Last week’s challenge — “One Small Story In Seven Acts” — is deserving of your penetrating stare.
Next week, I’ve got a post queued up about protagonists.
And, in one portion of this post, I discuss the power of the unlikable protagonist.
The balance is writing an unlikable protagonist that still remains compelling — we still find some reason to keep reading, and we may even find empathy or sympathy with that character.
Even if we don’t want to “go out and get a beer with him.”
So, that’s your task.
You’ve got up to 1000 words to write a tale featuring an unlikable protagonist that still remains readable and compelling. Having this as a flash fiction challenge offers up one bonus and one disadvantage: the disadvantage is that you won’t have more than those one thousand words to establish the complexities an unlikable protagonist might need. The bonus, however, is that flash fiction is short — you can get away with a lot more because you’re not expecting that the reader will have to hang with your story for 300 pages.
Get to it, ink-slingers.
One week is all you’ve got. Challenge ends at noon EST on Friday the 17th. The drill is the same: post your story somewhere on the web, link back here in the comments so that we can all come and read.
BJ Kerry says:
My story
http://kerry-mutterings.blogspot.com/
February 10, 2012 — 9:27 AM
BJ Kerry says:
My story
http://kerry-mutterings.blogspot.com/
February 10, 2012 — 9:28 AM
Lindsay Mawson says:
An Old Spark Dies Hard
http://lindsaymawson.blogspot.com/2012/02/flash-fiction-challenge-33-unlikable.html
Enjoy.
February 10, 2012 — 10:08 AM
Darlene Underdahl says:
The Bad Guy?
http://darlene.underdahl.net/?p=128
February 10, 2012 — 12:34 PM
Louise Sorensen says:
how are you guys so fast???
February 10, 2012 — 12:38 PM
DL Thurston says:
Not sure I got the challenge quite right, but I certainly don’t like this guy…and am a little wary
of myself now that I’ve created him.
http://www.dlthurston.com/blog/2012/02/10/flash-fiction-not-an-apology/
February 10, 2012 — 12:58 PM
Darlene Underdahl says:
@Louise: Mine was a little short this week. I wanted it to be longer, but it sort of ended where it ended.
February 10, 2012 — 12:58 PM
Lindsay Mawson says:
@Louise – I’m just a morning person. I work best when my brain is freshly awake and I haven’t had a day’s worth of ‘stuff’ crammed all in there!
February 10, 2012 — 1:20 PM
Mike says:
Working on this, it’s a good challenge to somehow make the protagonist unlike-able, yet still the good guy. Was hoping for a Valentine’s theme, since have started a story like that. Just adds to the challenge.
February 10, 2012 — 1:21 PM
Chris Bauer says:
Much more challenging than I thought it would be, but very fun to write. Thanks.
“Paper People”
http://pwiddershins.blogspot.com/2012/02/chuck-ws-throwdown-unlikable.html
February 10, 2012 — 3:43 PM
Chris says:
Much more difficult than I thought it would be. Not even 100% sure I got it right, but I enjoyed the hell out of writing it. Thanks.
“Paper People”
http://pwiddershins.blogspot.com/2012/02/chuck-ws-throwdown-unlikable.html
February 10, 2012 — 3:52 PM
oldestgenxer says:
Kinda my wheelhouse. I’ll be back.
February 10, 2012 — 10:19 PM
Vetta says:
Hey, this was fun.
February 11, 2012 — 11:17 AM
Lori Oster says:
Here’s my entry:
“What’s Inside”
http://professoroster.blogspot.com/2012/02/chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge.html
This was fun. I’ve never shared any of my writing on the big old Internet before. Thanks for the inspiration!
February 11, 2012 — 5:25 PM
Christopher Meyer says:
I’ll take the case!!
February 11, 2012 — 7:59 PM
Casz Brewster says:
I cheated a little in that I revamped the beginning of a WIP that was already dealing with The Unlikable Protagonist. You feel for Miranda Dabrowski, but she is one evil bitch.
Enjoy. Thanks again for the kick in the pants.
BTFO!
February 11, 2012 — 10:53 PM
Casz Brewster says:
I cheated a little in that I revamped the beginning of a WIP that was already dealing with The Unlikable Protagonist. You feel for Miranda Dabrowski, but she is one evil bitch.
http://www.casondrabrewster.com/?p=405
Enjoy. Thanks again for the kick in the pants.
BTFO!
February 11, 2012 — 10:53 PM
Jim Franklin says:
This was certainly tricky. The protagonist is definitely unlikable, but is the story compelling? That’s up to you to tell me I suppose. It’s also a bit more cuss-ridden than other stuff I’ve written.
