So, every good story has an argument.
It has more than a point-of-view — it has a point. Maybe it’s one you intend, maybe it’s one that crawls up out of the wet goop that is your unconscious mind. Who knows? Either way, the story exists and the story says something. It’s not an obvious thing. It’s more the plumbing behind the walls than the walls themselves. But it’s there. Whispering its message through the vents.
That’s a story’s theme.
Today, I’m going to give you a theme.
And you’re (duh) gonna write a story using it.
That theme is:
“To fix something, you first must break it.”
That’s it.
You have 1500 words.
Due by: Friday, 9/22, noon EST.
Write it at your online space. Link back here. Etc.
The Writer says:
I went the obscure route —> https://atcrump.com/2017/09/16/father/ <— Enjoy!
September 15, 2017 — 10:04 PM
Mozette says:
creepy… very good.
September 16, 2017 — 11:57 PM
The Writer says:
Thank you. I enjoyed yours as well. Charmingly eerie.
September 17, 2017 — 1:03 AM
Mozette says:
Aaww.. thank you. I always wondered what would happen if a house had this kind of history… 🙂
September 17, 2017 — 11:36 PM
legreene515 says:
Wow, well done. I really liked the atmosphere in this one.
September 18, 2017 — 1:37 PM
The Writer says:
Thank you very much.
September 18, 2017 — 3:47 PM
dougkzeigler says:
REALLY enjoyed that. Brava!
September 20, 2017 — 10:47 AM
The Writer says:
Thank you very much.
September 20, 2017 — 11:29 AM
Mozette says:
https://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2017/09/the-fixer-upper.html
It was something in what Chuck said in his intro about walls and plumbing; and what was behind them that got me writing.
enjoy.
September 15, 2017 — 10:36 PM
legreene515 says:
Great vibe in this story. I love how you wove the theme in.
September 18, 2017 — 3:41 PM
Mozette says:
Aaw.. thank you. I love old houses; and always wondered what would happen if the walls – um, gardens – could talk. 😛
September 18, 2017 — 8:37 PM
dougkzeigler says:
Anyone else want to stay there and carouse with the old tenants? 🙂
September 20, 2017 — 10:54 AM
Mozette says:
With a butler like that? Ummm… nope.
September 21, 2017 — 9:17 AM
StarNinja says:
Turn of the Century dwelling, interior heating and plumbing, DON’T TOUCH THE GARDEN, located right next to the freeway and twenty minutes from downtown, SERIOUSLY THE WALLS HAVE EARS, and a basement.
Yup, sounds like a winner. Sign me up!
I really enjoyed this story, though the perspective of who was in room and who was talking confused me at points. Maybe I just need my caffeine infusion this morning. 😛
September 21, 2017 — 1:21 PM
Mozette says:
Not really ‘don’t touch the garden’… just that the garden didn’t need to be fixed up. It was perfect just the way it was. 🙂
September 21, 2017 — 7:44 PM
Tom Byrne says:
This started off as one thing and ended up as, well, I’m not entirely sure what……..enjoy or endure!
http://tombyr.com/?p=1518
September 17, 2017 — 6:28 PM
dougkzeigler says:
That was OUTSTANDING! Time travel stuff always gets me.
September 20, 2017 — 11:30 AM
Tom Byrne says:
Thanks very much Doug! You’re very kind to say so – glad it wasn’t a complete mess!!
September 22, 2017 — 4:15 AM
legreene515 says:
I’m not sure I’d like to live with Harmony! Also, this maybe didn’t turn out the way I originally intended but I liked the way it went.
https://laurengreenewrites.com/2017/09/18/living-with-harmony/
Enjoy and leave me a remark to tell me what you think!
September 18, 2017 — 1:21 PM
dougkzeigler says:
Tinkering is rarely a good thing. 🙂 Well done, Lauren!
September 20, 2017 — 11:33 AM
legreene515 says:
Thanks Doug! I had fun with this one.
September 20, 2017 — 12:57 PM
HB McCarthy says:
Love this! It didn’t end out how I thought it might.
September 27, 2017 — 9:49 AM
legreene515 says:
Thank you!
September 27, 2017 — 5:26 PM
Sam Brady says:
I hope everyone enjoys this on. Please let me know what you think in the comments!
https://sambrady.wordpress.com/2017/09/19/broken/
September 19, 2017 — 4:06 PM
dougkzeigler says:
Making a clean break I think is something we can all relate to/wish we could have done at one point in our life or another. Really enjoyed this.
September 20, 2017 — 11:38 AM
legreene515 says:
Brilliant. I’ve wanted to do this before. If only it could be as easy as just starting over. This piece really made me think.
September 20, 2017 — 1:23 PM
dougkzeigler says:
Here’s my entry, macabre as it may be: https://scotchfullyyours.wordpress.com/2017/09/19/broken-free/
September 19, 2017 — 10:06 PM
legreene515 says:
Dark, my favorite! Great job. I loved the ending.
September 20, 2017 — 1:06 PM
dougkzeigler says:
Thanks so much! Was hoping the switch wasn’t too much of a leap. 🙂
September 20, 2017 — 1:25 PM
HB McCarthy says:
Well, it’s been a while since I posted one of these, but I really liked the prompt.
https://theawkwardpterodactyl.blogspot.com/2017/09/flash-fiction-friday-challenge-9-15.html
September 21, 2017 — 2:07 AM
legreene515 says:
I loved this. Great job!
September 21, 2017 — 3:12 PM
HB McCarthy says:
Thank you!
September 27, 2017 — 8:44 AM
Vicente L Ruiz says:
Almost late. This was a difficult one; I couldn’t find the right idea to work with. And I don’t think I fully respected the rules.
Some 1300 words of looking into the future with hope: Fix It.
https://medium.com/@VicenteLRuiz/fix-it-f34ad16e4c63
September 21, 2017 — 6:14 PM
Jemima Pett says:
I know I’m very late, but this is mine 🙂 The Cassini Conundrum
http://jemimapett.com/blog/2017/10/06/fridayflash-fiction-cassini-conundrum/
October 5, 2017 — 9:00 AM
Tsara Shelton says:
I know, I know…. don’t look at me like that. “Better late than never,” is a thing and stuff. 😀
https://autismanswersbytsara.blogspot.com/2017/11/short-story-to-be-needed-fiction.html
November 7, 2017 — 12:57 PM