Apple-Obsessed Author Fella

Pick A Paragraph, Post It, Let The Critique Wash Over You Like A Wave

I’ve been enjoying watching you folks FIGHT FOR MY AMUSEMENT IN COMMENT SECTION BLOODSPORT — er, ahh, I mean, “Critique one another’s work in a constructive way.”

As such, it’s time for that once more.

Take a paragraph from your work in progress (AKA: “WIP”).

Post it in the comment section below.

Then, go and critique someone else’s.

Critique is not meant to be binding. Nor cruel. Be constructive, not destructive.

Go forth, post, critique.