Last week’s challenge: Spin the Wheel of Conflict.
I’m writing a serial right now, a story called “The Forever Endeavor” (read the first part for free at Tor.com), and one of the tricks with writing a serial is getting people invested enough to read the second part. And thus one might embrace the art of the cliffhanger — in pulp terms, the protagonist or another character is dangling over the edge of the cliff. Their fate, certified by doom. And then the next chapter reveals how they got out of such a sticky wicket.
You dangle them from the cliff. You save them from the cliff.
Doom? Salvation.
Question? Answer.
That’s the barebones idea, of course — cliffhangers can have way more nuance, and can be more emotional than physical, too. The end of a marriage! The pull of a trigger! The press of a forbidden button! The goal of the cliffhanger is to walk the audience right up to the edge of uncertainty and then leave them there, jaw dropped, unsure what could come next. It’s a sharp shock — and the only medicine is to read to the next chapter.
I wanna play with that idea, here.
Here’s what you’re going to do:
You’re going to write an unfinished story.
Around 1000 words that leads to a cliffhanger of some kind.
Then, next week, we’ll pick up in part two —
Where someone else may write the end of your story.
You’re writing, in a sense, to entice another writer to want to complete the second half of your tale. To answer the cliffhanger, to be the one who saves the day, solves the mystery.
Like I said: ~1000 words.
Post at your online space. Link back here so we can read it.
Due by next Friday, 9/27, by noon EST.
Mozette says:
Ooooooh….. me likes! 😀
September 20, 2013 — 7:16 AM
charly says:
Sounds like fun.
September 20, 2013 — 7:34 AM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
I love this prompt.
999-word cliffhanger. Totally cheated. I hope this link works as it has a superscript number in it.
http://mrurbanspaceman.wordpress.com/2013/09/20/trouble%C2%B3-flash-fiction-piece/
September 20, 2013 — 7:48 AM
Ilia Minary says:
Very nice, I like it!
September 20, 2013 — 9:48 AM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
Thanks very much, Ilia!
September 20, 2013 — 2:17 PM
Smoph says:
I liked your descriptions and the way the story ended.
September 30, 2013 — 1:53 AM
crow365 says:
Uhh…Chuck? FYI: the link to last week’s FFC goes to an article at The Atlantic.
September 20, 2013 — 8:12 AM
terribleminds says:
NUH UH
…
er, not anymore, at least.
September 20, 2013 — 1:08 PM
crow365 says:
The changes to the time-stream have been effective then? I knew that whole 1.21 gigawatts threshold wouldn’t be an issue.
September 21, 2013 — 11:51 AM
Mark Gardner says:
Cliff hangers? I prefer my hangers to be made of metal, not cliff.
September 20, 2013 — 11:43 AM
Mark Gardner says:
Here’s a first-person past-tense limited perspective cliff-hanger. It weighs in at 1,006 words. It was difficult to write and I have an idea on how it should end, but I pretty much dare anyone to finish it!
http://article94.blogspot.com/2013/09/cooperative-cliffhanger-part-one.html
September 20, 2013 — 12:18 PM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
Seemed like a little bit of an info dump at the beginning, but I can see why you had to do it that way. The ending was a nice surprise, and chock full of suspense. I’m hoping somebody picks this up next week!
September 20, 2013 — 3:18 PM
Mark Gardner says:
Well I had to make it difficult for someone to finish it!
September 24, 2013 — 4:13 PM
joeturner87 says:
Not finishing stories is my forte, I must not get started right away
September 20, 2013 — 12:11 PM
Smoph says:
-chortle-
September 25, 2013 — 8:22 PM
S.W. Sondheimer says:
I present: The Underwear Chose That Moment to Fall Out of the Sky
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=1717&action=edit
September 20, 2013 — 3:23 PM
S.W. Sondheimer says:
OH SUGAR!
That link will be bad unless you have my password. Which I hope you don’t.
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/2013/09/20/flash-fiction-9-20-13-you-hang-from-that-cliff/
Apologies
September 20, 2013 — 3:25 PM
David Coventry (@DWCoventry) says:
Diiiiiiiiiiiibs
September 20, 2013 — 7:43 PM
Sophia Betti says:
I was getting ready to do this on my own until I saw this awesome post. It’s a bit under 1000 words.
http://sophiabetti.com/2013/09/20/flash-fiction-friday-part-1/
September 20, 2013 — 4:16 PM
Caitlin says:
I love this! would love to take a stab at continuing it…if you don’t mind? hope I can do it justice cuz it’s an awesome beginning! 😀
September 23, 2013 — 2:51 PM
Sophia Betti says:
Sure, go for it!
September 27, 2013 — 2:21 PM
Jessica says:
This… this will be a challenge. I like it.
