This past week I put up a post about some mistakes I see in the stories of new(er) writers, and it’s one of those posts that went further and wider than I expected — and for the most part, the response was pretty positive. But there’s this other effect that happens, and sometimes this effect is revealed in emails or I see it in social media, and the effect is this:
I have discouraged you.
My nonsense has stitched into your soul quilt a BLACK SQUARE OF DOUBT.
That saddens me for a number of reasons.
So, first, let me get out of the way a disclaimer — one I think regular readers here recognize, but one that perhaps those who are new to the terribleminds experience (which sounds like a really weird laser light show) do not know:
I’m full of shit.
Just bubbly with it.
And all kinds of shit, too. Horseshit, bullshit, monkey shit, and all of it gets hosed down with a gurgling spray of hogwash and then slathered over with a gluey coating of PURE SHENANIGANS.
Nothing I say here is true.
It is nearly always my opinion. Okay, sometimes I’m talking about things that are writing “rules,” but even there, the rules can flex or even snap satisfyingly in the hands of a savvy craftsman. In fiction, everything is permitted — all magic is manifest if you’re a wizard of proper talent. Exceptions often make for the finest fiction. (They also, contrarily, comprise the bulk of the worst mistakes. Risk big, and you win huge or lose like a motherfucker, I guess.)
My opinion should be weighed in the hand and brought to the nose like any other opinion. How does it feel? How does it smell? If it feels and smells like a big ol’ pile of bloggerrhea to you, then you need to drop it on the sidewalk, wipe your hands on the nearest businessman, and run.
And now, with that disclaimer out of the way —
Listen, if my posts cause you doubt and discouragement, you’re in some trouble.
I try very hard to mix it up here — when I post about writing, I aim to keep a saucy blend of craft advice, publishing talk, storytelling neepery, inspirational tickles, motivational taint-kicks, and so on. Sometimes it’s so-called tough love, and sometimes it’s a big slobbery sobbing hug. We’re all in this together and that means we all need pep talks. But we’re also all friends, or so I like to think (which is why I am standing in your shrubs right now watching you read this), and that also means sometimes we need to speak truth about the things we’re doing poorly.
Ultimately, what I’m trying to say is, we can all do better.
That’s not just you. That’s me, too. I own that. Every book for me is an opportunity to improve my craft, up my game, and understand something new about the art, the life, the business. I pray to the ashen reliquary of Sweet Saint Fuck that I never become complacent — that I never become one of those authors who refuses to be edited or who thinks their prose-piles don’t stink.
Doubt is an insidious thing. I’ve commented on it many a time. Once you let that demon under your skin, he lives there like a parasite — except instead of leeching your blood, he starts siphoning your confidence. Just as you start to feel good, the worm turns and feeds anew.
And I recognize that posts like mine can contribute to that.
It’s why I suggest that authors are best when they ignore that doubt. Like, I know that’s way easier said than done, but what I mean is: just say fuck it. The doubt is there, and the doubt is a liar demon shitty-pants asshole, so you speak aloud: YOU HAVE NO POWER OVER ME. And then you keep on keeping on. You write. You rewrite. Write. Rewrite. That’s how you beat doubt. By doing. By doing and iterating endlessly to spite your own fear and shame and uncertainty. Because that’s how you gain confidence, really. And instinct. You do a thing enough times, you start to get a sense of it. You start to see its edges, feel its margins. You know the shape. To go with a metaphor I like to use, writing a novel is like running through a dark house — and the more you do it, the more you start to figure out where the furniture is. You learn how not to bump your knees and shins and knock over lamps. In fact, let’s go with the lamp metaphor, too — you start turning on lamps as you go. Click. Click. Click. Let there be light. And doubt cannot abide the light, so it shrinks into the darkness of rooms where you have not yet been.
And by the way, when I say doubt, I don’t mean the normal feelings of uncertainty you get that suggest your work isn’t perfect. Of course it isn’t perfect. What are you, some kind of Word Angel? Disgorging shining gems of prose from your sanctified maw? No, no, I know my writing isn’t perfect, and I know it’ll never be perfect, but I know I can fix it and I get as many chances as I want or need to fix the damn thing to my liking. That’s not doubt. That’s a comfortable, confident awareness of imperfection. That’s a happy understanding that my work sometimes will need a scalpel, sometimes it’ll need a truckload of Juggalos with chainsaws, sometimes it’ll need orbital lasers. I get it. I’m all good with that. You should be, too.
