So, when I was doing some promo for The Cormorant, I had some fun over at Cabin Goddess and got to make up a Miriam Black cocktail — the “Miriam Negroni.” Which is:
1 oz dark rum
1 oz. Campari
1 oz. sweet vermouth
The juice of a blood orange.
You could go old school and just use gin. While rum fits the part of the book where Miriam descends to Florida, the book also is set around Christmastime and one cannot deny that gin sometimes tastes like liquefied Christmas tree.
To be really authentic you should probably also lacquer the edges with cremated human remains or cigarette ash.
Or just drink the whole thing through a human skull.
And I thought, that was kind of a fun challenge.
So, this is that challenge, modified.
It has two parts:
You will:
a) Invent your own cocktail (and give us the recipe!). It can be real or fictional — meaning, it can be something we can make ourselves or a cocktail purely made from fictional ingredients (“Betelgeuse Tequila and bitters made from Slarm glands”). Name the cocktail, too.
b) Then write a short story with the name of your cocktail as the name of the short story. The story should be tied to the cocktail in some way — some plot or character-hook, or maybe the cocktail is front and center in the plot.
Any genre will do.
Let’s say you have 2000 words this time around.
You still have one week — due February 7th — WAIT IS IT FEBRUARY ALREADY? Crap on a stick.
Ahem. Due in one week, by noon EST.
Post at your online space. Link back here. Same drill as usual.
Bonus: I’ll pick one random participant (sorry, you gotta live in the US for this) who will get an ART HARDER flask, as seen in this image below:
(Available from Zazzle if you click the image. Or from the Merch link.)
That’s the deal. Now go: invent a cocktail, write a story.
Mozette says:
Here lies the problem, Chuck…. what happens, if you don’t drink … I mean the hardest thing I drink is Root Beer. I’ve got Epilepsy, I can’t touch the booze because it stresses out my kidneys and liver too much – as does my medications. 🙁
January 31, 2014 — 8:03 AM
terribleminds says:
You don’t actually have to drink it! 🙂
This is a fictional exercise — though I guess if some folks want to prepare some of the cocktails and comment on their tastiness, more power to ’em. As noted in the post, you don’t even need to make up a cocktail using real world ingredients. Dragon’s gall! Unicorn sputum! TWO OUNCES OF ROBOT DREAMS AND MUDDLE IN A CUP MADE FROM A METEOR.
etc.etc.
And very sorry to hear about your condition! I have a family member who can’t touch the stuff anymore either because of how medications have affected kidneys and liver.
— c.
January 31, 2014 — 8:05 AM
Mozette says:
Okay… well, I’ll be using what I remember from what booze tastes like (it’s been over 15 years since I drank the stuff. 😛 ) … so here goes nothin’! 🙂
January 31, 2014 — 8:07 AM
Jim Franklin says:
You could always go for a virgin cocktail
January 31, 2014 — 11:23 AM
Smoph says:
I was going to say the same Jim. There’s some pretty delectable mocktails out there.
February 2, 2014 — 7:25 PM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
Oh, there are loads of really nice non-alcoholic cocktails. Why not go for something fizzy and fruity? 😀
January 31, 2014 — 4:01 PM
Jemima Pett says:
Hmm, well I invented a Kira Cooler for my non-drinking guinea pig heroes in the Princelings and the Lost City (currently on special offer) so maybe it’s time for a cocktail for those hard-bitten asteroid miners, Pete and The Swede! An Orichalcum Slinger, perhaps?
January 31, 2014 — 8:14 AM
Smoph says:
Glittery and bad for your insides… Sounds fab. 😉
February 2, 2014 — 7:26 PM
Jemima Pett says:
It has an extra weird effect too… but that’s not going to be fully explained this time around!
February 3, 2014 — 2:53 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
I look forward to seeing it! I’m going with some unexpected effects of strong drink on Gorg the Troll. He’s been languishing in the dungeons long enough!
February 5, 2014 — 1:35 PM
Jemima Pett says:
Yes!!
February 5, 2014 — 5:03 PM
Jemima Pett says:
It’s at my blog http://jemimapett.com in less than 2 hours from now.