September 20, 2013 — 4:21 PM
Jessica says:
About 800 words.
http://anunperfectlife.wordpress.com/2013/09/24/flash-fiction-cliffhanger-part-i/
September 24, 2013 — 7:17 PM
Tom says:
http://fictionwritingfiction.blogspot.com/2013/09/cliffhanger.html
A little short.
September 20, 2013 — 11:20 PM
Mozette says:
Okay… I wrote this at my volunteer work, and tweaked it when I got home. 😀
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2013/09/stolen.html
Enjoy! 😀
September 21, 2013 — 12:18 AM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
Ooh, very ominous! Some nice bits of descriptive writing in there, too. I might pick this one up myself, if nothing else grabs my attention before next week. 🙂
September 21, 2013 — 4:27 AM
Mozette says:
Hey thanks! I think I channelled Meg from Supernatural in this one. 😛
September 21, 2013 — 8:11 AM
Caitlin says:
Here’s my entry. http://arrawyn.wix.com/caitlinmccoll#!blog/ckky
I look forward to people’s thoughts and hope someone continues it! I added a blog to my new website just so I could take part in this challenge! LOL (I had been debating about a blog but this sealed the deal cuz I couldn’t pass it up!)
September 21, 2013 — 12:56 AM
jodilee says:
I’d love a go at this! Fantastic opening, by the way… 🙂
September 23, 2013 — 12:14 PM
Caitlin says:
awesome! i look forward to where you take it! 🙂 and thanks, I quite liked it too 😀
September 23, 2013 — 1:08 PM
Joyce Juzwik says:
This is great. I wasn’t sure how to comment on your blog. It isn’t just what occurred that causes the tremendous fear, it’s the unanswered questions. Is the event over yet? If it does continue, will Lia be in the middle of it? Then, of course, what was going on with her there toward the end? Lots of questions. I will look forward to answers!
September 26, 2013 — 8:54 PM
Caitlin says:
Hi Joyce! Thank you so much! oh, hmmm I’ll have to figure out how to put comments on my blog! and those are great questions you raised, and i’m curious how it’ll turn out myself by the person who is going to finish it! 😉 i had fun writing it, and i have those questions myself!
September 27, 2013 — 12:35 PM
Johan says:
http://lorentzord.wordpress.com/2013/09/23/balls/
I wrote this one quite fast, maybe a bit too late at night. So, if you’re into balls, heat and mutilation, this might be right up your alley. Please enjoy.
September 22, 2013 — 9:50 PM
jreinmiller says:
And here’s my cliffhanger. I think it’s pretty cliffhanger-ish. Without an actual cliff. Or is there? You’ll have to read it to find out.
http://www.jqpdx.com/2013/09/23/the-highway/
September 22, 2013 — 10:08 PM
Mozette says:
I like the way this one is headed – um… sorry about the pun. 😛 But I’d like to continue on with it. So, I’ll have a go at ‘Highway’ for this week. 😀
September 23, 2013 — 8:20 AM
jreinmiller says:
Glad you liked it. 🙂 If anyone does use it next week, besides being very flattered, I’ll be interested to see where it goes.
September 23, 2013 — 6:52 PM
Jon Jefferson says:
Here we go with this weeks installment.
http://jonjeffersonauthor.wordpress.com/2013/09/23/the-storms-of-life/
September 23, 2013 — 11:52 AM
jodilee says:
Posted this week, looking forward to reading today, too!
http://jodilee.sacredtriskele.net/?p=2813
September 23, 2013 — 11:58 AM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
After a minor break in morale or disciplin I have returned with this undone tale of a small stag party going very wrong. It weighs in at 1030 words.
http://www.trinetoftschmidt.com/2013/09/the-return-of-the-lazy-flash-fictioner/
September 23, 2013 — 4:06 PM
jeffandwendy says:
Here’s my contribution to the pile. Simon and Box. Enjoy!
http://jeffandwendy.wordpress.com/2013/09/23/simon-and-the-box/
September 23, 2013 — 6:33 PM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
I really liked your story, and, maybe I’ve got a continuation in mind.
September 29, 2013 — 11:43 PM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
I’ve continued Simon and the Box here:
http://www.trinetoftschmidt.com/2013/10/flash-fiction-the-cooperative-cliffhanger-part-2/
October 4, 2013 — 6:56 AM
Jackie says:
Well, here we go…
Fragile:
https://littleatmospheres.wordpress.com/2013/09/23/fragile-flash-fiction-challenge-the-cooperative-cliffhanger-part-one/
September 23, 2013 — 9:56 PM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
I love this story, the build-up is amazing, the use of the heart beat to drive the action is just genius. I almost felt like I was trapped in a nightmare, the sound booming around me.