The kind of doubt I’m talking about is that aforementioned demon doubt.
(Note: I consider this separate from depression. For that, read: “The Writer And Depression.”)
Here’s where I get, though, a little mean — or at least uncomfortable — again.
Let me reiterate:
If my posts cause you doubt and discouragement, you’re in some trouble.
Here’s why you’re in trouble:
First, because I’m just trying to help. If general criticisms of unspecified work have you experiencing the shivering shits that you’re not good enough — enough to paralyze you where you sit, fingers poised over the keyboard and never again to dance on those keys — that’s trouble.
Second, because you’re going to get rejected. Rejections will come from agents, editors, and readers in the form of reviews. And those rejections? They’ll be specific to your book. Not my “painting with shotguns” approach to criticism. But they will be very explicitly pointing their critical laser at the exact thing you wrote. And it’ll hurt. It always hurts. I’ve had a dozen-plus books out and… yep, still burns. Even when it’s a rejection you can discard for XYZ reason, you still feel stung by it. And then eventually the sting wears off and you get back to work.
Third, because this is art. Art is made through agitation. Not necessarily unkind agitation, to be clear, and maybe sometimes I drift too far into the realms of unkindness, and if you feel that way, my apologies. (Er, I’m probably gonna keep doing it, though? So, I guess I’m not that sorry? Is that what sorry not sorry means? I GUESS IT DOES.) This shit isn’t easy. It’s not supposed to be easy. You’re not supposed to just write a book and then be like YAY I DID IT SO GOOD YAY and then launch it off into the ocean. That boat has holes in it. That vessel shall sink unceremoniously to the bottom of the drink. Your work needs to be tested. Gone over. Rent asunder and put back together again. As authors and artists, we’re supposed to chew it up, spit it out. We have to let other people kick the tires, rub it on their gums, give it a little slap-and-tickle.
You gotta learn to take criticism.
Sometimes that means taking criticism to heart.
Sometimes that means taking criticism and flinging it over your shoulder.
But it doesn’t mean giving into doubt.
That’s what the demon wants.
And fuck that demon.
You can do this.
No matter what I say.
You won’t do it perfectly.
But you can always make it right.
So go write. And rewrite. And write again.
That’s how you exorcize the demon.
* * *
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But being a white-hat doesn’t always mean you work for the good guys. The would-be cyberspies discover that behind the scenes lurks a sinister NSA program, an artificial intelligence code-named Typhon, that has origins and an evolution both dangerous and disturbing. And if it’s not brought down, will soon be uncontrollable.
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Bob Shattuck says:
I don’t always read you, but when I do . . . it’s good.
August 30, 2015 — 8:17 PM
Lisa L. says:
So, the moral of the story is exorcize your demons, don’t exercise your demons.
August 30, 2015 — 8:18 PM
Kate Wally says:
*searches for ‘like’ button*
Well said.
August 31, 2015 — 7:23 AM
Paul Baxter says:
I exercise my demons. Crack of dawn, I roust them out of their warm comfortable beds and get them moving. Push-ups, jumping jacks, running laps and wind sprints until they collapse, exhausted.
Then I got to work writing while they’re recovering.
Bonus: my demons are looking pretty buff these days.
August 31, 2015 — 10:07 AM
Smoph says:
Well said Lisa.
September 1, 2015 — 10:00 AM
Juli Hoffman says:
I appreciate your bloggerrhea. You inspire me to keep on writing, regardless of what else is going on in my life. Thank you!
August 30, 2015 — 8:29 PM
ms_marianna says:
“..sometimes we need to speak truth about the things we’re doing poorly…”- amen, brother!
August 30, 2015 — 8:38 PM
PD says:
This is one of the reasons I read your blog and buy your books. Fuckery most foul wrapped in a diamond and dog shit encrusted gold bar. You’re solid, El Wendigo, and not only in that squishy get-on-the-treadmill-and-stop-eating-so-much-processed-shit way. The Kick-Ass Writer is still as close to a bible as I get and one day, if I ever decide to stop fucking about and write something worth submitting, it’ll be in large part because of that book, you, and this blog.
