Last week’s challenge: Describing one thing ten ways.
This week’s pretty straight forward.
I’ve got two lists at the bottom. Pick (or randomly choose with dice or a random number generator) one from each list, then make sure your flash fiction contains each of those things.
That’s it. Easy-peasy, Ramona-and-Beezy.
You’ve got an upgraded 1500 words. Due in one week (March 14th). Post it at your online space of choice. Drop a link to your completed story in the comments below. Any genre.
Now, the lists…
Must Contain #1
- A lover’s betrayal.
- A dead body without a face.
- A mysterious — perhaps even magical — photograph.
- An antique gun.
- A terminal illness.
- An ancient tree.
- A time machine.
- A monster.
- A faithful hound.
- A talking cat.
Must Contain #2
- A distant outpost.
- An infernal bargain.
- A pair of detectives.
- A stolen treasure.
- A forgotten manuscript.
- An escaped prisoner.
- A hard drive filled with secrets.
- A plane or train ride.
- A piece of lost technology.
- A comatose patient.
joeturner87 says:
3 – A mysterious – perhaps even magical – photograph
6 – An escaped prisoner
I should not be distracting myself, but at least I’m writing 🙂
March 7, 2014 — 7:37 AM
joeturner87 says:
Well. here goes
http://joetblogs.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge-must-contain/
March 9, 2014 — 1:06 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Very nice, Joe. Your story just says, of course that’s how a magical photograph and an escaped prisoner work together. I’d like to give you another 1500 words so I can find out more. I do miss the punctuation, though.
March 9, 2014 — 4:15 PM
joeturner87 says:
Thanks Kathryn. I would like to expand upon it, though 1500 might not be enough. I’ll work on the punctuation 🙂
March 10, 2014 — 5:21 AM
Mark Gardner says:
9 & 3… Faithful hound and a pair of detectives…
March 7, 2014 — 8:03 AM
Mark Gardner says:
Here it is. 1111 words, rated PG-13:
http://article94.wordpress.com/2014/03/07/must-contain-ffc/
March 7, 2014 — 10:59 AM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Well alright then. Nice perspective and appreciation. Well done.
March 9, 2014 — 4:24 PM
Simon Brake says:
8 and 7, a monster and a hard drive full of secrets.
An idea begins to form immediately!
March 7, 2014 — 8:44 AM
Mozette says:
5 – Terminal Ilness
7 – hard drive filled with secrets
and here it is… 🙂
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2014/03/sex-lies-and-video-tapes.html
March 7, 2014 — 8:51 AM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Excellent turning. I enjoyed it.
March 9, 2014 — 4:36 PM
Mozette says:
Hey Thanks… it was late, I had a strange idea, it took me to a stranger place and it turned out a lot more different to how I thought it would. 😀
March 10, 2014 — 8:09 AM
timmatthews1 says:
I’m going to give the list to my girlfriend later on, and get her to pick my two items.
March 7, 2014 — 9:04 AM
Carl says:
Thank Cthulhu I didn’t get ‘a talking cat.’
March 7, 2014 — 10:15 AM
pavowski says:
A time machine and a hard drive. Random numbers liked me today.
March 7, 2014 — 10:25 AM
Lewis Cave says:
I think I can have fun with this.
6.An ancient tree.
9.A piece of lost technology.
March 7, 2014 — 11:14 AM
Nick Nafpliotis (@NickNafster79) says:
8 & 2…an monster and an infernal bargain. I think I have just the thing….
March 7, 2014 — 11:51 AM
Nick Nafpliotis (@NickNafster79) says:
*a monster
March 7, 2014 — 11:52 AM
Tami Veldura says:
This one came to me rather quickly, I love it when that happens!
For those of you who read my previous piece for the random song challenge (The Edge with a demon summoning and what will probably turn out to be a bad deal), this is a direct continuation of that flash fiction.
http://www.tamiveldura.com/2014/03/prompt-edge-part-2.html
(the link to the first part is at the top of the post.)
March 7, 2014 — 11:56 AM
Reya Starck says:
7 – A time machine
5 – A forgotten manuscript
My brain didn’t even give me time to sit down before it started brewing. First thing I’ve written in a while, so thank you for the inspiration!
http://www.starckwords.com/2014/03/flash-fiction-the-rules/
March 7, 2014 — 12:00 PM
Mark Gardner says:
As a fan of Star Trek, I can totally see the rules akin to the “Temporal Prime Directive.” I hope the levity was intended, I liked the story.
March 8, 2014 — 10:31 AM
Kathryn Goldman says:
This was a fun read. Thanks.
