So many stories begin with a dead body.
A dead body is a gateway to mystery.
A story to be solved.
The aftermath of incident that leads to further incident.
It works across a variety of genres, a plethora of storytelling styles.
Dead bodies: they do a story good.
AND SO, today’s flash fiction is precisely that — I want you to take your story and it must begin with a dead body. That’s it. That’s the only stipulation. In the first paragraph you must introduce a dead body. Doesn’t matter the context or the genre. But you gotta check that box marked
[ ] DEAD BODY.
You get 1000 words, as usual. Due by the 19th, at noon EST. Post the story at your online space, then drop a link in the comments below so we can all go check it out.
Begin.
Mark Gardner says:
I hope we get some good horror stories from this!
June 12, 2015 — 1:09 PM
Pavowski says:
The really fun ones will be the non-horror ones…
June 12, 2015 — 1:30 PM
Mark Gardner says:
I tried to follow your suggestion after seeing a beautiful illustration by Julie Dillon on twitter.
http://article94.wordpress.com/2015/06/12/the-burning-seas/
June 12, 2015 — 3:39 PM
Diedra Black says:
Nice! I like how you left some things unanswered.
June 12, 2015 — 6:03 PM
Mark Gardner says:
Thanks, Diedra. Maybe someone will like it enough to continue it.
June 12, 2015 — 6:04 PM
Ebonstorm says:
You do know, you don’t HAVE to stop. You don’t have to tease us with a story that was about to get good and then see the counter and say “Well, that’s a thousand and I’m out. See ya.” I’m coming back in a week for the rest of my story and I don’t have to tell you what ‘s gonna happen if I don’t get it, right? This is a nice website you have here. It be a shame if anything were to happen to it…YaknowhatImean?” 🙂 Nice work fella, you made me get all Brooklyn on ya.
June 12, 2015 — 7:36 PM
Mark Gardner says:
Okay, I did another one: https://article94.wordpress.com/2015/06/12/the-shielding-tide/
June 12, 2015 — 9:53 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
I like the ‘light of joy’ concept — nicely done. You definitely should keep on going!
June 16, 2015 — 3:36 PM
Mark Gardner says:
I’ve posted four chapters do far. I hope you checked ’em all out!
June 16, 2015 — 3:37 PM
Fred G. Yost says:
Well done. I saw the artwork on twitter well before I read this story, and had the itch of an idea myself. Alas, it amounted to little, but what you’ve done with it so far is great.
June 17, 2015 — 6:10 PM
Mark Gardner says:
Thanks, Fred. I’m gonna work on the story more this weekend.
June 17, 2015 — 6:13 PM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Liked this challenge. My short and not-so-sweet offering ‘The Final Straw’ is at https://kimberleycooperblog.wordpress.com/blog/
June 12, 2015 — 1:30 PM
Ebonstorm says:
Demonstrating that thin line between love and hate? Couldn’t you have let him off with a warning…
June 12, 2015 — 7:00 PM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Nope. Where would be the fun in that?
June 13, 2015 — 2:55 AM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Nope. Where would the fun be in that?!
June 13, 2015 — 2:57 AM
JJ says:
“Oh, I’d better ring and cancel the caterer. I can use the flowers though, they’ll be handy for the funeral.” HAHAHA good one!
June 13, 2015 — 12:20 PM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Thank you!
June 15, 2015 — 1:14 PM
thedebc says:
Loved the surprise ending!
June 15, 2015 — 11:48 PM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Thanks Debbie!
June 16, 2015 — 2:22 AM
Catastrophe Jones says:
HAH! 😀 Cracked me right up.
Also put me in mind of the play “Trifles”
June 16, 2015 — 3:38 PM
kimberleycooperblog says:
Thank you. I must go and find Trifles now, I’m intrigued …
June 16, 2015 — 3:39 PM
ashleyakagaoan says:
I hope to be participating! Have around 400 words so far. Thanks Chuck!