August 30, 2015 — 8:50 PM
curleyqueue says:
Agree, agree, a thousand times over!
August 31, 2015 — 9:01 AM
Perrin says:
You may or may not have been part of the _Mage: the Ascension_ RPG at later stages of development, but one of the last books in the line included a reference to how the only Akashic Master left in the U.S., after the Avatar Storm, was “an old bald guy who taught anal-squeezing exercises”. This is based on the life and work of a late and much-lamented fellow named Dr. Glenn J. Morris, whose books frequently include the phrase:
“Keep going. Keep playing. Study on this.”
The idea he was trying to encourage among his students (and anyone crazy enough to read a book titled _Path Notes Of An American Ninja Master”) was that anything worth doing will incorporate struggle, but a genuine, playful love of the subject will help you stick with the practice itself, as well as the necessary time spent in figuring out what others have written about the subject.
And, of course, there’s a signature bit of wisdom from a somewhat older martial artist: “Absorb what is useful. Discard the rest.” Your output, Chuck, is rather voluminous, and not everything you produce is of the same utility to each and every one of your readers. Different penmonkeys will pick up different shiny bits from the pile, and their choices are no slight to either them or you.
What matters more than anything is the fact that you persistently try to help us tear the qualifiers “aspiring” or “not-yet-published” from in front of “author” when we talk about ourselves, and that means much more than any one shiny piece of advice or opinion.
August 30, 2015 — 8:57 PM
Louis Shalako says:
So you weren’t really trying to get me to quit then???
August 30, 2015 — 9:08 PM
kentuckygal50 says:
I had much the same experience with acting. When I started college, I was a “Musical Theatre” major. I was also a complete introvert who could not bring myself to audition. Yeah. Huge problem. I not only failed the end of the year performance appraisal, but spectacularly so. So I changed majors and went into “Business”, which was my mother’s dream for me. I quit college during my sophomore year and spent the next ten years drifting from ‘unworthy’ job to another. I know this because my uncle told me so. Even when I worked in the international department of a local bank, he said, “You can do better than that.” So I went back to college (a different one), majoring in Finance, because that sounds more posh than plain old vanilla “business”.
One afternoon I saw a notice for an audition. I went, figuring, “What the hell, if I don’t get a part, I’ll be no worse off than I am right now. But if I don’t even show up, I’ll always wonder what could have been.” I went. I used a proper British accent (honed from years of obsessive Brit-com watching … and I got a part. For the next 5-6 years, I did about 30 plays. Then I became a mother.
Would this of necessity stop my performing? Not really. Have I been on stage since then? No. Are there opportunities close to home? No – in my area there are more tractors and balers on the road than passenger vehicles. But does this mean I have to let my dream wither? Hell, no! It may not proceed in the manner it once did, I just have to find a new way.
August 30, 2015 — 9:20 PM
Laura J. Quinn says:
See, stories like this give my soul wings.
Thank you! You keep on rocking and I’ll do my best to keep up 😀
August 31, 2015 — 7:46 AM
socalvillaguy says:
Extract wheat from chaff. Got it.
August 30, 2015 — 9:26 PM
Luka-Michaela says:
Yes, criticism sucks but someone’s got to teach it to you. And most people who give it to you are trying to be mean, they’re either doing their jobs or are trying to state an opinion. Because honestly our society is practically made up of people who thinks their opinions over rule everything. So for now I’ll take your criticism of my work that you’re likely to never read, and sob as I re-write my manuscript all over again.
August 30, 2015 — 9:34 PM
Kim William Juastice says:
> I am standing in your shrubs right now watching you read this.
Well dammit Chuck, ring the doorbell and come on in.
We have tarps we can throw over the Nice Furniture.
[This message has not been approved by Lovely Spouse.]
August 30, 2015 — 9:59 PM
kevinlute says:
I took your post to be more of a challenge to improve, rather than a put down or personal criticism. How else will we know what sucks and what doesn’t unless someone tells us?
