You have given us titles.
You have given us opening lines.
You have given us closing lines.
Now it’s time to pick a batch and write some stories.
The job is easy enough: choose (randomly if you like) a title, an opening line, a closing line, and then write a story with… well, do I need to explain it? Use the title, the opening line, the closing line. C’MON PEOPLE JEEZ.
Length is — well, flash fiction is usually ~1000 words, but let’s forego any kind of length here and say, “Just write the damn story.”
Post at your online space, give us a link.
Due by next Friday, September 8th, noon EST.
Title
- We Never Heard Them Coming
- I Held Your Heart Once
- How To Run While Falling
- Once Hidden, Three Times Found
- Neptune’s Rain Cuts Like Diamonds
- The Empire Of All-Knowing Eyes
- Electric Boy Meets Conductor Girl
- When They Called Her Home
- The Limits Of Our Imperfection
- The Rest Are Your Problem
Opening Line
- “Listen to the goat,” Valerie said, “it will change your life.”
- The pale pink rabbit, some child’s lost toy, blinked at him from the kitchen chair.
- “I told you this was a bad idea!” he shouted.
- Three days without sleep was the least of my worries.
- Some people don’t follow direction very well.
- Martin spread the folders out on the table, “These two.”
- The odd man remained silent, forcing a small, copper box into my hands.
- The bodies were bobbing on the sea, and a raft drifted behind.
- Deep inside the twisting wood, there is a house, in a gully.
- No one had ever bothered to tell her about this part.
Closing Line
- Silence blanketed the meadow.
- We huddled low in the arroyo as wind wailed across the weeping sands.
- She spread her wings and stepped off the cliff.
- They would never know what she had done.
- And that, my son, is how I learned to wrestle alligators.
- And though the light was still blinking in the distance, never again could it harm her.
- She plucked a hair from the severed head, and threaded her needle.
- The children formed a circle, lifted their heads, and watched as the body disappeared into the sky.
- The smoke was blue and grey and smelled like a promise.
- I watched the butterfly escape the spiderweb and I laughed.
The Writer says:
Awesome Challenge –>https://atcrump.com/2017/09/01/how-to-run-while-falling/ <– Enjoy!
Title: How to Run While Falling. Opening Line: "Some people don't follow direction very well." Closing Line: "The smoke was blue and grey and smelled like a promise."
Thanks Chuck.
September 1, 2017 — 2:19 PM
keruin says:
This is wildly creative. I’m so impressed with what you made from the sentences. I like how it’s broken into vignettes but tells such a linear story at the same time.
September 4, 2017 — 6:00 AM
The Writer says:
Thank you very much. 🙂
September 4, 2017 — 6:04 AM
legreene515 says:
I was not expecting the middle part! You write flawed characters well.
September 5, 2017 — 10:20 AM
The Writer says:
Thank you. I’d hoped to surprise people.
September 5, 2017 — 11:37 AM
incognitoscribblings says:
Well, I wasn’t expecting *that*. This was a really well written descent into a kind of social damnation before you offer a glimmer of hope there at the end. Nice work!
September 6, 2017 — 1:32 AM
The Writer says:
Thank you.
September 6, 2017 — 1:36 AM
E.C. Perry says:
This sure made me uncomfortable at times! A very pathetic character that I felt conflicted about feeling sympathetic for. I really enjoyed what you did with the ending. Nicely done!
September 6, 2017 — 6:10 PM
The Writer says:
Thank you very much. It’s always fun when you don’t know who to root for.
September 6, 2017 — 6:36 PM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Title 3. Opened with 4 and closed with 9. I hope you enjoy.
https://outrageousactsofwriting.wordpress.com/2017/09/02/how-to-run-while-falling/
September 1, 2017 — 10:41 PM
keruin says:
Wowser. Love the canter. It’s great that the narrator finds a church, and of course the ending. WELL DONE!
September 4, 2017 — 5:55 AM
legreene515 says:
Great use of the prompts. Dark, and I feel like you could use this as part of a larger story.
September 5, 2017 — 10:32 AM
E.C. Perry says:
Really cool. Definitely feels like it could be expanded into a larger piece. The memory of the mother really grounds the character and the reader amidst all the chaos.
September 6, 2017 — 7:30 PM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Thank you. I enjoyed your storytelling as well. If found your story creepy, elegant and powerful. Just like a spider 🙂 Matricentric in style, which I also liked. I can see your spider/human beings populating a trilogy and maybe spinning a web or two on the big screen!
