Okie dokie, hawks and doves, here’s the deal this week:
I want you to pick a song you really, really like. A song that moves you at the lyrical level — THE WORDS REALLY SPEAK TO YOU, WOW, WHOA, JEEZ.
Now, take a slice of those words — a smidgen of the lyrics, a line, a short stanza — and use them as the theme or basis for a bit of flash fiction.
(Example: I’m a huge Concrete Blonde fan — and some of you are sadly asking, “Who?” — and there’s a line in the song “Take Me Home,” where Johnette Napolitano sings, Life is beautiful and terrible and strange. It’s not particularly specific, but I always find that line sums up life pretty well for me, and the world, and people in general, and I could handily write a bit of fiction based on that single bit.)
Length: ~1000 words
Due by: noon EST, Friday the 19th
Post at your online space.
Give us a link to it in the comments below.
Kari Blackmoore says:
AHHH CONCRETE BLONDE *Kermit flail* SOMEBODY ELSE WHO LOVES CONCRETE BLONDE *totally misses the point of this post but mostly because so much of my life has been set to a song by CONCRETE BLONDE OMG OMG OMG*
Wow, I can get a lot inspiration and story ideas out of “Happy Birthday” alone. I might even actually *whispers* get enough sleep to actually DO something with this writing prompt *stops whispering and resumes Kermit flail*
January 12, 2018 — 1:51 PM
Terri Coop says:
I have the claim to fame of seeing Concrete Blonde open for The Pretenders about a thousand years ago.
January 17, 2018 — 11:12 PM
terribleminds says:
LUCKY.
I finally got to see them live during… I guess it was the GROUP THERAPY album. So good.
January 18, 2018 — 7:29 AM
Ed says:
“Things you forget to say will haunt you.” There’s gold in them there lyrics!
January 12, 2018 — 1:55 PM
the story hive says:
“Don’t you ever tame your demons, but keep’s on a leash” (Hozier, Arsonist’s Lullaby)
January 12, 2018 — 2:05 PM
the story hive says:
Funny, can’t see the link, can’t post it either; again: https://thestoryhive.wordpress.com/2018/01/14/the-hell-of-traitors/
January 17, 2018 — 5:53 AM
legreene515 says:
Great job. I felt as confused as your main character must have felt!
January 18, 2018 — 2:11 PM
Vanessa says:
Good read.
January 20, 2018 — 4:49 PM
the story hive says:
Thank you, Vanessa
January 20, 2018 — 5:15 PM
Joshua Mason (@joshhiderwrites) says:
Concrete Blond is a great band! If you don’t know you better look it up. One of my favorite ‘writing’ songs is “still- reprise” by Ben Folds.
“But it’s only change
Only everything I know
Even the things
That seem still are still changing”
January 12, 2018 — 2:27 PM
Brent says:
I was just listening to Concrete Blonde earlier today. Weird!
Great idea BTW!
January 12, 2018 — 4:01 PM
lif strand says:
Oh wow — I like the idea of using lyrics as inspiration. I just wrote a story tonight based on a David Coverdale/Jimmy Page collaboration. Only problem is I like it so much I’m going to sit on it a few days and then see if I can market it. Thanks!
January 12, 2018 — 10:34 PM
Leo Charles M. says:
I have some Black Sabbath for ya
January 13, 2018 — 1:13 AM
Bill says:
The Monkees had a song called “St. Matthew” which used the line “Both the times she smiled, it was a portrait of the sun.” The song doesn’t do much for me, but that line has been the basis for several characters over the years.
January 13, 2018 — 1:43 AM
Perrin says:
“By a knight of ghosts and shadows, I summon’d am to tourney”. It’s been set to music a lot, so it counts!
January 13, 2018 — 1:51 AM
nessa1313 says:
“Hello darkness, my old friend ~ I’ve come to talk with you again…” Sound of Silence
January 13, 2018 — 3:15 PM
Mozette says:
https://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2018/01/dont-you.html
enjoy.
January 13, 2018 — 8:09 PM
legreene515 says:
The Breakfast Club is one of my favorite movies. I like what you did here!
January 18, 2018 — 2:36 PM
Mozette says:
Aaaww… thank you! I’ve loved that movie for a long, long time! And have written short stories about ‘What Happened On Monday’ and what occurred to the characters after that day… but have wondered what did happen 20 years later… when the song lyric thing came up, it just pushed me hard enough to make me do this flash fiction – and it worked out really well! 😀
January 18, 2018 — 6:42 PM
Vanessa says:
Good way to use the song and movie.