August 30, 2015 — 10:35 PM
Paul Baxter says:
How will you know unless someone tells you? Over time, YOU’LL know, before anyone else gets to see what you wrote. As Hemingway said, ““The most essential gift for a good writer is a built-in, shock-proof, shit detector. This is the writer’s radar and all great writers have had it.”
Here’s the tricky part, at least for me. There are many people who can line up and tell you your writing sucks. The gift is in finding the ones whose comments give you insight on why or how, and what you might do to fix it. I’ve found the Neil Gaiman quote to be generally true: “Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.”
August 31, 2015 — 10:31 AM
morticia1313 says:
Exactly. Trying to edit your own work is like trying to perform surgery on yourself. One of the writer’s in my writing group had worked on her draft for years but never showed it to anyone. She had a huge problem with her the linear time-line of her book and chapters. Something any reader could have pointed out to her and she could have had a polished draft sooner. Instead, she wrote in a vacuum. Which is fine if you don’t care whether your stuff sees the light of day but if you actually want to try and publish, it’s totally necessary. I appreciate my beta readers because their the ones I’m writing for anyway.
September 6, 2015 — 3:24 PM
ChelseaIRL says:
As one of the newbies that post was intended for, I found I was guilty of one of the sins. My reaction was, “oh, oops!” *awkward fidget* Now I know not to do that, and my writing is improved for it. Thank you!
As for the gentle flowers writing under the heat of your criticism, maybe they’re not built for this. Writing is a craft and an art that incites criticism by its very nature. It’s inherent. If you don’t want a critique meant to help you improve, then never share your writing.
Please DO keep it up, Wendig! It’s much easier to see general criticism on a page and apply as necessary, than it is to hear it from your friend at the weekly critique group. You make it so I appear to know what I’m doing and don’t embarrass myself every week!
August 30, 2015 — 11:13 PM
asuiterclarke says:
Good stuff, Mr. Wendig. You never fail to make me laugh AND think, which is a rare quality for sure.
“My nonsense has stitched into your soul quilt a BLACK SQUARE OF DOUBT” is my new favorite metaphor.
August 31, 2015 — 1:02 AM
the oncoming spork says:
You’re like my old drama teacher, but with more colorful metaphors. Thanks Chuck!
August 31, 2015 — 1:44 AM
Ridley Kemp says:
Until I’m perfect, I’m going to treat stuff like you wrote the other day as constructive criticism. Do not hold your breath on my achieving aforementioned perfection.
August 31, 2015 — 1:49 AM
Helga says:
Don’t change. Don’t water that stuff down, don’t sugar-fucking coat it – please, I beg you. You’re like the cold shower that smacks you awake from a dreary hangover. You are the doc martens kick in the pants our anxiety-ridden, namby pamby asses need! If anyone thinks you are trying to hurt them instead of help them then are the obviously not paying attention. I stand in awe of you and how you come to the screen EVERY damn day and just share. Forget about self-promotion and building a writer’s platform yada-yada which is part of the mix of course…what you do is also brave and selfless because you’re reaching a hand out to help pull our sorry carcasses out of the mire of self-doubt and delusion. Don’t fucking change a thing, just keep doing what you’re doing. We see it. We appreciate it. Thank you.
August 31, 2015 — 2:05 AM
elctrcrngr says:
Well said, Helga, well said.
August 31, 2015 — 10:12 AM
Dale Szewczyk (Sev-Check) says:
I always appreciate what you have to say. And for the most part, I agree with your writer wisdom. Not to mention, you have major experience being successful in writing, so your opinions have weight. You also write good stories. If people get discouraged, they need to either back out of writing or get stubborn and refuse to give up. The big question every writer needs to ask themselves, “How bad do I want this?”
If you want ti bad enough, you will work your butt off for it. You will not give up, no matter what discouragement comes. That’s just the way it is. Are you a writer? How to tell? Well, writers write. Do you want to make a living at writing? Yes? Then you need learn all you can on the craft, and on marketing and publishing. The tools are there. It takes time and massive effort, but if one is a writer, the fate is set. Any of us who can write a decent story can make it if we handle it like a craft. Like a profession.
To quote Denzel Washinton from TRAINING DAY: This is chess, not checkers.
August 31, 2015 — 2:19 AM
glenavailable says:
Training Day (2001) – now there’s a movie!