June 12, 2015 — 2:07 PM
Sophie Renee' says:
I love that this challenge came the morning after a zombie dream. Yes, I know, zombies are a little overdone right now, but I don’t care. Had fun.
https://lifeinmyshoesandsometimesout.wordpress.com/2015/06/12/corpse-flash-fiction-challenge-1st-draft/
June 12, 2015 — 3:09 PM
Ebonstorm says:
Nothing like those “track-star” zombies. Why do people want fast zombies? Weren’t the slow ones terrifying enough? Or maybe I was just assuming they were fast and the protagonist got distracted…
June 12, 2015 — 7:23 PM
Sophie Renee' says:
Not sure why my phone won’t let me reply, or it might be delayed. Who knows.
Anyway, they weren’t fast. The one that bit in the end wasn’t the one chasing. Also, running from the chaser one was through the forest on bare feet. That’d slow anyone down. Then there’s slowing down from exhaustion. So no, I never considered them fast. I prefer “shamblers” myself.
June 12, 2015 — 8:13 PM
thedebc says:
Can never get too much zombie!
Your story cracked me up. The flip-flops lol ! Super !
June 15, 2015 — 11:55 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
I absolutely LOVE this line: “Fireworks would go off and they’d become a rainless storm.”
June 16, 2015 — 3:40 PM
Carolyn Paul Branch says:
This is my first time to try one of your challenges. ‘Death of a Regular’ is told from the point of view of a hard working woman who cleans other people’s houses for a living. http://carolynpaulbranch.com/?p=1715
June 12, 2015 — 3:10 PM
SamKD says:
Hope you do other challenges as I liked this one quite a bit!
June 15, 2015 — 8:41 AM
Carolyn Paul Branch says:
Thanks! It was so much fun, I’m sure I will!
June 15, 2015 — 8:13 PM
thedebc says:
Simply put: excellent job.
🙂
June 16, 2015 — 12:03 AM
Catastrophe Jones says:
I absolutely love this. I hate butter pecan, but I love this!
June 17, 2015 — 7:35 AM
Fred G. Yost says:
Excellent. This was a much more down to earth approach than I was expecting. Engaging and well written.
June 17, 2015 — 6:19 PM
thesexiestwriter says:
Dead HUMAN body?
June 12, 2015 — 3:28 PM
C_N_Martin says:
He didn’t specify.
June 12, 2015 — 3:49 PM
Fatma Alici says:
Dead bodies and leads to aliens? Yeah, not sure why i went there.
http://www.fatmaalici.com/2015/06/12/flash-fiction-madness-and-genius/
June 12, 2015 — 4:44 PM
Ebonstorm says:
I like this. The perfect mix of answering questions, without explaining anything at all. Everyone’s motivations feel real and viable in context. Where is the rest? I must have more…
June 12, 2015 — 7:26 PM
SamKD says:
I agree with Ebonstorm; it does read like the enticing beginning of a bigger work.
June 15, 2015 — 8:54 AM
Fred G. Yost says:
I’ve always considered writing to be a porthole carved into another universe. This is quite the interesting opening you’ve created.
June 17, 2015 — 6:25 PM
thedebc says:
Same difference lol … good job!
June 17, 2015 — 7:12 PM
Fatma Alici says:
Sometimes it does feel that way. Though, it kind of terrifies me, cause if these people are real, I would not like me very much at all.
June 18, 2015 — 1:39 AM
Diedra Black says:
Geez, you guys are so fast. I always plod through trying to come up with characters and a believable plot. It takes me half the week to even start writing.
June 12, 2015 — 5:53 PM
Ebonstorm says:
A RESPONSE FROM VOYAGER
Humanity was a savage apex predator on his world, but in the galaxy, we had no idea what savagery was done in the name of commerce: https://medium.com/@ebonstorm/a-response-from-voyager-71fa5d51a3a9
June 12, 2015 — 6:57 PM
Diedra Black says:
Oh, wow! I loved this story. You’ve got all the background we need and a compelling character arc all crammed into those few words.
June 13, 2015 — 8:22 AM
Ebonstorm says:
Thank you, Diedra. I have always wondered if we should have pointed where we live in space. When that fear gets too strong, I write something like this and I am reminded our alien visitors might be as terrifying as we are…
June 13, 2015 — 9:03 PM
Anna says:
I liked this too, especially the ending:)
June 14, 2015 — 2:52 PM
SamKD says:
Agree–tightly written good creepy-tech stuff here.
June 15, 2015 — 8:59 AM
C R Smith says:
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story.
