(Last week’s challenge, “Random Photo Story,” says, “Come look at my entries! They’re super!”)
So, maybe you saw an article on io9 yesterday — “10 Writing ‘Rules’ We Wish More Sci-Fi And Fantasy Authors Would Break.” It’s a very cool article. And I pretty much agree with all of it. In fact, BLACKBIRDS (which gets its first official review right here!) features a potentially unsympathetic character (though I love her dearly) and is written entirely in the present tense.
Now, for this challenge, I’m scraping all that away and saying —
Write a piece of flash fiction, 1000 words or less, in the present tense.
Doesn’t matter if it’s sci-fi or fantasy. I’m not asking you to write an unsympathetic character that yet remains compelling (aka livable over likable) — no, that’ll be a separate challenge.
Why do I love the present tense? It feels fast. Urgent. In the moment. It feels like you’re telling a story that’s evolving as the reader reads it as opposed to a story whose events have come and gone.
I am a big fan.
So, do that with your story this week.
Write whatever you want. Whatever genre, whatever character, whatever story.
As long as it’s in the present tense.
Post your stories at your site and drop a link into the comments here so we can come read ’em.
You’ve got a week.
I’ll see you back here on Friday, February 3rd, by noon EST.
Shakespeare says:
Dude, I rewrote my whole first novel, changing the POV from 3rd to 1st person and from past to present tense. Now I pretty much write in present tense–your take on the immediacy of it is right on target.
Thankfully, I mostly write YA, so present tense is pretty well accepted.
If I get to the flash fiction, I’ll comment again. I’m finishing up a novel for ABNA right now… and it has to come first.
January 27, 2012 — 7:05 AM
Albert Berg says:
There’s a rule that says you can’t write in present tense? Really? I’ve never heard that. I mean I’ve noticed that present tense is a little tricky and it may not be right for every story, but a “rule” against it? Color me flabbergasted.
January 27, 2012 — 8:21 AM
Cheryl Anne Gardner says:
Oh wow, I’m the first one. I just put this up over at my Fictionaut page with a link back.
Contemplations on a Romance.
http://www.fictionaut.com/stories/cheryl-anne-gardner/contemplations-on-a-romance
January 27, 2012 — 9:32 AM
Mark says:
Weirdly enough, I find present tense more author-intrusive than past tense. Keeps the reader at arm’s length. There are always exceptions, of course, and dropping into present tense for certain key scenes can be effective and transparent.
January 27, 2012 — 9:45 AM
Mike says:
Cheryl – nicely done story, a blend of present and past tense. I got to the end and had this sneaking suspicion he was burying a body – spooky. Working on mine now.
BTW – Was going to comment on Fictionaut but not a member there.
Mike
January 27, 2012 — 12:50 PM
Darlene Underdahl says:
Awww, man, I’ve been trying to get present tense *out* of my writing. This might set me back…
January 27, 2012 — 1:12 PM
Brady Hardin says:
Hey everyone,
I’m new here, but came across terriblemind.com recently. I wanted to try this out, and I’m also open for constructive criticism. I’m looking forward to reading yours as well.
http://bradyhardin.blogspot.com/2012/01/breath-of-fresh-air.html
January 27, 2012 — 1:15 PM
Mme G says:
Here ya go. Precisely 100 words of immediacy. See if it makes you want to intervene…
Completion
January 27, 2012 — 1:57 PM
Claire says:
Cheating a tiny bit, since I’ve been tinkering with this story for awhile now–but I have been too timid to jump into this challenge in the past and this time I have no excuse. Even made me set up a blog, like I have been threatening to do!
Invisible
http://thisiswhywecanthave.blogspot.com/2012/01/invisible.html
January 27, 2012 — 2:19 PM
Brady Hardin says:
@Mme G, I enjoyed your (very) short story. It creates a lot of mystery and curiosity.
January 27, 2012 — 2:21 PM
Kay says:
I experimented with present tense back around Halloween. I’d never tried it before, but I thought it came out well. Since it fits the criteria, have a look-see!
http://suddenlytheyalldied.com/2011/10/24/final-entry/
January 27, 2012 — 2:36 PM
DL Thurston says:
Been meaning to do one of your weekly challenges. So what the hell, here it goes.
I’m Worried
January 27, 2012 — 3:16 PM
Roh Morgon says:
I wrote my whole first novel, Watcher, in first person present ( as well as a few other pieces).
Maybe I should use an excerpt from that. 1000 words, huh? Let me see what I can come up with…
January 27, 2012 — 6:01 PM
R.J. Keith says:
I make no excuse for the contents of this story. I only point out that it is two in the morning in the UK and I’m half asleep.
I hope you like it, critiques and comments are always welcome and much appreciated.
http://rjkeith.wordpress.com/2012/01/28/drama-queen/
January 27, 2012 — 9:48 PM
Samantha J. Mathis says:
Here’s mine!
http://samanthajmathis.tumblr.com/post/16631086659/motivation
January 28, 2012 — 7:13 AM
Shah Wharton says:
Hello- happy weekend to everyone. I am a new participant – hope this is okay? http://shahwharton.blogspot.com/2012/01/love-in-present-tense-flash-fiction.html
I’ll stop by y’all now. 🙂
January 28, 2012 — 9:06 AM
Travis Newville says:
Ask, and you shall receive.