August 31, 2015 — 4:34 AM
Dale Szewczyk (Sev-Check) says:
Indeed.
September 7, 2015 — 6:32 AM
A Citizen of the World says:
I showed a couple of other novice writers (with whom I am doing mutual alpha reading) your original article re the boo boos that us fledgling novelists commit and our immediate reaction is basically:
*Rueful laughter* or *Sheepish laughter*
Then: “Yeah. We all do that. Now how can we stop falling to those traps?”
You’ve just pointed out the obvious and if we read all that and decided to quit writing then I guess we shouldn’t be undergoing this long journey towards becoming the (hopefully published) writers we hope to become.
Oh and: we love your tough love, Chuck. We know you don’t do it just for kicks but out of genuine intentions to help your fellow writers.
August 31, 2015 — 2:28 AM
glenavailable says:
Next Rocky movie, Chuck gets to write all the inspirational speeches ’cause this one’s a beauty!
Let’s add in also what Christopher said to Pooh, “I am braver than I feel.”
August 31, 2015 — 4:21 AM
Paul Weimer says:
@lisa L I remember an urban fantasy novel involving a man and a succubus (or it would be called that today, it was from the 80s and before that was a genre) that used that exorcise/exercise pair to good effect.
August 31, 2015 — 6:11 AM
Ivy says:
That post was practical, and I liked it a lot for that reason. There is an audience, to be sure, for motivational aphorisms that apply to the writer’s life (“You can do it! Yes you can! Something dreams, something stars”). But sometimes, some days, it gets tedious trawling through that warm fuzzy cyber-maw when I am really only looking for practical guidance.
So, I really like to see writers discussing the nuts and bolts of the craft. It’s not discouraging. And I like the slaps over the wrist; I appreciate the roadmaps. I will read all their books and study their kung-fu with gratitude. Do your drunken master routine whensoever you feel like it, dude. 🙂
August 31, 2015 — 6:44 AM
Sara York says:
Getting up everyday and writing is fucking hard, and it’s the best job in the universe. Your previous blog was spot on. If you can’t take the heat then get out of the kitchen, but remember the kitchen has nice things like coffee, chocolate, and tequila. Winding your way through a story takes time. My first couple of books are absolute shit and will never see the light of day, and I have many books that reviewers think are total shit and never should have seen the light of day. Too bad, tough shit, and get over it. That’s the way to deal with doubt. Knuckle down, grab your coffee or tea and get to work! It may get hot and be hard but if you quit you’ll never improve.
August 31, 2015 — 7:22 AM
T.S.Chanz says:
Could not have come at a better time. You’re previous posts didn’t violently shove me into the dark, moldy, spattered corner of Doubt. Other events awakened my demon from it’s extraordinarily long slumber.
This post at least help me get the muzzle back on the damn thing. Thank you sir for piercing the dark clouds of the start of the week.
Bit much? Dont really care, needed to say it
August 31, 2015 — 7:54 AM
Jo Ann Woodford says:
I’ve been writing for years & have been fortunate to publish a “little!” When I read something of yours I am definitely “lifted” to a better place. So much of what you have said has come true for me. Thing is–I’ve been learning to write fiction while I’ve been writing fiction! It takes practice, practice, practice. It doesn’t happen in 6 months or 1 year. If you’re a writer, you write–sometimes I think I stink. Sometimes I think I’m pretty dang good. Then the next day I think I stink again. It’s called (I think) the writer’s life! THANK YOU.
J. Woodford
August 31, 2015 — 8:19 AM
Jennifer R. Donohue says:
“Listen, if my posts cause you doubt and discouragement, you’re in some trouble.” is what I was thinking even before I got to that part.
EXorCIZE the DeMONs, get that holy water, chop chop! Or pick something else to do.
I enjoy your posts. I don’t always comment (or wade through the other comments)
August 31, 2015 — 8:45 AM
Anthony says:
Your post hit me pretty hard when it came out. Then again, I’d just hit my own cache of doubt after finish the first draft of a story that fought me at every step to not come out. In the end though, I think it helped. It gave some focus to what I was feeling. It gave me things to look for in edits. After a night’s sleep I still had some of the doubt clinging (mostly because I was/am coming up blank on the ‘what next’ part of things) but it was also very helpful.