And just in case I have some more silly problems, it’s at http://jemimapett.wordpress.com in about 3 hours.
February 6, 2014 — 5:43 PM
Mark Matthews says:
Great theme. You may have set back my work in progress 2k words for this wonderful exercise. As for not drinking, I”m 21 years sober but that just makes this so much more interesting.
January 31, 2014 — 8:42 AM
Rebecca Martin says:
Fortunately, my work in progress is about rock bands, so guess what? I’m killing two birds with one stone!
January 31, 2014 — 3:15 PM
Mozette says:
http://youcantgoback-andotherimpossibilities.blogspot.com.au/2014/01/adam-eve.html
Okay… this drink isn’t real, but I thought to play a part I’ve never played in my life. 🙂
enjoy. 😀
January 31, 2014 — 8:48 AM
Sian Chapman says:
I have to wonder what sort of drink would have sent Adam and Eve back after reading that. Probably would have involved blood sacrifice, given how they acted. Interesting idea though 🙂
January 31, 2014 — 9:42 AM
Mozette says:
hehe… I’ve always wondered what would happen if Adam and Eve weren’t so innocent and plain as the Bible depicted them. So, I tried to put a twist on them… Hell Hounds and all. 🙂
January 31, 2014 — 7:59 PM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
I think your site is finally letting me post comments to it, but let me know if it didn’t come through as it’s not loading for me now 🙁
January 31, 2014 — 4:08 PM
Mozette says:
Hey… bummer the site won’t come up for you again. I’m not sure what’s going on with Blogger, but it keeps on signing me out for no reason at all – and I’m on it every day. But yes, your comment made it up there! 😀
I wrote the story at around midnight; and it was the first line that came to me and wouldn’t leave me alone… then when the narrator was a bar tender – well – I just had to see what happened… didn’t I? 😛
January 31, 2014 — 7:02 PM
Fatma Alici says:
The like idea, especially how the drink relates to the story. Pretty cool.
February 1, 2014 — 6:00 PM
Rebecca Martin says:
That was a fantastic ride, Mozette!
February 1, 2014 — 8:29 PM
Mozette says:
Thank you both for your great comments. 😀 I love writing a story where it just takes me for a ride and I’m not even sure where it’s going to end either. 🙂
February 1, 2014 — 9:16 PM
Rebecca Martin says:
I think that’s the most exciting part of writing: thinking you know where the story’s going, then suddenly the story tells YOU where it’s going.
Anyone else would call that insanity, but fellow writers understand.
February 2, 2014 — 9:30 AM
Mozette says:
Rebecca, I never plan my books. I have always done what Stephen King has: found some nice characters with a few flaws, plonked them into a situation and then said, ‘okay, show me what you’re gonna do.’ and watch them run! 🙂
It’s more exciting that way. I have an idea of how the story will turn out, but no big written-up plan of how it’s going to happen from chapter to chapter… so that means i really don’t know where my books go, they just … go. 🙂
February 5, 2014 — 9:01 PM
Bill Scott says:
Interesting and enjoyable story. Swallowed whole, apple seeds are harmless, but ground they release cyanide (or so I’m told). Great take on Adam and Eve and apple seeds as a hallucinogen.
February 2, 2014 — 1:34 AM
Mozette says:
Well… true about the cyanide being in apple seeds. But it’s such a minute amount, it’s harmless to us; so most people eat the whole apple core and nothing happens to them.
I kinda wondered what would happen if we ground them up… would we start getting the pure drug/hallucinogen happening? Then, go and put it into a drink? Woah…. spin out… story! 😀
February 2, 2014 — 6:37 AM
Sian Chapman says:
Here’s mine:
“It’s a small measure of hate. Half a shake of rosemary for all the years he strung you along. An ounce of his blood, a nice drop of wine from a organic place. Preservatives will mess with the spell-work.
Feel free to drink some of that wine while you’re letting the start of the potion simmer.”
Linky:
http://antagonistsneeded.blogspot.com/2014/02/flash-fiction-recipe-for-heartbreak.html
January 31, 2014 — 9:36 AM
theerrantcat says:
This is incredible. I’ve read it two or three times since this morning already. The bitter humor and the “universal” second person whichisreallyallaboutthenarrator work really well.