Here is ‘The Last Straw’
http://www.thezombiechimp.com/2012/02/12/flash-fiction-last-straw/
February 12, 2012 — 3:11 AM
T.A. Cooper says:
http://timothyacooper.wordpress.com/2012/02/12/perfect-little-liza/
February 12, 2012 — 11:58 AM
Lori Oster says:
Jim Franklin–I tried to post this comment on your website, but couldn’t. It kept telling me to type in the password, even though I had already. Anyway:
Oh, this is great. I was definitely surprised at the end, and I love your MC’s last line.
Very well done.
February 12, 2012 — 12:16 PM
Jim Franklin says:
Lori – Thanks for your comment.
Not sure what’s happening there, but I’ll take a look at it.
February 12, 2012 — 1:42 PM
R.J. Keith says:
This was a lot harder than I thought it would be. Fun, but definitely a challenge. Since I’m outlining my novel I decided to feature a character from it to help me get an overall feel for the story.
Anyway, there’s implied sexual content in the story. Look away if you’re easily offended by that sort of thing.
Enjoy!
http://rjkeith.wordpress.com/2012/02/13/a-london-particular/
February 12, 2012 — 9:17 PM
oldestgenxer says:
I know the universe doesn’t revolve around me specifically, but it has to be pretty close to here. When Chuck comes up with a challenge like this, I feel like he is thinking, “Let’s make one that’s easy for Bryan.” I wrote this in not quite an hour.
Hey, Joe
I don’t even want to think about how easy it is for me to create a character like this, and how that is somehow a reflection on me.
February 12, 2012 — 11:35 PM
Logan Riley says:
Hmm…problem…I kinda like her. She’s feisty.
http://literarybandit.wordpress.com/2012/02/13/watch-the-carpet-blood-is-hard-to-get-out/
February 13, 2012 — 12:02 AM
Bill Dezell says:
Here’s mine. 1000 words even.
http://billthescribe.blogspot.com/2012/02/chuck-wendigs-unlikeable-protagonist.html
February 13, 2012 — 4:16 AM
Josh Loomis says:
Meet Mister Caine.
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2012/02/13/flash-fiction-mr-caine/
February 13, 2012 — 8:19 AM
Melissa says:
http://faeanddragons.wordpress.com/2012/02/13/flames-and-havoc/
February 13, 2012 — 10:49 AM
Kristin Mireles says:
http://mireles-musings.blogspot.com/2012/02/flash-fiction-life-and-times-of-maxwell.html
February 13, 2012 — 8:15 PM
Kristin Mireles says:
Mine turned out to be Patrick Bateman lite.
http://mireles-musings.blogspot.com/2012/02/flash-fiction-life-and-times-of-maxwell.html
February 13, 2012 — 8:17 PM
Mike says:
Happy Valentines Day – http://www.ravensview.ca/ravens/2012/02/the-unlikeable-protagonist.html
February 14, 2012 — 11:58 AM
Kathy says:
My contribution…
http://katherineowens.blogspot.com/2012/02/being-nice-makes-you-happier.html
February 14, 2012 — 2:08 PM
Timothy John Whitcher says:
Hoarder
http://helveticasindiehorrorstories.blogspot.com/2011_12_15_archive.html
February 14, 2012 — 9:01 PM
Sterling says:
http://bookvmovie.wordpress.com/2012/02/15/flash-fiction-2/
February 14, 2012 — 11:53 PM
Jessica Meats says:
This probably wasn’t exactly what was intended. My current work-in-progress novel has a central character (not the protagonist but still important in the story) who’s not someone I’d like to go for a beer with. If I had to work with him, there would probably be blood by the end of the first week. But he’s incredibly fun to write.
I took this challenge as a way of adding a bit to his background. This isn’t so much a story as a scene from his life.
https://skydrive.live.com/redir.aspx?cid=b76036ea6b5467e2&resid=B76036EA6B5467E2!351&parid=undefined
February 15, 2012 — 3:58 AM
Schwebs says:
Nobody cries for the mistress
http://scottweberwriter.wordpress.com/
February 15, 2012 — 12:33 PM
Joseph E. Lerner says:
Here’s mine: http://furiousfictions.blogspot.com/p/fridays-flash-fiction-challenge.html
February 15, 2012 — 2:48 PM
Eva T says:
Here’s mine. Pretty hort, but I think you get the general idea about the character. http://eileen-alphabet.livejournal.com/19044.html
February 15, 2012 — 3:20 PM
Stu says:
*tosses proverbial hat into ring*
http://quantumofthought.wordpress.com/2012/02/15/normal/
February 15, 2012 — 3:35 PM
Lesann says:
Um…my offering: http://lesannberry.com/2012/02/last-chance-for-redemption.html
February 16, 2012 — 12:25 AM