September 6, 2017 — 8:59 PM
E.C. Perry says:
Thanks! That is a really nice compliment. =)
September 7, 2017 — 5:40 PM
Sam Brady says:
Very cool piece. The imagery was fantastic. A great example of someone we really shouldn’t sympathize with, but we just cant help ourselves.
September 7, 2017 — 10:33 AM
dcxli says:
Title: We Never Heard Them Coming
First Sentence: Deep inside the twisting wood, there is a house, in a gully.
Last sentence: Silence blanketed the meadow.
https://dcxli.wordpress.com/2017/09/02/we-never-heard-them-coming/
As always, feedback welcome!
September 2, 2017 — 3:12 PM
legreene515 says:
I liked what you did in so few words. I’ll leave a comment on your blog.
September 5, 2017 — 12:02 PM
Kathy Moore says:
Loved this. Your words painted a picture.
September 5, 2017 — 10:55 PM
incognitoscribblings says:
There was some good world building going on here, which is even more impressive considering how little space you did it in!
September 6, 2017 — 1:33 AM
dcxli says:
Thank you so much!
September 6, 2017 — 1:43 AM
E.C. Perry says:
This left me with so many questions, but in a good way! Really enjoyed the mood of this piece.
September 6, 2017 — 6:13 PM
Mozette says:
https://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2017/09/the-limits-of-our-imperfection.html
Title: The Limits of Our Imperfections
First Line: No one bothered to tell her about this part.
Last Line: She spread her wings and stepped off the cliff.
a little over 1,000 word mark, sorry about that, chief.
enjoy.
September 2, 2017 — 10:47 PM
legreene515 says:
I left a comment on your blog. I’m still thinking about your piece. There was a lot going on. Well done.
September 5, 2017 — 10:50 AM
Mozette says:
Just read your comment there. Thank you so much for it. I know there was so much in the content of it… and I had no idea where it was going – but isn’t that half the fun of being a writer? Being taken on that journey inside your mind and imagination?
Of course it is. 😀
September 5, 2017 — 11:09 PM
E.C. Perry says:
Really cool world building. The ending really struck me. I really felt for Eve and her sacrifice.
September 6, 2017 — 6:15 PM
Mozette says:
Oh! Thank you so much! I’ve researched Angels and have been watching a lot of ‘Supernatural’ lately… so some of my story came from this too. 🙂
Isn’t it great when two ideas from two totally different things come together? I read this flash fiction to my Mum yesterday, and she loved it. 😀
September 7, 2017 — 7:54 PM
Katherine Anne Hetzel says:
OMIGOSH! No 7 in the closing lines is mine!! It’s the actual closing line of a story written and published three years ago, so I’ll be interested to see how others get to that line in their own stories.
Now looking for a combo I can use for something new…
September 3, 2017 — 1:52 PM
Jellybeenz says:
I loved that closing line so much, I built the story around it.
September 6, 2017 — 4:56 PM
E.C. Perry says:
Agreed!
September 6, 2017 — 7:19 PM
The Urban Spaceman says:
https://theurbanspaceman.net/2017/09/03/when-they-called-her-home-flash-fiction/
Hope nobody minds that I Oxford comma’d my chosen closing line. And yes, comma’d is totally a verb.
This is where three days without sleep gets you, and it isn’t home.
September 3, 2017 — 5:04 PM
keruin says:
Spooky and atmospheric! Fantastic imagery all around. I love the sense that we’re in a larger, longer work but that it stands on its own. The stuff about fallen angels and whatever-you-call-ems is also compelling but not overdone. GREAT!
September 4, 2017 — 11:14 AM
The Urban Spaceman says:
Thanks! I already knew that regardless of the titles/sentences, I was going to write a story about angels this week, so it was fun to make that fit.
September 5, 2017 — 5:54 AM
legreene515 says:
I enjoyed the imagery in this story. Your description of the protagonist jarred me as it was not what I expected so good job on that! It feels like a longer work, and I could see this as part of a bigger story. Well done.
September 5, 2017 — 11:43 AM
Jellybeenz says:
I absolutely love your prose. The narrator was a total badass. “A sword-wielding black woman standing ankle-deep in eviscerated white boys?” And then you turn THAT on its head! Bravo! And by the way, the Oxford comma is every bit as important as properly sealed grout.
September 6, 2017 — 5:06 PM
E.C. Perry says:
I really want to read more about this character! I really enjoyed her voice and was very intrigued by the mythology and events that transpired in the story. Really well done.