January 20, 2018 — 5:18 PM
Courtney says:
Love this challenge!
January 14, 2018 — 9:36 AM
Chris Raymond says:
I might play your flash fic game, Senor Wendig.
But I really just wanted to say that Concrete Blonde recorded the best L. Cohen cover ever (Everybody Knows) even with the 832 versions of Hallelujah out there…
January 14, 2018 — 9:46 PM
David F. Berens says:
So, I was immediately captivated by this and hammered out this piece in just a few minutes. I’ve literally never done this before, so this must’ve been a good one! This is raw and unedited, so please be kind… hope you like it. https://goo.gl/uF1MuC
January 14, 2018 — 10:06 PM
legreene515 says:
Pretty sure this could be a Black Mirror episode. I enjoyed this piece and all of its implications!
January 19, 2018 — 5:45 AM
David F. Berens says:
Thank you! I take that as high praise!
January 19, 2018 — 1:49 PM
Vanessa says:
It is often hard to tell what’s real.
January 20, 2018 — 6:00 PM
Admin says:
Sam Hunt lyrics have always been my favorite, here’s my take! https://lallalove.wordpress.com/2018/01/15/flash-fiction-challenge-song-lyric-story/
January 15, 2018 — 3:59 AM
legreene515 says:
So sad. What song was this?
January 18, 2018 — 2:40 PM
Vanessa says:
Oh, my.
January 20, 2018 — 6:04 PM
Tess says:
“How do the angels get to sleep when the devil leaves the porch light on.”
January 15, 2018 — 12:02 PM
Leo Charles M. says:
So the story is the retelling of the story of “Iron Man” the smash hit song from Black Sabbath. The entire song is the real influence but the specific quote that fulfills the prompt best is: “ He was turned to steel, In the great magnetic field, Where he traveled time , For the future of mankind”
https://medium.com/@LeoCharlesM/iron-man-lives-again-613282704e20
Clap, follow and share if you enjoy!
January 15, 2018 — 7:41 PM
Vanessa says:
It’s terrible to be the author of your own (and loved ones’) destruction.
January 21, 2018 — 9:51 AM
Leo Charles M. says:
Yeah, revenge very rarely has clean results. Thanks for reading!
January 21, 2018 — 11:25 AM
Shana Horn says:
When I first heard Mama’s Broken Heart by Miranda Lambert all I thought was it was how it perfectly described a bloodrager awakening to their powers. Thus I present Mama’s Broken Hearted Bloodrager at http://slwhshorts.blogspot.com/2018/01/mamas-broken-hearted-bloodrager.html
January 16, 2018 — 2:20 PM
legreene515 says:
I’ve totally felt like this before! Good job with the prompt.
January 18, 2018 — 2:44 PM
Sam Brady says:
998 words, inspired by “Ana Ng” by They Might Be Giants. The line is “Why is the bench still warm? Who had been there?”
https://sambrady.wordpress.com/2018/01/16/chuck-wendig-who-had-been-there/
January 16, 2018 — 8:21 PM
emily Miles says:
I wish I had thought to use a they might be giants lyric! now a bunch are flooding by; “Replicant’ has some good ones, along with ‘you’re on fire’ and ‘answer’ !
January 17, 2018 — 9:56 PM
legreene515 says:
I love this. Such an amazing story. Your character is vivid and his sense of longing, but also his sense of peace. Great use of the prompt.
January 18, 2018 — 3:29 PM
Susan Monroe McGrath says:
https://susan-reads.blogspot.com/2018/01/whispered.html
Inspired by Ani DiFranco:
“Your bones have been my bedframe
and your flesh has been my pillow
and I’ve been waiting for sleep
to offer up the deep
with both hands”
January 16, 2018 — 10:20 PM
legreene515 says:
I love Ani DiFranco. I saw her in concert once in Virginia and it was awesome. Also, your story was so creepy. I left a comment on your blog!
January 18, 2018 — 3:34 PM
Skye Overall says:
Here’s my story, using a lyric from Foo Fighters “Everlong”. It’s a teesy bit racy. https://lunarwriter.com/flash-fiction-song-lyric-story/
January 17, 2018 — 2:57 PM
emily Miles says:
https://sketchystormwritesgarbo.tumblr.com/
Lyrics:
I want hair like yours
hands like yours
fingers that curl in the cold like yours
i want eyes to stare
and to cry
when i’m feeling scared like you
/./././././././
this is probably a bit of an northbound look at the lyrics, but when I stood back and studied them, this was the best path I saw. Then again, I am in a morbid mood.
If you see it, tell me what you think!