June 16, 2015 — 12:07 AM
Ebonstorm says:
Thank you. It was a bit dark, but I enjoyed the basic premise.
June 16, 2015 — 12:50 PM
Ebonstorm says:
Demonstrating that thin line between love and hate? Couldn’t you have let him off with a warning…
June 12, 2015 — 6:59 PM
Carolyn Branch says:
How am I ever going to sleep with those pictures in my mind?
June 15, 2015 — 11:19 PM
Kristin Mireles (@kristinmireles) says:
I just gave myself the creeps. I don’t recommend reading this while eating.
Some Things, Once Smelled, Can Never Be Unsmelled
http://mireles-musings.blogspot.com/2015/06/some-things-once-smelled-can-never-be.html
June 12, 2015 — 8:46 PM
Periodically Demented says:
I really enjoy your stories, particularly the thinly-veiled contempt for the pretentious and also for a good dose of descriptive grossness. The cockroach and the spider were nice touches.
June 15, 2015 — 9:33 PM
Kristin Mireles (@kristinmireles) says:
Thanks! I had a real visceral response to those. I wondered if I went too far, but in this day and age, it takes a lot to shock people.
June 18, 2015 — 7:39 PM
pandoravengenz says:
I’ve been a Chuck Wendig lurker for a while. I finally broke down and made a WordPress account to start participating!
https://pandoravengenz.wordpress.com/2015/06/13/death/
June 12, 2015 — 8:53 PM
C.M. Simpson says:
Here you’all go – one dark fantasy. Thanks for the spark, Chuck 🙂
Link: http://cmsimpson.blogspot.com.au/2015/06/free-read-forest-connections.html
June 12, 2015 — 11:12 PM
Mozette says:
Here you guys go… I love doing revenge pieces; and this one is wonderfully evil. 😀
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2015/06/revenge-is-best-served-crazy.html
June 13, 2015 — 1:52 AM
JQ Davis says:
this isn’t exactly what I planned, but I did keep it to 1000 words.
https://thatsalotofhats.wordpress.com/2015/06/13/the-contract-flash-fiction/
June 13, 2015 — 4:12 AM
Anna says:
I liked it. Cool concept!
June 14, 2015 — 3:06 PM
JQ Davis says:
Thanks!
June 15, 2015 — 3:35 AM
Mozette says:
I can see this one going into a bigger story… 😀
June 17, 2015 — 12:10 AM
Periodically Demented says:
Werewolves.
https://p33d33.wordpress.com/2015/06/13/romulus-rhemus-a-chuck-wendig-dead-body-challenge
June 13, 2015 — 5:29 AM
Periodically Demented says:
Zombie Apocalypse.
https://p33d33.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/it-wont-stay-dead-a-chuck-wendig-dead-body-challenge-mkii
June 13, 2015 — 10:08 AM
lazellecronje says:
Some awesome writing going on here! Here’s mine 🙂 https://zafanwriting.wordpress.com/2015/06/13/beach-house-murder/
June 13, 2015 — 8:29 AM
Carolyn Paul Branch says:
Love this challenge! I posted mine yesterday but it didn’t show up. Trying again. http://carolynpaulbranch.com/?p=1715
June 13, 2015 — 12:51 PM
crow365 says:
I’d already had an idea for a short piece, so this didn’t take too long (thankfully). “For a Glittering Gem”: http://nickegelhoff.com/2015/06/13/flash-fiction-challenge-the-dead-body/
June 13, 2015 — 2:10 PM
SamKD says:
Got my idea early but time to pour it through the keyboard is lacking.
June 13, 2015 — 4:52 PM
juliegum says:
Thank for the fun!
https://juliegum.wordpress.com/chuck-wendig-fiction-hazard-no-2/
June 13, 2015 — 10:09 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Alliterative titles are totally terrific! 😀
Thanks for sharing — I liked the creepfactor!
June 17, 2015 — 8:45 AM
juliegum says:
Thank you!