September 6, 2017 — 6:20 PM
Sam Brady says:
I think this is my favorite thing I’ve read of yours. Has sort of an American Gods vibe. Good stuff!
September 7, 2017 — 10:43 AM
legreene515 says:
Title # 2, Opening Line # 3, and closing line #9.
https://laurengreenewrites.com/2017/09/02/i-held-your-heart-once/
September 3, 2017 — 8:20 PM
keruin says:
I am sad for the narrator, which is amazing in so few words. The cold is palpable, as is the ridiculous desire to make love in the middle of it. Well done!
September 4, 2017 — 11:16 AM
legreene515 says:
Thank you for reading mine!
September 5, 2017 — 9:32 AM
incognitoscribblings says:
I like the microcosm-like nature of this one. It’s just an experience between two people but says a lot about the narrator’s mindset and the broken relationship/world she finds herself in.
September 6, 2017 — 1:36 AM
legreene515 says:
Thank you. My intention was to have the setting imitate the brokenness of their relationship.
September 6, 2017 — 8:55 AM
E.C. Perry says:
This gave me a melancholy feeling. I really enjoyed the descriptive use of language. I loved the image of “his old face hidden in his new one” and “I tried to blow the blue out of my fingers”. Really nice.
September 6, 2017 — 7:17 PM
legreene515 says:
Thank you for reading. I was going for melancholy.
September 7, 2017 — 11:33 AM
keruin says:
Neptune’s rain…
http://wp.me/p7laFr-ql
Fun! And somehow came out dark. These prompts have a way of plumbing my subconscious mind I think…
September 4, 2017 — 5:47 AM
legreene515 says:
Really dark. I feel sad for your narrator as she’s trying to hold it all together with these people in her life who are falling apart. I loved the Jackie Chan line. Great imagery. I could picture their world.
September 5, 2017 — 9:52 AM
Jellybeenz says:
Well that one hits you with a bit of a gut punch. The way you sketch out the narrator’s sad and stressful life and how he’s just walking the razor’s edge… very cool.
September 6, 2017 — 6:34 PM
E.C. Perry says:
Really enjoyed the imagery and writing style of this piece. I was a little confused at the beginning with Harry but everything started coming together as the story progressed. Cool use of the prompts.
September 6, 2017 — 7:08 PM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Predominantly blue, paralleling your title, yet told with such fervency! I can feel the MC’s desperation lifting from the text. How far will one go to keep a family from sinking? Nice work.
September 4, 2017 — 12:36 PM
keruin says:
Thanks very much for reading!
September 4, 2017 — 12:48 PM
E.C. Perry says:
Title: When They Called Her Home
First Line: No one had ever bothered to tell her about this part.
Last Line: She plucked a hair from the severed head, and threaded her needle.
https://silvenrain.tumblr.com/post/165026203966/when-they-called-her-home
This is the first completed story I’ve ever written. Thanks so much for the challenge and inspiration!
September 5, 2017 — 7:49 PM
Jellybeenz says:
That’s fantastic! Love the imagery. I used the same opening and closing lines with a much different result. It’s so interesting where we go with a prompt.
September 6, 2017 — 7:57 AM
Sam Brady says:
If this was your first story, it’s a great start. Creepy and cool! I really loved the ending. I also have to admit that I laughed when you used the word “carapace”–it’s such an unusual word, and I used it in my story this week as well.
September 7, 2017 — 10:52 AM
E.C. Perry says:
Thank you so much! I’ve never written a short story before, most of my writing before this has been poetry or unfinished work. I usually start out strong but then have trouble finishing things…I think that having the last line helped me to focus on where the story needed to go. This was such a fun challenge. I learned a lot while writing and continue to learn from what other people are doing with the prompts. 🙂
September 7, 2017 — 5:57 PM
Sam Brady says:
Endings are hard. I’m like you–I always start well then sort of fizzle out. This prompt was a good one, I think.
September 7, 2017 — 6:04 PM
Jellybeenz says:
Ummm, first time here. Hello everyone. I hope you enjoy my little story better than my husband did. His take: That’s pretty twisted.
https://jellybeenz64.wordpress.com/a-title-and-two-lines/
September 5, 2017 — 11:23 PM
keruin says:
Yeah, he’s got a point. And well done you! :>
September 6, 2017 — 7:37 AM
legreene515 says:
Wow. Disturbing. I like how you weave the title in. I did that in mine too (same title). Great imagery.