March 9, 2014 — 5:17 PM
Darren says:
Excellent story. Loved Exning’s indifference and – dare I say – geniality toward the mysterious genealogist.
March 10, 2014 — 4:08 PM
Adrienne says:
Loved this! Nicely done!
March 10, 2014 — 9:47 PM
Trine Toft Schmidt says:
Loved it!
March 21, 2014 — 12:19 AM
Catastrophe Jones says:
http://catastrophejones.wordpress.com/2014/03/08/infinity-forever/
March 7, 2014 — 12:23 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Technically, this won’t be published until tomorrow. Maybe I should’ve rolled again, to see if ‘time machine’ was going to come up. This link will work, in case you want to read it now.
March 7, 2014 — 12:49 PM
Darren says:
Great story! I’ve put more of a comment on your blog but didn’t want to add any spoilers for anyone one who hasn’t read it yet!
March 10, 2014 — 4:36 PM
Mike Reid says:
Interesting..I used a number generator here > http://andrew.hedges.name/experiments/random/
and got
4: an antique gun
8: a plane or train ride
Should be fun!!
March 7, 2014 — 12:24 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
An antique gun and a distant outpost.
I’ll be back.
March 7, 2014 — 12:39 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Here it is: Where the River Begins
March 9, 2014 — 3:21 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
I’m back with Where the River Begins.
Thanks for the inspiration, Chuck.
March 9, 2014 — 4:02 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Where the River Begins
http://kathryngoldman.com/where-the-river-begins/
March 9, 2014 — 4:03 PM
incognitiously says:
Oooh, revenge, gentle and brutal.
March 9, 2014 — 10:02 PM
Percy Kerry (@percykerry) says:
Hello. My choice is 2.A dead body without a face and 3.A pair of detectives. Here’s my flash fiction…
http://thecrimocopoiea.blogspot.in/2014/03/the-face-off-killer-somewhere-in-city.html
March 7, 2014 — 12:58 PM
jbwhelan says:
I pulled numbers from a hat and got:
8. A monster
6. An escaped prisoner
Back later with the results.
March 7, 2014 — 1:10 PM
jbwhelan says:
Sigh. Good news and bad news. Bad news is, I was not able to keep this to under 1500 words and it’s not finished. Good news is, I *really* like what I have so far, and I’m expanding it to what will probably wind up being a 5000-7000 word short story that I’ll wind up sending out on the submissions trail. So yay me! 🙂
March 14, 2014 — 1:18 PM
djmatticus says:
A time machine and a deal with the devil – there was really only one story I could write here: http://thematticuskingdom.wordpress.com/2014/03/07/dream-fulfilled/ I hope you like it.
March 7, 2014 — 1:49 PM
Mark Gardner says:
I don’t know if a twist was intended, but I totally expected the story to go in a different direction. I love it when an author challenges me, so +5 internets to you.
March 8, 2014 — 10:33 AM
djmatticus says:
Woohoo, +5 internets! A few more and I can level up. 😉
Thanks for the praise, I’m glad you enjoyed the story and that it went a different direction than you expected. I wasn’t trying for it to be a twist… I was just enjoying slowly building the character and the scene so that the audience wouldn’t know what was actually going on until he was standing at the cross roads.
March 10, 2014 — 10:22 AM
Kathryn Goldman says:
+5 internets from me, too. You turned my expectations, as well.
March 10, 2014 — 5:11 PM
djmatticus says:
Oh my! Another +5?! Hooray!! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
March 10, 2014 — 5:22 PM
Terri Herrington says:
A talking cat and a forgotten manuscript…. hmmmmm
March 7, 2014 — 4:12 PM
pavowski says:
It’s my first ever Chuck flash Fiction , be gentle!
http://pavorisms.wordpress.com/2014/03/07/300-years-a-thief/
March 7, 2014 — 4:39 PM
Mark Gardner says:
A great inaugural FFC. This flash definitely needs a continuation.
March 8, 2014 — 10:35 AM
pavowski says:
Agreed, I certainly wasn’t done – I just ran out of space!
March 10, 2014 — 7:52 AM
Mozette says:
Very cool…. there’s something else there… like Mark said, a continuation is needed… we have to know what happens next 😀
March 8, 2014 — 8:40 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
You definitely need to keep going. Game on.
March 10, 2014 — 5:27 PM
Jeff says:
Been a while since last I trolled terribleminds… here’s a go:
http://jeffnkeir.com/2014/03/07/317/
I’m sure you can figure out what my ‘must contains’ were. 🙂
March 7, 2014 — 5:23 PM
Mark Gardner says:
You obviously need to troll more often. Although your story did leave me wondering about the world and it’s history, the writing was well done. This is another FFC that needs a continuation.