So many people around us as writers won’t give the full honest truth. We need it. So thanks.
August 31, 2015 — 8:52 AM
todddillard says:
That post kicked my ass and I loved every second of it. Doubt isn’t a nemesis, it’s that friend that stops you from taking off your clothes and dancing on the bar to “Free Bird” at your mom’s college reunion. If you can justify your writing in the face of Doubt, Doubt will say “OK” and move on. If you can’t, Doubt will waggle their eyebrows at you until you get the hint. Sometimes it sucks, and means going back and rewriting/editing, or even rethinking a whole project, or (in my case, a couple times now) dropping whole projects. But that’s part of the learning experience. There might be some naturally talented writers out there, but most of us slog through pages upon pages until we reach the One Manuscript That Works… only to find out we have to do the whole thing again to get to the next one… and the next… and the next…
August 31, 2015 — 9:02 AM
Wendy Christopher says:
Chuck, writers NEED posts like that one you posted, and they NEED writers like you who are going to tell it how it is instead of throwing pretty ‘every-writer-is-a-special-snowflake’ petals on us padawan writers’ heads. Being constantly encouraging and delighted with every potty-deposit might boost our confidence and spur us on… but it won’t protect us from the real-world kick-in-the-balls that’s waiting once we put our work out there for all to see.
About five years ago I posted the first chapter of a w-i-p on one of those online writer’s critique sites. It got five critiques; two that gushed about how great it was, two that pointed out how much work it still needed – and one that was basically some dude who was looking for a chance to crush a newbie writer with his devastating wit and caustic insight (I know now that’s what it was, because every comment was aimed at *me* personally rather than what I’d written – “it’s painfully obvious you are terrible at writing dialogue for men” rather than “the dialogue between these two men doesn’t sound at all realistic”, for example.)
Of all of those five critiques, guess which one I remember the best? Yep. I gave up on that novel and actually stopped writing any novels at all for FIVE YEARS after that, switching back to lyrics instead – a ‘safe’ area I already had a track record in.
I was an idiot. I shouldn’t have let that one guy and his snarky review get to me like that. I should’ve used it to fire me up to make it better, so that later I could come back with a new, stronger version of that chapter and say “in your FACE, Snarky!” (Well, probably not ACTUALLY *say* that to him, but you get the idea…) I’ve learned my lesson now. Heck, I’m a parent now, and if anyone knows how to give a damning review of your skills and overall Cool Level it’s the fruit of your own loins… 😉
Keep on being you, Jedi Master Wendig!
August 31, 2015 — 9:34 AM
Nikki Barnabee/@GargoylePhan says:
Aww, don’t worry, Chuck — I don’t get my doubt from you (I get my laughs & some of my writing knowledge from you). I come from a “Do you want a slice of doubt for dessert? With a dollop of Cool Whip on top?” sort of family, so it’s always been there. Although I did the ‘rejection letters’ thing years ago, these days I post my stuff for free & am dealing with being ignored instead, and finding it tougher than rejection. But I just say, screw it, and write some more. And then, of course, I torture & murder someone in my next story. ;-}
August 31, 2015 — 9:41 AM
Mark Alan Schultz says:
I think some readers misunderstood your rookie mistakes post. Most of these “rookie fumbles” are mistakes that everyone makes, even accomplished authors, when exploring their book or story in the first draft. I think guilt and shame had already set in by the time they reached the “cut stuff and re-fill” part, the beautiful craft stage of writing that differentiates it from such terrifying occupations as stand-up comedy.
It’s hard to know what’s going on in your story when you first write it. Sometimes, to maintain momentum, you have to write 100,000 out of 140,000 words of nothing but stale dialogue, weirdness, and characters flipping emojis at one another as your brain struggles to connect each beat of interest/action to the next. There’s no shame in admitting that what you wrote in that state of ignorance to be bad. It’s okay to telegraph, to not be clear, to go on too long, to have cardboard characters, to throw in too many of them, to try and be the second coming of James Joyce in the middle of a draft. It’s pretty much inevitable, actually. Most human beings are fumbling ignorant dorks deep down in the tender parts of themselves. Especially writers.
