Last week’s challenge: The Color Title Challenge
This week?
Both easy and difficult, I think.
I want your 1000-word story to be all action.
Now, that action could be: gunplay, karate kicking, fighting, running, car chasing.
In other words, the standard “action movie fare.”
Or: it could be fucking. Or cooking. Or arm-wrestling.
Or some other notable action characters would undertake.
The trick is: make it exciting. From start to finish.
And — and! — make it a complete story.
Beginning, middle, ending.
Get to writing.
You’ve got 1000 words.
You’ve got seven days.
You’ve got your own blog to post to, and the comments to link it in.
Get writing, word-nerds.
81 responses to “Flash Fiction Challenge: And, Action!”
This is almost a historical piece. Almost.
Not realize am a internet nerd as of writing. Started from Ottmar’s twitter! Ach ja.
Hope this works, enjoy 🙂Off the menu
Should have said, its a vampire kind of story, loved writing it and planning a sequel. Yay.
Very exciting piece. Need to check your typos though. Might affect your word count!
THanks for reading. Those typos are tricksy, I edit and edit again but they still get through. Grrr, I’d fire my beta reader if she wasn’t so gorgeous (and my wife) 🙂
Brutal. Awesome. Good character journey. Wonder how a similar situation would go down here in Oz (no/few guns). Last armed hold up in a pub here, they drove them off by throwing bottles of Jack Daniels at them haha
Speaking as someone who had the BEST past of his childhood in Leederville, Perth I reckon they’d take a stubby and….well you get where I’m going with this.
Haha I read ya. Or a longneck, if they were really ticked off…
Haha, or a longneck if they’re really ticked off. Could just go all Alf Stewart on them: “I’LL BITE YOUR FACE, C#$T” lol
I used to visit Perth every week or so for work. Beautiful place, if a bit quiet. Freo was fun too
Wow this was really good, hope you do write the sequel
Am writing it as we speak.
The action worked for me. Really liked it that the cute, little waitress had some grit. The vampires were a little slow for vamps, but the protagonist’s voice was right on.
Thanks for the thoughts Judith. I get what you mean by the speed, I did flirt with them flitting, but my wordcount went through the roof and I’m a bit over as it is. I’m glad you liked the waitress, it was my favorite bit in the story.
She was a nice surprise. I didn’t expect it–always fun.
Good one. Only real wish is that I knew more about the POV character, felt a bit unsure who ‘I’ was. Still enjoyed it!
This is an exercise I desperately need.
This was tough. Here’s “Bull Rush.”
http://pavorisms.wordpress.com/2014/08/26/bullrush/
Digging the description, especially the injection and the moustache. This story just needed a duck…
The perspective jumps confused me slightly at first, but when I got that’s what we were doing it was cool. Good stuff.
I wrote it all from Taurie’s perspective, then had the thought to rewrite the whole thing from Handlebars’s perspective, and couldn’t commit to either one, so I jumped back and forth. Not 100% sure it works, but glad you were able to follow it.
Here’s the link to my entry! Thanks for the prompt! This challenged me to find some creativity through todays dreariness.
I enjoyed the whole vibe you managed to get into this piece Patrick, nice one. I couldn’t find the link on your reply, so I’ve added one for you Restless should take you straight to Patricks story
Deanmcsmith – Thank you for your compliments, and for linking it directly. I wasn’t sure how to set that up, so I appreciate it. So glad you liked the story!
A 1st person ghost perspective horror story!? Brilliant. Works really well for a short story, though you squeezed a lot in. The strongest part was the start-to-middle, before she busts in there (that said, the ending was great in concept).
Thanks for the compliments, and for reading!
Um… a touching story? I think? Thanks for sharing!
That’s actually the reaction I was going for 🙂 Thanks for reading!
Thanks for getting me writing today. Here’s the link to my entry: BORDERS
Forgot to say that it’s an cross between Sci-Fi and Urban Fantasy
The action was vivid, punchy, unpredictable. The character Mal wasn’t likeable until near the end. Is this an established story world? Digging the magic style
Here’s the link to my entry. Thanks for the prompt, Chuck.
http://percykerry.tumblr.com/post/95531302174/ninas-last-vow
Alright, action time travel. I’ve actually thought about this story idea before, mostly envision it as a movie, but here’s a very abridged version, lol
http://angelacavanaugh.com/2014/08/23/flash-fiction-friday-time-wake/
Here’s the link to mine.
http://ryanjamesblack.wordpress.com/2014/08/23/the-great-ish-escape/
Funny as hell! Loved it! 😀
Nice one, you smashed this!
Hah, brilliant. You kept it nice and simple, made it fast and fun, then the ending… hah! Nice one
Wow! Thanks for the kind words guys! Glad you liked it
Can someone please confirm the link to mine works? I’m a tech idiot and a first time blogger. Thanks
Ryan your link works like a long tailed cat in a chainsaw factory… nice story bro. 🙂
Yep it works! 😀
Nice job- really enjoyed this!
Thanks!
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What a dame! Nice short, and certainly action packed
Well… mine might be a little boring, but I tried out a different take to the prompt. 😀
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2014/08/michelles-daily-movements.html
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This one is dark, a return to form for me, I suppose. https://helenespinosa.wordpress.com/2014/08/24/the-lie/
Here’s a link to mine: https://www.tumblr.com/blog/deathbykeyboard. I know, I know it’s tumblr. This is my second entry ever I think.
This may be a bit of a cheat, as I originally posted it over a year ago, but here goes..
http://isaidwhattowho.wordpress.com/2013/05/07/the-warehouse/
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Like Mat, stuck with a rainy bank holiday Monday….
http://traitorblade.blogspot.co.uk/2014/08/chuck-wendig-flash-fiction-friday-do-or.html
Great range of stories here!
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It’s been a while. There ain’t nothing like it when the gods go at it. http://www.barelyok.com/terrible-minds-flash-fiction-challenge-and-action.html
I’d been mulling over an idea for another writing challenge and this one brought it into focus. The story leans more toward Horror, but is action (running) threaded through with action (killing) and laced with an underlying action (discovering/changing).
Anyway, here it is: http://jessicapwest.wordpress.com/2014/08/27/bad-tastes/
Here’s my attempt. Kinda in the penalty box on word count. And, not sure if this is action-y enough. But it is my attempt this week. It is called “Breaking on the Track.” Warning: violent.
Here it is: http://storedstory.blogspot.com/2014/08/flash-fiction-challenge-breaking-on.html
I immediately dismissed fucking as a viable action scene, therefore I chose fucking as my theme. But that is not action enough! At ~900 words, I present… RE-ENTRY:
http://www.jdstoffel.com/2014/08/flashfiction-re-entry/
And I thought guys didn’t like talking after. 😉 Aside from that good story.
Never judge a spaceship by its heat-shielding panels. (Actually, you probably should do that, just to be safe.)
I hate writing action. But it was fun writing a flying armbar into this:
http://elproedros.tumblr.com/post/96019373266/shooting-guns-and-breaking-arms
Loved it! Have you written more in this world?
Thank you. Originally this was a scene from a short film I was supposed to do, and maybe expand it into a web series. Sorry for the late reply. Still getting the hang of WordPress.
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I took it in a different direction, especially for me. I hope you enjoy it!
http://pauljwillett.com/2014/08/28/flash-fiction-defenders-of-the-universe/
Did a strange flash piece:
http://rlblack.weebly.com/flash-fictionshort-stories.html
Short, but evocative. Good story.
Thanks, Judith. I put it in the wrong place. It was supposed to be under this week’s Flash challenge. Glad you liked it.
I noticed there wasn’t any action, but there was plenty of emotion:)