September 29, 2013 — 9:14 AM
Jackie says:
Why, thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
September 30, 2013 — 8:43 PM
margitsage says:
I’d like to try writing the ending to this one.
October 1, 2013 — 5:16 PM
Jackie says:
Can’t wait to read it!
October 1, 2013 — 9:50 PM
Francesca Carrillo says:
Here we go:
That Hello Kitty Promo
September 24, 2013 — 12:56 AM
Joyce Juzwik says:
Slick stuff. A nice, dark and nasty slice of what really could occur. Can’t wait to see how this one turns out!
September 27, 2013 — 9:50 PM
margitsage says:
I loved this. I see upcoming chaos.
October 1, 2013 — 3:50 PM
Fatma Alici says:
This was kind of fun. Took me a bit to get into the idea of not finishing the story. That was really weird for me.
My Life for Your Life
http://naharavensari.wordpress.com/2013/09/24/my-life-you/
September 24, 2013 — 11:49 AM
Josh Loomis says:
Let’s see what happens in this cave at the bottom of the sea.
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2013/09/24/flash-fiction-the-cave-at-the-bottom-of-the-sea/
September 24, 2013 — 11:58 AM
Smoph says:
Nightmare stuff, that ending.
September 30, 2013 — 2:21 AM
thesexiestwriter says:
My submission is later than usual, but, you know, life and stuff…and all….and everything…and stuff.
The Great Escape?
http://criticalsexualmass.wordpress.com/
September 24, 2013 — 10:17 PM
Sam Barnett says:
This feels a bit light in the words this week, but here it is anyway.
Hello World
http://wp.me/p2ZsXX-aX
September 25, 2013 — 11:30 AM
Joyce Juzwik says:
Choices, choices… How about a bit of Lights, Camera… Hope you enjoy.
http://jfjuzwik.blogspot.com/2013/09/chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge.html
September 25, 2013 — 8:16 PM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
Uhhh this is dark… I was holding my breath for Clyde’s decision… which of course isn’t forthcoming… I hope someone will finish your story Joyce.
September 29, 2013 — 2:49 PM
Rob Sadler says:
I’d love to see someone finish this, because the thought of finishing it myself scares me. Feedback greatly appreciated, as always. Here’s “My Son.”
http://www.andablankpage.com/my-son/
September 25, 2013 — 10:02 PM
Mark Gardner says:
I figured I would post here as well. I picked up Rob’s Story and continued it:
http://article94.blogspot.com/2013/09/cooperative-cliffhanger-part-two.html
September 27, 2013 — 12:21 PM
Robert Sadler says:
I’m so glad you liked the story enough to want to finish it. I guess I shouldn’t say “finish” since you expanded the story and left it with another cliffhanger (which I think was awesome). I saw the story of Martin having global consequences and was happy to see you go in that direction. Great job, it would be really cool to see someone pick up your cliffhanger. Thanks again.
September 27, 2013 — 4:58 PM
Joyce Juzwik says:
For some reason, my comment wouldn’t go through on your blog, so I’ll post it here.
Absolutely amazing. This is one that must be finished and I”m so glad I don’t have to wait to get back into it. Who, or what, is Martin and what happened to him? Who are THEY? What was the message? Loved it.
September 27, 2013 — 11:04 PM
Rob Sadler says:
Thanks so much, I’m happy you enjoyed it and found Martin to be an intriguing mystery. It’s definetly a challenge for anyone looking to continue the story. Be sure to check out Mark’s sequel at http://article94.blogspot.com/2013/09/cooperative-cliffhanger-part-two.html.
PS: Your comment didn’t go through because my blog thought it was spam. I approved it, so it’s on there now. Thanks again!
September 28, 2013 — 7:27 AM
Tony Taylor says:
I was up for this challenge. Thanks for keeping us motivated!!!! I’m calling this one – “Shadows From Thelema”.
http://taylormaderandomwrites.blogspot.com/2013/09/flash-fiction-challenge-cliffhanger.html
September 26, 2013 — 8:14 AM
LTurner says:
I have a number ways I could finish this one, some would be too nasty for normal people. Thanks for the prompt challenge, it was harder than I thought to come up with an idea and then to cliff hang it.
http://everydaywritingisessential.blogspot.com/2013/09/the-price-of-knowledge.html
September 26, 2013 — 2:18 PM
David Coventry (@DWCoventry) says:
Spaghetti Western + zombies. Also decided to get this project rolling as a collaborative tale over at Storium. Because why not?
http://dwcoventry.com/blog/2013/9/26/flash-fiction-challenge-cliffhanger
September 26, 2013 — 3:52 PM
momdude says:
OK, David, I like it! It’s bizarre, a suitably bent mashup, so I’ll give a shot at finishing it.