Dreamer: http://tnewville.blogspot.com
January 28, 2012 — 1:40 PM
Michelle Ann King says:
First meeting of the We Love Present Tense Club RIGHT HERE! :–)
My story: http://michelle-ann-king.blogspot.com/2012/01/flash-fiction-challenge-meltdown.html
January 28, 2012 — 2:00 PM
Shah Wharton says:
Well, I stopped by everyones and there have been some good entries. 🙂
January 28, 2012 — 2:53 PM
Shiri Sondheimer says:
I write pretty much exclusively in present tense and almost always in the first person (the only decent suggestion I got from a now defunct, drama-afflicted, what was I thinking writing group). I love it. I feel it gives me writing a certain edge and really helps me get into the character’s heads.
I’m totally cheating on the challenge this week posting something that was already written and a piece that is actually the first chapter of a longer piece (first version of a novel that I’ve been posting as a serial on my blog). As a stand alone, probably more of a character sketch than a story as such, but what the hell.
And if you like it, there’s PLENTY more.
Also, I’m looking for constructive (CONSTRUCTIVE, people) criticism, so if that’s your bag, hit me.
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/hell-division/chapter-one-jade-farraday/
January 28, 2012 — 2:56 PM
Logan Riley says:
I have no idea if i did this correctly…
but, here’s my story “Street Spirit (Fade Out)” – yes, Radiohead played the whole time while writing- so if you’re up for a bit of violence and street fighting, well, i hope you enjoy!
http://literarybandit.wordpress.com/2012/01/28/street-spirit-fade-out/
January 28, 2012 — 7:23 PM
Eden Mabee says:
I hated this challenge. I hate using present tense most of the time, and rarely enjoy reading it. I think that might be why I felt I HAD to try it. The link is a little further down in the post: http://edenmabee.wordpress.com/photography-and-inspiration/
January 28, 2012 — 7:44 PM
Sparky says:
The stylistic form of Howard (sort of) meets the world of Wendig and his terribleminds contributors in “A Thief in the Night” a story of BlackBloom. Enjoy everyone.
http://sparky29252.blogspot.com/2012/01/thief-in-night.html
January 28, 2012 — 10:29 PM
Jemma says:
Pray you accept products of procrastination.
January 29, 2012 — 4:40 PM
Michael says:
http://innocentsaccidentshints.blogspot.com/2012/01/terrible-minds-challenge-sunday-morning.html
January 29, 2012 — 8:20 PM
Katelyn Lea says:
Present Tense
I loved writing this.
http://kleamidnightdisease.wordpress.com/2012/01/30/flash-fiction-challenge-the-present-tense/
January 30, 2012 — 12:43 AM
Terry Murphy says:
First time participant. Been lurking for a while. This is a story of the near future and lost love.
http://tarredthumbnail.blogspot.com/2012/01/flash-fiction-fallout.html
January 30, 2012 — 1:23 AM
Josh Loomis says:
Some hard sci-fi for y’all to enjoy.
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2012/01/30/flash-fiction-challenge-the-present-tense/
January 30, 2012 — 7:27 AM
Jim Franklin says:
This was definately a tricky challenge for me. I’ve never written in the present tense before, so any constructive criticism would be very welcome.
I also wrote something nice, for a change. Hope you enjoy… ‘Waiting’.
http://www.thezombiechimp.com/2012/01/30/flash-fiction-waiting/
January 30, 2012 — 8:50 AM
Jim Franklin says:
Whoops, sorry for the typo.
January 30, 2012 — 8:56 AM
Paul Scotti says:
Here’s a present tense crime flash fiction. I’m looking forward to any critiques.
http://blahstories.tumblr.com/post/16766195231
January 30, 2012 — 12:43 PM
Nancy Hinchliff says:
My present tense story: http://alekhouse.hubpages.com/hub/It-wasnt-A-Dream
January 30, 2012 — 12:47 PM
Shoshana K. says:
My present tense contribution called “Read for Me”
http://wisdomlivesinsilence.wordpress.com/2012/01/31/flash-fiction-challenge-read-for-me/
January 31, 2012 — 12:18 AM
Shai Norton says:
Wow, I actually got to comment before the trackback showed up. Go me!
Er, I scribbled a thing for this challenge. It’s called “Pieces”.
http://shainorton.com/2012/01/31/piece/
January 31, 2012 — 10:19 PM
Rai says:
I gave it a shot. Sleep deprivation makes your head come up with some CREEPY crap.
http://railenthe.livejournal.com/170798.html#cutid1
February 1, 2012 — 3:23 AM
BJ Kerry says:
My story
http://kerry-mutterings.blogspot.com/
February 1, 2012 — 8:37 AM
Alexa Muir says:
Finally did this and I’m getting a bit concerned my stories end up being so dark… well, better I put it into stories, I guess, than my daily life!
http://awannabewriters.blogspot.com/2012/02/flash-fiction-true-love.html
February 1, 2012 — 4:21 PM
oldestgenxer says:
Present tense? I’m not sure if I did this right.
The Baby Boomer
I couldn’t help sneaking in one of my favorite movie jokes.
February 1, 2012 — 8:33 PM
T.J. Janneff says:
Erm . . . I didn’t cheat?
Okay, maybe a little. It’s actually more NONfiction, but hey, my original entry was too creepy for me to feel comfortable putting up.
. . . yes, Mr. Chuckity-Chuckity-Wood-Chuck-Chuck, I will put up the creepy fic eventually. “Writers write to be read” and all . . .
HERE! http://writerpie.tumblr.com/post/16898081760/the-mistake-of-trusting-in-you
February 1, 2012 — 9:20 PM