March 8, 2014 — 10:37 AM
thatjeph says:
Thanks, Mark. I tend to recycle these things; good chance we’ll see ’em again.
March 10, 2014 — 9:44 AM
Kathryn Goldman says:
I hope we do see these guys again.
March 10, 2014 — 5:46 PM
angelacavanaugh says:
My flash fiction story Faithful
http://angelacavanaugh.wordpress.com/2014/03/07/flash-fiction-friday-faithful/
It’s about #9 a faithful hound and #10 a comatose patient. It’s kinda sad. Most of it’s from the point of view of the dog.
March 7, 2014 — 5:41 PM
Mark Gardner says:
Strange POV is often difficult to pull off. This reminds me of the short from the Disney/Pixar movie, “Up.” I have two dog companions and I found the internal processes you wrote to be completely believable and accurate. This is definitely a sad story, but I expect dog owners and dog lovers will give their companions an extra squeeze after reading this flash.
March 8, 2014 — 10:42 AM
caitlin says:
An antique gun and a plane or train ride. Awesome! The story is pretty much gonna write itself! 🙂
March 7, 2014 — 10:22 PM
Justin Walker says:
Rolled a 2 and a 10… Dead body without a face and a comatose patient….
The Night Obscure
Enjoy!
http://justinwalkerbooks.blogspot.com/2014/03/terribleminds-flash-fiction-contain.html
March 8, 2014 — 12:54 AM
Shane Vaughan says:
I got 1) Lover’s Betrayal and 4) A Stolen Treasure.
So here’s my piece, “The Diadem Heart”
http://writesomethingsmidge.blogspot.ie/
March 8, 2014 — 8:02 AM
Mark Gardner says:
I liked this piece. The ending was definitely worth the read. Good job!
March 8, 2014 — 10:30 AM
Shane Vaughan says:
Thank you kindly!
March 8, 2014 — 1:21 PM
Kathryn Goldman says:
Great visual on the greed. Nicely done.
March 10, 2014 — 5:59 PM
Shane Vaughan says:
Thanks, always nice to hear feedback!
March 13, 2014 — 1:43 PM
Adrienne says:
Great read!
March 10, 2014 — 9:39 PM
Mr. Jonnie Wright says:
I chose 4) an antique gun and 10) a comatose patient. It’s an idea I had for a while. Not my best work, but I enjoyed actually putting it down and out of my mind.
http://mrjonniewright.wordpress.com/2014/03/08/the-land-of-nod/
March 8, 2014 — 7:24 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
I absolutely love this one. Absolutely. I’m begging you to rework it into a whole short story, if not longer.
March 10, 2014 — 9:47 AM
Nick Nafpliotis (@NickNafster79) says:
Got a monster and an infernal bargain, ended up with a story I liked so much I’m going to keep going with it. Any help or advice (whether it be story suggestions or ‘yeah, maybe don’t keep going on this one’) would be greatly appreciated!
Bonus: I tied this one into a character from my first flash fiction friday I ever did here 🙂
The Cerberus Protocol
http://www.ramblingbeachcat.com/2014/03/flash-fiction-friday-cerberus-protocol.html
March 8, 2014 — 8:29 PM
Matthew Eaton says:
I received an ancient tree and two detectives.
I just finished reading some improv stuff when I decided to write this up real quick. I figured this was more entertaining than any stuffy and stodgy stuff I could come up with.
Enjoy the “Glen Hunters,” I know I did!
http://www.mattheweatonwriter.com/flash-fiction-glen-hunters/
March 8, 2014 — 11:45 PM
sechapman says:
I got “A terminal Illness” and “A far flung outpost.” And from that I got:
Free-For-All:
“Her family held the blueprint. They were the beginning, and the end – every bit of magic that protected the city tied back into their lifeblood.”
Link: http://antagonistsneeded.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/free-for-all-flash-fiction-1200-words-approx/
March 9, 2014 — 6:48 AM
marilawrence says:
Thanks for this prompt. It got me writing again.
http://ghostsinthemachines.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/hopeful-machine/
March 9, 2014 — 3:28 PM
shelton keys dunning says:
So I’ve been a ghost since I linked up with a first post, several weeks ago. I thought I should change that. I’m back, and I have a mysterious photograph and two detectives and the beginnings of a very promising novel. Provided I can finish it, that is. 🙂
http://sheltonkeysdunning.blogspot.com/2014/03/the-tamsind-affair-terrible-minds.html
March 9, 2014 — 4:29 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Goodness — I definitely want to see how this plays out! I love a good noir. 🙂
March 10, 2014 — 9:36 AM
Darren says:
Long time listener, first-time caller… as they say on the radio (not sure what they say in blogland).