January 31, 2014 — 4:32 PM
Sian Chapman says:
I’m really glad you enjoyed it. My mother has a recipe for plum pudding tucked away somewhere that involves drinking a bottle of wine while waiting for it to soak, so I figured if you were making a potion involving wine, there would be some potions that would prompt the need to drink a good chunk of that wine too.
Again, really happy you liked it 🙂
January 31, 2014 — 6:10 PM
Mozette says:
I love the narrative in this one… it takes me along in how the person’s feeling.
And we have all felt this way at one point in our lives – have we not? – and yes, even I have wanted to make a potion to screw up with my ex-boyfriend (the one who inspired ‘Pork Chop NIght’ last year). But instead, I did something more literal to him… I took off with his medicine and repeat prescription when I moved out and dumped his sorry ass. 🙂
Don’t worry, Karma took care of my ex-bf too… but isn’t she always watching us?
January 31, 2014 — 7:57 PM
Sian Chapman says:
I think the bit I liked about it was more that she wasn’t the only one that had made that type of potion. There isn’t always a right or wrong on these things, and I hope I got some of that complexity across, even those it’s short. *scratches head*.
January 31, 2014 — 11:49 PM
mikes75 says:
Love the atmosphere you built in this one, nice job!
February 7, 2014 — 9:04 AM
Gary Ledbetter says:
Nice if you drink. What about us who don’t.
January 31, 2014 — 9:47 AM
terribleminds says:
I’m not actually asking you to drink anything. This isn’t Spring Break.
January 31, 2014 — 10:03 AM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
What, you meant I DIDN’T have to drink this concoction of battery acid, de-icer and toilet water I just invented?!? Aw man, I wish I’d known that before I wrote my story 🙁
January 31, 2014 — 4:04 PM
joeturner87 says:
Must…Resist…Urge…To…Participate
January 31, 2014 — 10:22 AM
underastarlitsky says:
um…why?!
February 1, 2014 — 7:26 PM
joeturner87 says:
Because I have other “stuff” to be doing right now 🙁
February 2, 2014 — 5:39 AM
Smoph says:
You’ve got the rest of the week! Try bite sized chunks fitted around the stuff that needs doing?
February 2, 2014 — 7:33 PM
joeturner87 says:
Okay, so despite not being a teenager, I caved to peer pressure. And here be the result
http://joetblogs.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge-a-drink-with-a-story-a-story-with-a-drink/
P.S – I am fully aware that the name of this drink, first appeared in The Simpsons. However I was only aware when I Googled it, after writing.
February 4, 2014 — 3:46 PM
caszbrewster says:
This challenge was custom-made for me. Hubby and I had plans this evening to create cocktails for our Super Bowl party on Sunday. This just gives me another recipe to make. Back in the day, when I was a hot-shot (or so I thought) bartender in Hawaii I won a contest for a cocktail I created: The Gecko. Not sure if the bar that I worked at even exists any more…but, hey, this challenge is bringing back all kinds of good mojo feelings. I may use that recipe or create another for the challenge. We’ll see. Thanks, Chuck. See you post-writing.
January 31, 2014 — 10:40 AM
elizabethamber says:
Oh wow. I’ve been building up a project based on this concept. After a year of plugging away I have a few stories and plenty of delicious cocktails but haven’t posted the stories anywhere. Maybe I should do it all online before attempting to make it an ebook.
January 31, 2014 — 10:50 AM
J. S. Collyer says:
But us Brits binge drink more! I’ll just have to order my own flask XD
January 31, 2014 — 10:59 AM
Jim Franklin says:
It would definitely be too small for us. Maybe that’s the real reason, sending a barrel would cost too much in P&P.
January 31, 2014 — 11:25 AM
J. S. Collyer says:
Aye, you’re probably bob-on there, Jim XD
January 31, 2014 — 11:41 AM
kevtaylorjr says:
This combines two of my favorite things! Drinking and making up drinks!
Oh, and then there’s the writing bit too. I like that a whole bunch too.