October 3, 2013 — 9:33 PM
Jemima Pett says:
I wrote the first thing that sprang into my head… and then carried on writing. Link will be live in an hour. I give you: Girl on a Ledge 🙂
http://jemimapett.com/2013/09/27/flash-fiction-friday-girl-on-a-ledge/
September 26, 2013 — 6:09 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
I have to claim this one, since you made me the protagonist 😀 Though there are one or two others I might have to do as well.
Meanwhile, mine goes live in about 3 hours or something. Hard to compromise between wanting to share here and wanting it to be my Friday post. Gorg the Troll is back, and he’s in trouble!
http://www.ninjalibrarian.com/2013/09/flash-fiction-friday-cliffhanger.html
September 26, 2013 — 8:14 PM
Jemima Pett says:
I think I’d better rescue Gorg for you!
September 27, 2013 — 2:10 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
Great! I’ve made a first stab at getting Rebecca out of trouble. Or into more trouble. . .
September 30, 2013 — 1:33 PM
Jemima Pett says:
I must admit, I’ve just been busy with the blog tour!
September 30, 2013 — 1:51 PM
margitsage says:
“A Whisper” A story of death and the aftermath… or is it? http://margitsage.com/blog/2013/09/26/whisper-fridayflash/
September 26, 2013 — 7:07 PM
Smoph says:
I really enjoyed this, particularly the ending.
You probably have already seen the comment, but I’d love to give your second half a go. 🙂
September 30, 2013 — 6:46 PM
margitsage says:
Certainly! I’d love to see what you come up with. 🙂
October 1, 2013 — 3:30 PM
margitsage says:
I look forward to seeing where you go with it! 🙂
October 1, 2013 — 11:08 PM
Kathleen Magner says:
Here’s mine: The Witch Doctor http://kathleenmagner.wordpress.com/other-inspirations/the-witch-doctor/ Hope you enjoy.
September 26, 2013 — 10:17 PM
Smoph says:
I liked that you left the next part really open.
September 30, 2013 — 1:44 AM
momdude says:
What situation would most make me stuck in a cliffhanger? As always, comments and constructive criticisms are welcome. “Midair”
http://wp.me/p3tdUw-lZ
September 27, 2013 — 3:00 AM
Rebecca Douglass says:
Wow, that’s a good one! Hard act to follow, though. I certainly don’t know enough about flying to try, unless it took a turn to SF. . .
September 27, 2013 — 1:12 PM
momdude says:
Thanks, Rebecca! I was thinking that the “next chapter” could go a couple of ways. Our pilot might see that there was a kid’s hay ride or something occupying the field where he was seconds away from landing… Or he could just see some obstacle, such as cattle or a fence, that would mean he was losing his bet on gliding into an open field… Or it could go to the wormhole opening up in front of him…
On the other hand, he could remember that his airplane has an emergency parachute system – which that model does, but in over half of the serious crashes with that model the parachute is never deployed.
September 27, 2013 — 6:34 PM
momdude says:
Rebecca, FYI, no one picked my story to finish this week and I had folks asking “What happened next?”, so I finished it myself.
http://wp.me/p3tdUw-ng
October 5, 2013 — 3:11 AM
Joyce Juzwik says:
I left a comment on your site, but it hasn’t shown up yet. This is terrific. Genuine tension and suspense right from the start and then…? Grand finish to this part of the piece. No telling where it could go from there.
September 28, 2013 — 10:41 AM
momdude says:
Thanks, Joyce!
September 28, 2013 — 10:49 AM
momdude says:
Joyce, FYI, no one picked my story to finish this week and I had folks asking “What happened next?”, so I finished it myself.
http://wp.me/p3tdUw-ng
October 5, 2013 — 3:11 AM
al says:
Here’s mine! Give her a go if she sounds like your kind of thing:
http://mahoganyandink.blogspot.com/2013/09/cliffhanger-challenge-setup.html
September 27, 2013 — 8:18 AM
Smoph says:
I’ve had a struggle with this one and I am late, late, late.
But here is Homecoming http://prose.smoph.org/2013/09/28/homecoming/
September 28, 2013 — 3:16 AM
Jenny says:
Q. What will Nurse Kenny tell his patient about his….ahem, emasculating condition?
A. You decide!
I give you “Super Moon” (Super late, but super fun!) – anyhow enjoy and finish with a part II if you’d like! Thanks!
https://medusapoppins.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=26&action=edit&message=6&postpost=v2
September 30, 2013 — 2:32 PM
Jenny says:
Oops. Lemme try that again:)
http://medusapoppins.wordpress.com/2013/09/30/super-moon/
September 30, 2013 — 4:23 PM