That “rookie mistakes” post is, more or less, a very handy editing guide for people not on their 14th book. You could even repackage it in a later blog post as just that.
August 31, 2015 — 9:56 AM
elctrcrngr says:
I have benefited from the advice offered by many authors, editors, and publishers here on this old Internet. At the moment, those who come to mind are Larry Brooks, Delilah S. Dawson, Dan Simmons, and Rachelle Gardner. There are many more. But the two who have helped the most and made the greatest impression on me are Chuck Wendig and K.M. Weiland. Weiland I have always thought of as that really great prof you had in college, the one who took a personal interest in your success and really cared about doing a great job as a teacher. Chuck has been my drill sergeant/high school ball coach, providing instruction, inspiration, and ass-chewing, and always seeming to offer up each at just the right moment and in just the right amount. The fact that both of them(along with all the other folks I’ve listed above) provide all this support for free, taking time from incredibly busy schedules to do so, has been a huge inspiration to me. It is scientific evidence that the writing community counts among its ranks some of the finest human beings on the planet. They keep me striving to suck less today than I did yesterday, and to one day graduate from being one of the newbies to one of the mentors. I sincerely hope that all of them will continue to be here for us, providing safe places to ride our bicycles until it’s time to take off the training wheels. Thanks to all of you, for all you do.
August 31, 2015 — 9:59 AM
Michelle Browne (@SciFiMagpie) says:
Never trust the demon doubt. I’ve spent a few years in the trenches now, with battle scars from publishing, and one of the worst things I ever went through was a batch of negative reviews on GR. Apparently, dropping the word “cunt” under any circumstances means I have to hand in my feminist badge. I almost stopped writing.
I published again, and moved on. I put together a collection of stories from multiple authors, and another, and entered a third collection, then a fourth. I tried working on a story, and had an anxiety attack at the thought of publishing. My writing gathered dust for months. Even my blog had only a few peeps and snippets.
Then, last weekend, I decided to tackle a story I’d been struggling with. I wrote 6K in one day and fired it off to my editors and mentors. Armed with their feedback, I let it sit a week, eagerly read over their critiques, and decided I’d finish the second draft by the end of this week.
The point of this story is: there will always be ups and downs. You may want to put your pen down. You may have to decide that writing needs to be a part-time thing. You may think it’s time to quit, and that you can’t do this. Mental health issues may leave you curled up and whimpering in the bathtub, rocking back and forth under a blanket, unable to verbalize your feelings.
But you CAN do it, oh writers and penmonkeys. You can.
August 31, 2015 — 10:08 AM
Jordan says:
I felt your Rookie Writers Post was one of the Two Best Writing Advice Posts I have read in a year of taking my writing seriously. The other one is here: http://problogservice.com/2015/01/06/12-techniques-improve-writing-2015/
In the past year, I have written two drafts of a novel (starting work on the 3rd Draft tomorrow), and 12 short stories, plus a personal essay. One of the short stories was published in a Feminist Fantasy Magazine, and I wouldn’t have gotten this far if it wasn’t from advice I read here, or heard at writing panels at Origins and SCBWI Conferences, and read in books (one of which being the Kick Ass Writer).
One of the things the Rookie Writers Post mentioned was about introducing too many characters, too quickly. “Well,” I thought, “I’m immune to that.” And then the comments from my Beta Readers started rolling in yesterday. Apparently I introduced too many characters, too quickly.
What I mean to say is: I agreed with everything you said in that post. Even things I hadn’t spent time considering before, I agreed with. I thought, “Yes, I do this, and I need to stop doing this.” Except thinking I was a good enough writer to introduce over 15 characters in 9 scenes. NOPE. I wasn’t good enough, despite the high praise I have gotten from my work from people in high places.
Sometimes, rules are just rules. And for me, I need them told to me straight.
August 31, 2015 — 11:07 AM
Honey Apostos says:
I find that opening that vein, pouring yourself into a story and then hearing nothing at all is much more devastating than criticism. Okay…except for someone yelling, “This sucks!” and then drop kicking your pages down a football field. Yeah. That would be worse.
August 31, 2015 — 11:19 AM
Leslie Aguillard says:
Love the owl photo. And true, just gotta keep going. F___ the devil.