June 18, 2015 — 4:40 AM
dmcclure17 says:
First one of these I’ve ever done. This was a great writing exercise. Thanks Chuck!
https://dmcclure17.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/the-dead-body-a-wendig-flash-fiction-challenge/
June 13, 2015 — 10:16 PM
Agent Corsair (@KosmoATD) says:
The Wlecome by A. T. Dainty – urban fantasy. I’d love to hear your comments!
https://medium.com/@kosmopoliteatd/welcome-e978da31d43f
June 13, 2015 — 10:33 PM
Agent Corsair (@KosmoATD) says:
That should be ‘Welcome’ – so embarrassing!
June 13, 2015 — 10:37 PM
Ebonstorm says:
I liked this piece. It had a smooth familiarity, like something I read before, yet I was able to keep reading eager to absorb new information about this person and her world. I’d happily read more of this…Thanks for sharing.
June 16, 2015 — 1:09 PM
C R Smith says:
I really enjoyed this. The little I know about this eldest vampire who shows a semblance of compassion makes me want to know more. Great tale
June 16, 2015 — 9:28 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Leona is awesome; I like her no-nonsense attitude.
June 17, 2015 — 8:44 AM
thedebc says:
Nothing like a good vampire story! I really liked this one and I thought it was clever that the “top-dogs” were Counts! Lol
June 18, 2015 — 7:46 AM
W.R.Gingell says:
I was just passing when I saw the prompt, and I knew right away what I wanted to do with it. Here you go:
http://wrgingell.com/2015/06/14/dead-man-walking-chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge/
Now I’m off to check out all the others! They sound fantastic!
June 14, 2015 — 7:51 AM
Carolyn Paul Branch says:
Cool – you manage to be creepy and funny at the same time!
June 15, 2015 — 8:24 PM
Ebonstorm says:
Darkly humorous. Your familiarity with dialogue is evident in the excellent patter between the protagonists. I would be curious to see what became of our difficult-to-kill protagonists. This is the second story I’ve read with the Strangely Dead. But I still liked it. Thanks for sharing.
June 16, 2015 — 1:14 PM
Nancy Hunter says:
I regularly read the flash fiction stories, but this is the first time I’ve written one. It’s called Death: A Love Story.
http://www.nancyhunterbooks.com/short-fiction.html
June 14, 2015 — 2:15 PM
Carolyn Paul Branch says:
Nancy, your story is so sad. I wanted shake some sense into that girl.
June 15, 2015 — 8:29 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Well shit — for a first time (even not for a first time!) this is pretty awesome. You did damn good work here — so terribly sad, especially considering the way Shawna knows enough to go running for him.
Loved it.
June 17, 2015 — 8:50 AM
Anna says:
Here’s mine: “A Matter of Taste.” A word of warning, this one turned out kind of gross and bodysnatcher-y. Read at your own risk 🙂
http://strangeandcuriousthings.blogspot.fi/2015/06/terribleminds-challenge-matter-of-taste.html
June 14, 2015 — 2:31 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
I loved this! Gross and body-snatcher-y is goooood… especially in a challenge like this one. (Mine went all kinds of weird as well, so don’t worry about that aspect of it 😉 ) Loved the characters, loved the idea – probably my favourite so far.
June 15, 2015 — 8:28 AM
Anna says:
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
June 16, 2015 — 3:59 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
CRACKING UP! This was so much fun to read — I especially loved the way Mortie talked!
June 17, 2015 — 8:54 AM
Anna says:
Thanks! I had fun writing it, too:)
June 17, 2015 — 2:25 PM
thedebc says:
Soooo, once scalloped the brains are no longer good for thinking? Good to know! Hahaha! This was so much fun to read!
June 17, 2015 — 7:08 PM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
I wasn’t sure where this story was going to go but I like where it ended up. It’s called “Just Another Dead Guy.”
https://52lettersinthealphabet.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/flash-fiction-challenge-just-another-dead-guy/
June 14, 2015 — 2:57 PM
Anna says:
Liked this one. Intriguing… Feels like it could lead to a longer story?
June 14, 2015 — 3:21 PM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Thanks! I definitely felt myself wanting to make it a longer story, but that will have to come sometime when there isn’t a word limit 🙂
June 14, 2015 — 3:23 PM
Joelle Reizes says:
I really do want to know more about the main character. Good job.
June 17, 2015 — 11:23 AM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Thanks 🙂 She seems like the kind of character I’ll have a lot of fun exporting in future stories.