September 6, 2017 — 9:30 AM
Sam Brady says:
I can’t imagine at all why he said that. He’ll be walking soft and looking over his shoulder for the next few days, I’m sure. Good stuff.
September 7, 2017 — 10:56 AM
incognitoscribblings says:
https://incognitoscribblings.tumblr.com/post/165035829730/when-they-called-her-home
The pieces for this one didn’t really fit until the end of the process. Strange how things come together.
September 6, 2017 — 1:30 AM
legreene515 says:
I love this. You create suspense so perfectly. Well done. The prompts work perfectly with the story you created.
September 6, 2017 — 9:42 AM
E.C. Perry says:
Awesome! I really enjoyed reading this. Great build up of tension.
September 6, 2017 — 6:58 PM
Sam Brady says:
Nice and suffocating. It almost felt like a Stephen King jam. Great job!
September 7, 2017 — 10:59 AM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Very much enjoyed your story. Liked how you used the nursery rhyme to set the tone. On it’s own, Mary Mary can be viewed as a religious allegory. You played that well into a psychological thriller context. Unsettling. (in the best way;)
September 6, 2017 — 9:47 AM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Ooooooh, love myself a sharp revenge story! You held my attention from start to finish. Note to hubby: sleep with one eye open 😉
September 6, 2017 — 10:08 AM
Sam Brady says:
755 words, using title 6, first line 2, last line 8. Please to enjoy!
https://sambrady.wordpress.com/2017/09/06/chuck-wendig-the-empire-of-all-knowing-eyes/
September 6, 2017 — 3:31 PM
E.C. Perry says:
How ominous! I love what you did with the prompts. Very original, and the imagery really stuck with me.
September 7, 2017 — 5:36 PM
Vicente L Ruiz says:
Title: The Limits Of Our Imperfection.
Opening line: Martin spread the folders out on the table. “These two.”
Closing line: She spread her wings and stepped off the cliff.
I first chose the closing line as it was my favourite. Then the opening line suggested the plot to me. And the title… well, I chose the one who could at least fit a little.
Around 1000 words.
https://medium.com/@VicenteLRuiz/the-limits-of-our-imperfection-e49d71286478
September 6, 2017 — 7:26 PM
Sam Brady says:
Good story. Makes me want to know more about the world and who the kids really were.
September 7, 2017 — 11:04 AM
Vicente L Ruiz says:
Sorry, things are frantic here and I’ve completely forgotten to check comments these past weeks (and other people’s efforts as weel, shame on me).
Many thanks for your comment, I’m glad it makes you want more (don’t we always seek that?).
September 15, 2017 — 4:54 AM
outrageousactsofwriting says:
Nod to the arachnid lovers out there! Magnificent storytelling.
September 6, 2017 — 8:15 PM
Dirck says:
Title: I Held Your Heart Once
First line: The pale pink rabbit, some lost child’s toy, blinked at him from the kitchen chair.
Last line: Silence blanketed the meadow.
https://dirckwrites.wordpress.com/the-current-story/i-held-your-heart-once/
Not done consciously, but somewhat under 1000 words. Possibly done self-consciously, though, as it’s my first outing here.
September 7, 2017 — 11:13 AM
aliceekeyes says:
https://aliceekeyes.blogspot.com/
The Limits Of Our Imperfection
Deep inside the twisting wood, there is a house, in a gully.
Silence blanketed the meadow.
September 7, 2017 — 11:23 AM
Paul Grignon says:
Hello, Mr. Wendig!
Once again, a wonderful exercise. Glad to participate in this prompt.
I chose:
title: We Never Heard Them Coming
first line: Three days without sleep was the least of my worries
closing line: Silence blanketed the meadow.
paulgrignon.wordpress.com
Comes in a little over 1,200. But close enough. Thank you for providing your legion of fans a chance to indulge their creative spirits in an excellent format.
September 7, 2017 — 11:31 AM
aliceekeyes says:
The Limits Of Our Imperfection
Deep inside the twisting wood, there is a house, in a gully.
Silence blanketed the meadow.
https://aliceekeyes.blogspot.com/
September 7, 2017 — 11:36 AM
mdflyn says:
Title: The Limits Of Our Imperfection
First line: No one had ever bothered to tell her about this part.
Last line: They would never know what she had done.
http://www.mdflyn.com/limits-imperfection-original-flash-fiction/
September 7, 2017 — 3:28 PM
Sam Brady says:
Nice. The story is vaguely sci-fi without being sci-fi at all. That takes a deft touch. This is the title I suggested, so it’s cool to see such a neat take on it.