August 31, 2015 — 12:10 PM
melorajohnson says:
The only way to get used to criticism and grow that thick hide is to be criticized. You just have to pick the venue so that what you are getting is useful, at least most of the time.
August 31, 2015 — 2:09 PM
April Moore says:
I found that particular blog post extremely helpful. In fact, I printed it out and I keep it around when I’m writing. I also forwarded the link to my writer’s group and they, too, thought it was friggin’ great. In my experience, I think writers who wallow in discouragement are insecure and take it out on others who are only trying to help.
August 31, 2015 — 2:55 PM
Aimee Ogden says:
The first writing group I ever went to in the town where I live consisted of a literary circle-jerk where everyone praised each (extremely rough) piece of work to the high heavens and then complained about how no “mainstream publishers” appreciated their particular genius properly. Of course it’s important to support other writers, but “support” can’t be taken to mean “continually blow smoke up the asses of”. Confidence is a great goal, but not when you build it by putting your hands over your ears and yelling LA LA LA every time a serious discussion about writing comes your way …
August 31, 2015 — 5:09 PM
Kaylin Tristano (@KaylinTristano) says:
Thanks, Chuck – I definitely needed to hear this at this particular point in time!
August 31, 2015 — 6:03 PM
pwodoom says:
I think the problem is the fact you did not charge for the advise. If you wrote the same thing in one of your writing books everyone would nod their heads, and say money well spent.
No one complains when a golf or tennis pro tells you what you do wrong. Large corporations pay outside companies to come in and fix issues. These fixers poll the employees as to what is wrong and then tell the CEOs what they found, later the company will enact the changes the employees have been suggesting for years.
So just change the title of your post next time. $100.00 writing consultation for FREE. Then all you will here is, “Man Chuck your advise was spot on, and you saved me some cash.”
August 31, 2015 — 7:31 PM
Shane says:
The Broadway show called “[title of show]” has a song called, “Die Vampire,” that is about this topic. Wonderful inspirational song.
August 31, 2015 — 10:31 PM
Elliot Andrews says:
This applies to life outside of writing, too. I think the only way to get past it is to just take the jump. Do something a bit risky and uncomfortable! Yeah, you might skin your knees, but so what? After failing a few times, you realize that failing isn’t so bad after all. And then, you get better.
August 31, 2015 — 10:48 PM
Wordsmith Magic says:
Wait! Wait, wait wait! I’ve already saved your last blog in my forever file. Meaning, I will read it again and again, ad nauseam. Therefore, many of us, your readers, took it as it was meant (free advice is…well, you know) and plan to mine it for all the little nuggets of wisdom it is worth. Which is ALWAYS subjective. Thank you for writing it, sir. Don’t worry. We get it.
August 31, 2015 — 11:09 PM
Laura W. says:
I’m sure it was well-meant. I know I found it useful. I also skipped it and saved it for later when I first saw it because I was in a doubtful head-space. But I came back to it once I felt more up to criticism. I have a problem where I drop everything and start to edit halfway through a draft, so I can’t read posts like that one at certain times because I’ll get the urge to stop everything and FIX IT FIX THE THING NOW. But man are those posts so useful for rewrites!!! Don’t stop writing them!
September 1, 2015 — 1:03 AM
Moira says:
Chuck it’s not you, it’s the F******* agents who ask for a full MS and then don’t get back to me. It’s the B***** agents who don’t even acknowledge receipt with an automated email. It’s reading a well received published book that is full of grammatical errors and/or historical inaccuracies. That’s what it is!
September 1, 2015 — 7:34 AM
Tark Hall says:
We’ve become a society of wussies. What happened to us?? We need criticism if we can let it drive us. I have lived in China for many years. Parents especially blast their children here for failing to meet whatever standard they set, it’s negative reinforcement. They don’t sugar coat anything, the kids get blasted and I see them cry their eyes out. But guess what, they buckle down and get the job done. So yeah, hit us with your best shot. We ought to take it like men and women. The world is not a marshmallow. Like Darwin said: “Only the strongest survive.” Come on Chuck! Is that the best you got??? And thanks sir!!!
September 1, 2015 — 8:09 AM