June 17, 2015 — 11:27 AM
dmcclure17 says:
I enjoyed this one quite a bit. You write very well!
June 14, 2015 — 5:04 PM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Thank you so much
June 15, 2015 — 10:26 AM
Ebonstorm says:
Oh, no you don’t. You don’t get to drop a thousand words casually like you broke your magnetic poetry kit and just when something is supposed to be revealed, you look up and shout “squirrel!” Sit back down and finish this story. Tell me something, reveal a secret and leave a new one. Do that until this novel is finished. 🙂 Excellent!
June 16, 2015 — 1:18 PM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Glad you enjoyed it and I honestly do plan to go back to the story and develop it more 🙂
June 16, 2015 — 1:48 PM
thedebc says:
Holy Cow! This was awesome,,, but where’s the rest?
Seriously great !
June 16, 2015 — 2:42 PM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Thanks 🙂
June 16, 2015 — 2:44 PM
C R Smith says:
I thoroughly enjoyed this. The conversation flowed with such ease that I am extremely jealous. Excellent work
June 17, 2015 — 10:25 AM
52lettersinthealphabet says:
Thank you so much!
June 17, 2015 — 11:16 AM
gr1mj1m says:
I planned on something a little more fun than this…
https://callsignrejected.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/corpse/
June 14, 2015 — 5:44 PM
thedebc says:
Hmmmm, I’m thinking mani-pedi?
June 16, 2015 — 12:40 AM
Entrebat says:
Two More Souls
Thanks…
June 14, 2015 — 6:48 PM
crsmith says:
Ok, this is the first time I have ever posted a story I have written. I hope others enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
The Accident https://moralitypuzzle.wordpress.com/2015/06/15/flash-fiction-challenge/
June 14, 2015 — 9:15 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
Oh god, this is so sad! Beautifully done though, and you handled the ‘twist’ ending (if you can call it that) with great subtlety. Some things really do haunt people forever, as raw as if they were yesterday. I hope you’ll post here again on future Challenges!
June 15, 2015 — 8:21 AM
crsmith says:
Thank you very much. Yes, I plan on contributing more in the future
June 15, 2015 — 9:25 AM
thedebc says:
Haunting is a perfect description, …good story.
June 16, 2015 — 12:44 AM
Ebonstorm says:
Keep doing these. You have a gift.
June 16, 2015 — 1:22 PM
Fred G. Yost says:
So, this is a quick stab using an ongoing character that I have.
It’s amazing how few words 1000 is, once you start working with it.
http://fredgyost.com/2015/06/14/deliverance/
June 14, 2015 — 10:33 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
Yeah, I feel your pain about 1000 words – feels like a couple of water biscuits when you’re wanting a sandwich, doesn’t it? Well, it does for me anyway… 😉
Having said that, I really enjoyed this. It’s certainly made me want to read more about this character and the stories she features in. She has some kind of super-fast-healing ability, yes?
June 15, 2015 — 8:03 AM
Fred G. Yost says:
Glad you liked it!
I’ve actually used her enough in my short stories that she has her own tag in the blog. http://fredgyost.com/category/jade-leporidae/ . Fall Girl is still my favorite, though I’m getting the feeling this will all wind up being stitched together into a novel/novella at some point.
Her ability is perfect regeneration, which presents its own set of challenges when you realize that most growth requires a bit of destruction first. She’s good at surviving, but that’s about it, at least from a combat ability perspective.
June 15, 2015 — 12:33 PM
SamKD says:
Made time sooner rather than later for a change:
http://samkdsonlinepace.blogspot.com/2015/06/mary.html
June 14, 2015 — 10:40 PM
thedebc says:
I’m glad she got her marbles back 🙂
June 16, 2015 — 12:34 AM
W.R.Gingell says:
I Writ a Thing with a dead body but the spam filter might have gobbled mine up because New Person! and Link! But I’ve enjoyed reading all yours!
June 14, 2015 — 10:56 PM
thedebc says:
Ok here’s my stab at the “Dead Body” , lol
http://wp.me/p6e1eO-15
Hope you like it!
June 14, 2015 — 11:12 PM
Happyturtle says:
I think for me the story worked better without the supernatural part. Just the kids in the woods with a body.