September 8, 2017 — 10:00 AM
jakashadows says:
https://jakashadows.wordpress.com/2017/09/08/flash-fiction-when-they-called-her-home/
Title: When They Called Her Home
Opening Line: The odd man remained silent, forcing a small, copper box into my hands.
Closing Line: I plucked a hair from the severed head, and threaded my needle.
September 7, 2017 — 8:25 PM
Amber Cotton says:
Hi! So, I didn’t have time to workshop this through other people, but I went through a few drafts. Technically, Chuck said to write the damn story instead of 1,000 words, so mine’s around 1,400. I’d be happy to change any of it.
I Held Your Heart Once
No one had ever bothered to tell her about this part.
Silence blanketed the meadow.
http://www.nicolecthomaswrites.com/blog/i-held-your-heart-once
September 8, 2017 — 12:07 AM
Jana Denardo says:
I chose: Title When They Called Her Home
First Line – Deep inside the twisting wood, there is a house, in a gully.
Second Line – The smoke was blue and grey and smelled like a promise.
https://www.janadenardo.com/2017/09/08/flash-fiction-wh…-called-her-home/
This was great fun. It ended up long at just over 1800 and it could have went a lot longer.
September 8, 2017 — 12:26 AM
Ivy Evelyn Grey (@onauratoujours) says:
here’s the prompts that i ran with!
How to Run While Falling, ft. “No one had ever bothered to tell her about this part,” and “She spread her wings and stepped off the cliff.”
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_YXMqfmIx4Gw8W3IwPuN7XH-TuypzdpbFcVpmGr_PUs/edit?usp=sharing
September 8, 2017 — 3:38 AM
Jemima Pett says:
Since there’s a thousand possibilities there, I went for nos 1, 1, and 1. And strangely, it came in at 1000 on the nose.
We Never Heard Them Coming http://jemimapett.com/blog/2017/09/08/fridayflash-fiction-we-never-heard-them-coming/
September 8, 2017 — 5:21 AM
Magpie_Elle says:
I randomly rolled mine with 3d10, though it ended up rather longer than 1000 (closer to 2500):
https://shadowplaytheatre.wordpress.com/2017/09/08/neptunes-rain-cuts-like-diamonds/
5 – Neptune’s Rain Cuts Like Diamonds
8 – The bodies were bobbing on the sea, and a raft drifted behind.
7 – She plucked a hair from the severed head, and threaded her needle.
September 8, 2017 — 9:34 AM
Sam Brady says:
I liked this a lot. A different sort of world, and very alien. It felt like a retelling of an old myth.
September 8, 2017 — 10:14 AM
jameshowden says:
First-time caller, long-time lurker. Thanks for the excuse to get fictional.
http://jameshowden.com/2017/09/electric-boy-meets-conductor-girl-a-short-story/
September 8, 2017 — 11:51 AM
NV Rivera says:
I missed the deadline – and the word count (I have a toddler crawling all over me!!), but here it is. I’m hoping to get back to edit it later… https://nvrivera.wordpress.com/2017/09/08/flashfiction-how-to-run-while-falling/
September 8, 2017 — 12:15 PM
Modern Authors says:
I’m a little late here, but I’ve finally finished it.
Title: The Empire of All-Knowing Eyes
First Sentence: The pale pink rabbit, some child’s lost toy, blinked at him from the kitchen chair.
Last Sentence: She plucked a hair from the severed head and threaded her needle.
I cheated a little. The last sentence is actually the second-to-last sentence.
Anyway; here it is.
https://modernauthors.org/2017/09/08/the-empire-of-all-knowing-eyes/
September 8, 2017 — 2:09 PM
Kyla says:
Seems like there have been a few first timers on this challenge. Myself included. Somewhat belated, but here goes. Thanks!
https://noiseinthevoid.blogspot.ca/
September 8, 2017 — 5:54 PM
Kyla Mitrovic says:
So its a bit late… I had to build a place to post it and it is not cooperating lol. Hopefully it works this time.
https://noiseinthevoid.blogspot.ca/2017/09/when-they-called-her-home.html
September 8, 2017 — 7:54 PM
Baraka Dorsey says:
First attempt. Be gentle.
June 26, 2020 — 10:42 PM
Baraka Dorsey says:
My first steps: https://medium.com/@dorsey.baraka/we-never-heard-them-coming-932249ac9ea9
June 26, 2020 — 10:49 PM