flash fic challenge, but this story has been the most fun for me so far.
CATS!
such laugh
very fic
so pun
wow
(Sorry, couldn’t help myself. 😉 No DogeSpeak in the story, I promise!)
December 18, 2013 — 12:31 AM
Paul Baughman says:
Oh, my! I can’t wait to see how this turns out!
December 18, 2013 — 7:23 AM
Paul Baughman says:
Oh my! I can’t wait to see how this turns out. Very nicely done.
December 18, 2013 — 7:24 AM
Courtney Cantrell says:
Thank you, Paul! Glad you enjoyed. : )
December 19, 2013 — 9:43 AM
davekearney75 says:
Here’s Part 4 of an intriguing and eerie little piece started by Adrienne and continued brilliantly by j and Smoph. No title yet. Enjoy!
http://scenesandsequels.wordpress.com/2013/12/18/flash-fiction-challenge-part-4/
December 18, 2013 — 5:28 AM
Joyce Juzwik says:
Dave, I love what you’ve done with this. You’ve opened it up to quite a number of possible endings. I had picked this one up too. It was just too good to pass up.
December 18, 2013 — 10:49 PM
Wanderer says:
Here’s part 4 of Shane, Courtney, and Adrienne’s “Cold” http://secondstaronther.wordpress.com/2013/12/18/1000-word-story-in-v-parts-part-iv/
December 18, 2013 — 2:16 PM
Courtney Cantrell says:
And the mystery deepens! This vampire is getting more and more intriguing. Thanks for the great addition, Wanderer!
December 19, 2013 — 10:03 AM
Wanderer says:
Thanks for all the good stuff to go on, Courtney!
December 26, 2013 — 6:40 PM
Shane Vaughan says:
Excellent stuff, Wanderer!
December 22, 2013 — 6:50 PM
Wanderer says:
Thanks Shane! It was a fun one to continue.
December 26, 2013 — 6:33 PM
Kirsten Bruce says:
I have continued “A Real Live Corpse” Started by Ken Crump and added to by Mandy Webster and Joanna Horrocks. My addition can be found here:
http://benteight.tumblr.com/post/70443811277/week-4-of-the-flash-fiction-challenge
December 18, 2013 — 8:38 PM
Joanna Horrocks says:
Damn…the plot does twist nicely! I’ll love seeing how this plays out at the end. 🙂
December 18, 2013 — 8:58 PM
Joyce Juzwik says:
I also had picked up the dark untitled piece begun by Adrienne, continued by j, continued by Smoph and now, by me. It’s up to 803 words now, and I hope to see an ending written for Part 5. No telling where this one could go!
December 18, 2013 — 10:37 PM
Joyce Juzwik says:
Well, it’s not going anywhere if I forget to post the link! Sorry about that. Here it is.
http://jfjuzwik.blogspot.com/2013/12/terrible-minds-flash-fiction-challenge_18.html
December 18, 2013 — 10:39 PM
Smoph says:
I feel their desperation now. I am looking forward to seeing the wrap-up.
December 19, 2013 — 10:57 PM
Wanderer says:
I’m taking this one for part V—really enjoyed the build up!
December 27, 2013 — 12:08 AM