I generated my prompts and let them stew until a 3am nappy change (not mine, I might add) saw the whole thing come gushing out *I mean the story and not baby poop*
I got 3 & 3 for my prompts: a mysterious – and perhaps magical – photo, coupled with two detectives. Here it is:
http://awildernesswithin.com/2014/03/09/those-killer-kodak-moments/
Now I can get around to reading what everyone else has written!
March 9, 2014 — 4:35 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Really liked this one — would even love it if you turned it into a lengthier piece. Really engaging, subtle voice. Definitely awesome.
March 10, 2014 — 9:11 AM
Darren says:
Thanks, glad you liked it. I appreciate the comment even more having just read your piece.
March 10, 2014 — 3:41 PM
Darren says:
Thanks, glad you liked it. I appreciate the comment more having just read your piece.
March 10, 2014 — 4:20 PM
The Glitzy Faery says:
Still stuck on the 1K word limit, lol. But I don’t want to mess with it too much, I like it. Well, now that I’ve got the tenses all straightened out & the other tech bits. 😀
http://jayneaustinauthor.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/flash-fiction-challenge-must-contain/
March 9, 2014 — 7:08 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
Enjoyed reading this one. Can’t tell if I’m sad for Genevieve, or think she’s awesome — but it’s definitely a good read. 🙂 …and a good prank. I seriously have to get a Polaroid.
March 10, 2014 — 8:30 AM
emaginette says:
A mysterious — perhaps even magical — photograph & A pair of detectives = The Case of the Haunted Gravestone @ http://emaginette.wordpress.com
Thanks, it was fun 🙂
March 9, 2014 — 7:10 PM
mikes75 says:
I got a mysterious photograph and a plane or train ride. I came up with “One Last Request”
http://wp.me/p2s3sT-Dn
March 9, 2014 — 7:48 PM
Catastrophe Jones says:
…I wasn’t expecting that.
It really made me smile, though — I’m a huge sucker for that particular kind of twist.
Excellent.
March 10, 2014 — 8:23 AM
mikes75 says:
Thanks!
March 10, 2014 — 8:53 AM
bloggedartistry says:
http://bloggedartistry.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/toxi-i-cality/
Hi all – first time here! I just bought Chuck’s “Kick Ass Writer” and was immediately inspired to come look at the website and spent an afternoon on this prompt. Sound familiar?
I went with dead body without a face and a hard drive filled with secrets.
I welcome all constructive criticism and will read and comment on others. Thanks!
March 9, 2014 — 9:49 PM
john freeter says:
A dead body without a face + a hard drive filled with secretes = “Faceless conspiracy”. My research for this piece was the movie “hot fuzz” and half an episode of “criminal minds”, so don’t expect 100% police procedural accuracy.
http://johnfreeter.wordpress.com/2014/03/09/faceless-conspiracy/
March 10, 2014 — 1:48 AM
bloggedartistry says:
Hi John – really enjoyed the action and detail of your story. The pace was nice too.
March 10, 2014 — 1:36 PM
john freeter says:
Thanks! I’m finding that writing flash fiction is a great way to teach yourself to streamline your writing, apart from being a lot of fun
March 10, 2014 — 2:12 PM
Fatma Alici says:
I agree, flash fiction makes me a better writer.
The feel to your story was somewhat noir. Fun read.
March 11, 2014 — 8:11 PM
Josh Loomis says:
10. A talking cat
8. A plane or train ride
Now boarding Flight 666…
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2014/03/10/flash-fiction-flight-666/
March 10, 2014 — 9:20 AM
Darren says:
Enjoyed the story. Sadly it reflects the way the world is going, gobbled up by corporate interests and their Mr Peasbodys.
March 10, 2014 — 4:29 PM
maleghast says:
I chose #4 & #7 – An antique gun & A hard drive full of secrets
Here it is…
http://www.techno-mage.co.uk/blog/blog/2014/03/11/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge-must-contain/
March 10, 2014 — 8:05 PM
Cathryn Grant says:
1. A lover’s betrayal.
10. A comatose patient.
The idea formed immediately, and now that I’m mired in it, I don’t know if I’ll be able to pull it off. We’ll see what happens by the 14th.
March 10, 2014 — 8:42 PM
Ebony the Weirdo says:
4 &6: an antique gun and an escaped prisoner. This should be interesting……..
March 10, 2014 — 10:21 PM