January 17, 2018 — 9:50 PM
Christopher Slagle says:
My entry, “For Todd,” is inspired by the lines “I looked both ways before I pushed him on the track|I heard a scream, a crack, and I never looked back” from the Fun Lovin’ Criminals song “Southside.” (A line from Metallica’s “Fuel” also got in there; see if you can find it!)
https://christopherslagle.wordpress.com/2018/01/17/flash-fiction-for-todd
January 17, 2018 — 10:38 PM
legreene515 says:
Nice. I left a comment on your blog.
January 18, 2018 — 3:51 PM
legreene515 says:
My entry, “In Control” is inspired by “In Control” from Greensky Bluegrass, specifically the line: Though I am not without weakness I will define what lies ahead; I’m not out of control . 1123 this time (a little over)
https://laurengreenewrites.com/2018/01/18/in-control/
January 18, 2018 — 1:35 PM
Vicente L Ruiz says:
After much consideration, I somehow recalled the line “Albedo. zero and three nine” from Vangelis’ eponymous song (and album), “Albedo 0.39.” And I spawned a scifi flash. Its title is obviously “Albedo 0.39”.
https://medium.com/@VicenteLRuiz/albedo-0-39-d6fb97dfb19
January 18, 2018 — 6:58 PM
P.J. Cherubino says:
Here’s my go at the challenge. I had fun writing it. Never done flash fiction before. I’m enjoying reading all the entries. Cheers, all. 🙂
http://pjosephcherubino.site/2018/01/18/the-heartship-a-flash-fiction-challenge/
January 18, 2018 — 8:17 PM
Delaney Darco says:
This was fun! “Ghost Towns” by Radical Face inspired my flash titled “Fire in Every Footstep”.
https://delaneydarco.wordpress.com/2018/01/19/fire-in-every-footstep-a-flash-fiction-challenge/
January 19, 2018 — 12:12 AM
Vanessa says:
“Hello, darkness, my old friend, I’ve come to talk to you again…” Cimmerian, part 1 https://goldennib.blogspot.com/2018/01/cimmerian-part-1.html
January 19, 2018 — 10:40 AM
ellie says:
Recently..I found a very old mix I had make..back in 2008..I guess. I had actually seen this artist at a little venue in Omaha with a friend. It was amazing to see this skinny kid put down the base line and do much of his concert from his computer..still..the song was epic and it still gives me a smile when I listen to this song from PlayRadioPlay.
It takes a lot to phase me
I’m pretty stable, pretty sane
But I’m looking at my future
And God, do I have to lose her?
We share conversations
On how we’re all just floating
Through space and nothing matters
I’m looking for a pattern
Is it possible to say? Baby, let’s run away
To the East coast or Seattle, Corpus or San Marcos
I’ve got a credit card and a reliable car
Let’s drive to Pennsylvania
Madi dear, can’t we just disappear
And take our chances
On a teenagers’ romances?
Put our money where our mouth is
————————————————-
Most of his life had been imaginary. Even his first love was a figment of his imagination. But truth be told Madi was the strong one. She’d gotten him through so much to make his life normal. And now the doctors wanted him to forget about her.
Obviously, imaginary girlfriends weren’t suppose to get pregnant, but it felt so real at the time and when he showed up with her at the emergency room..it was Joey who ended up in the hospital.
That was over now. Madi, long and forgotten. He’d found Liv and she was very much alive, getting him the apprentice job at the vegan cafe. Joey was on his way.
Yes, he’d started as a dishwasher. They even trusted him with the key. Sometimes, he came in at four in the morning to get the day going. Yet, he always came back to Liv who was the guide of his future. After all, she owned the vegan cafe and much wiser than him, seven years older.
But when he heard the sound from behind the bathroom door, it made his heart sputter. He felt a little dizzy. Perhaps not quite conscious, as his stringy hair came around the golden whiskers of his face. He felt he might shit himself to cleanse what might be.
Yet, no place to run. Not like the times before when life got hard and he felt abandoned and used by his mother’s boyfriends.
He’d put roots down at the old flat above the Vegan cafe. It was finally real this time. He would be someone’s father.
Word Count – 265
January 19, 2018 — 11:08 AM
Em says:
“My heart skips stones
Your voice breaks bones”
-“Island Cottage,” sea oleena
This is SO late, but I’ve always wanted to write something using these lyrics. I wasn’t sure where else to go with it, so I guess it’s unfinished!
https://andinkblossoms.wordpress.com/2018/01/19/late-flash-fiction
January 19, 2018 — 5:53 PM