June 15, 2015 — 2:28 PM
thedebc says:
Yeah I kind of wrestled with that a little bit but couldn’t come up with a viable ending suitable for such a short short short story. Lol
June 15, 2015 — 2:47 PM
thedebc says:
I reworked the ending. I like this one better.
http://wp.me/p6e1eO-15
June 15, 2015 — 11:38 PM
grahamwrites says:
Written yourself a pair of dark little under-12s there, Debbie. Love the sumo wrestlers line.
June 16, 2015 — 6:19 PM
Pavowski says:
Usually I can tie the inspiration for these stories to something going on in my life, but for this one… man, your guess is as good as mine. It’s a little bit Soylent Green, a little bit The Matrix, a little bit Grapes of Wrath.
Fun to write, but I dunno if it’s the kind of story world I like spending time in…
Here’s “Imported Goods”:
https://pavorisms.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/imported-goods/
June 14, 2015 — 11:38 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
Wow! This is one dark story. Brilliantly told though – I’m impressed you managed to fit so much character and setting development into such a small wordcount. Nice job indeed!
June 15, 2015 — 7:51 AM
Pavowski says:
Hey, thanks. I figured if one dead body was unsettling, a truck full of them would be even better.
June 15, 2015 — 8:44 AM
Happyturtle says:
I am imagining the odour of pig rendering in this world, everywhere, all the time.
June 15, 2015 — 10:43 AM
Pavowski says:
Basically, yeah. Ew.
June 15, 2015 — 11:00 AM
thedebc says:
Oooohh spooky, scary! Good stuff !
June 16, 2015 — 12:27 AM
Ebonstorm says:
Macabre and chilling. Definitely not “It’s a Wonderful Life.” I think it is an excellent statement to both conservation and the waste of human potential, literally as well as figuratively burning human potential as kindling to maintain our status quo. I’ll be back for more of your fine work.
June 16, 2015 — 2:55 PM
J. Grace says:
I’ll echo others’ comments in saying this was a very meaty read. So much beneath the surface, told in so few words.
June 18, 2015 — 9:12 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
Well…. I been gone and did it. I’d like to say I’m not responsible for the weirdness that sometimes goes on in my brain – but every writer knows that’s a lie, and the truth is much more fun anyway. So here it is then:
http://wcprawncrackers.blogspot.co.uk/2015/06/a-dish-served-cold-chuck-wendigs-flash.html
Sorry. In advance.
June 15, 2015 — 7:21 AM
Happyturtle says:
The story wasn’t working for me until the ending, and then I laughed. Still giggling.
June 15, 2015 — 10:30 AM
thedebc says:
So I officially love the weirdness of your brain, hahahahaha.
I was cracking up through the whole story!
Weird-on girl!
June 16, 2015 — 12:22 AM
Ebonstorm says:
From pimp-slapping food porn right in its gross and disturbing mouth to making a life statement about our quality of food and its affect on our life — an excellent segue!
June 16, 2015 — 3:02 PM
Joelle Reizes says:
hilarious. truly.
June 16, 2015 — 4:04 PM
Wendy Christopher says:
Thank you so much for all the lovely feedback – much appreciated! I was a little worried I was crossing a line with this one; about halfway through I started thinking to myself “You DO realise what it looks like this story is casually condoning, don’t you?” so thanks for being brave enough to stick with it to the end 🙂
June 20, 2015 — 8:41 AM
persimmonromance says:
Okay, I was going to. I usually have no trouble keeping into the word limit of a flash (I write drabbles with some frequency) but… Stuff happened. I have the germ of a new story, but so much for this flash prompt.
June 15, 2015 — 9:39 AM
Happyturtle says:
I wrote a story. This is my first finished story in…. years. Yeah, years. Thanks for the excellent prompt. 🙂
http://isabethwrites.blogspot.co.uk/2015/06/flash-fiction-challenge-mr-redface.html
June 15, 2015 — 9:48 AM
thedebc says:
Good job! Love the way you are inside the child’s mind! (The fart/poop stuff was pretty funny too lol)
June 16, 2015 — 12:10 AM
Happyturtle says:
Thank you! I’m clearly 8 years old, because “dead Mr Redface just pooped his pants on the sofa” is officially my favourite line.
June 16, 2015 — 3:50 AM