January 31, 2014 — 11:18 AM
Kevin says:
OK: I know this is a bit last minute (deargodpleasesomeonereadthis), but do I get extra credit if I have the characters actually drink it in the story?
Suffering Asshole
1 Shot Spiced Rum (Sailor Jerry)
2 Shot Rye (Rittenhouse Rye BIB)
½ Shot Orange Liqueur (Grand Marnier)
1 tsp Rose’s Lime Juice
Dash of Blood Orange Bitters
Ginger Beer to Top
(I may or may not have made this to drink while I was writing. Several times.)
And here it is:
http://kevtaylorjr.tumblr.com/post/75878737340/suffering-asshole
February 7, 2014 — 2:02 AM
mikes75 says:
Hell of a story. I might need to stop at the store on the way home, stock up, and try it again with the drink in hand…
February 7, 2014 — 9:25 AM
Kevin Taylor (@kevtaylorjr) says:
Thanks so much! Glad someone read it and it didn’t get totally lost to the ages. And hey, Random Lovecraft!
Thanks again for reading. Hope the drink goes down smoothly and improves whatever reading you might engage in later.
February 7, 2014 — 11:44 AM
KellyP says:
Well, here we go. Once more into the void. If anybody actually makes this and drinks it, please let me know if it tastes like Thailand.
January 31, 2014 — 11:39 AM
KellyP says:
Hmm. So here’s the link. http://kelgphip.tumblr.com/post/75158969349/koh-chang
January 31, 2014 — 11:54 AM
Sian Chapman says:
It’s interesting how so many of these are related to loss in some sort of way. Yours is the third I’ve read today with loss as part of it.
I enjoyed myself 🙂 Not bad at all.
January 31, 2014 — 6:17 PM
AJ Bauers says:
I really like the imagery of this piece – beautiful setting with a wonderful build up to the tragedy that happened. Well done!
February 1, 2014 — 9:07 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
Wow–that’s powerful.
February 5, 2014 — 1:38 PM
susielindau says:
I am reading Blackbirds right now. You forgot the cherry.
January 31, 2014 — 11:43 AM
Betsy says:
My story Mixology has a made-up drink in it called Midnight Ice that is served at a New Year’s Eve party. It’s actually pretty fun to think about what might go into a drink, even if it isn’t a drink that you’d want to try yourself. I wrote a funny blog post about holiday drinks last fall. Here’s the link for anyone who is interested: http://www.longandshortreviews.com/guest-blogs/halloween-blogfest-betsy-miller/
January 31, 2014 — 11:44 AM
Jay Whelan says:
I got overwhelmed by illness and lack of a convincing resolution for last week’s challenge; I’ll take a whack at this one and see what I can do with it. Got a germ of an idea in the back of my head, I’ll see what I can infect with it.
January 31, 2014 — 11:48 AM
Jay Whelan says:
And here’s the resulting infection: “Hugo and the Velvet Singularity”
http://jbwhelan.blogspot.com/2014/01/hugo-and-velvet-singularity.html
January 31, 2014 — 10:22 PM
Bill Scott says:
Bizarre and great. I’ll pass on the fung.
February 2, 2014 — 1:57 AM
curiouskermit says:
loved it! I really liked the ending. Fun read!
February 2, 2014 — 10:34 AM
dangerdean says:
That was fun as hell.
February 7, 2014 — 1:06 AM
KVeldman says:
The Snow Miser
1.5 oz. Brandy
0.5 oz. Spiced Rum
4.0 oz. Egg Nog
4.0 drops lysergic acid diethylamide
Stir vigorously, enjoy for hours. Story forthcoming.
January 31, 2014 — 12:23 PM
Tony says:
I lol’d heartily when I read the last ingredient. Well done!
February 3, 2014 — 2:46 PM
Carl says:
My drink is called The Lee Harvey Oswald. I don’t know what’s in it, but two shots will blow your head off. #toosoon
January 31, 2014 — 1:08 PM
maeveautumn says:
I am probably a terrible person for laughing out loud to that. 🙂
February 3, 2014 — 11:03 AM
Mark Gardner says:
I’m a little bit heavy on this one, because I wanted the story to be perfect. My fictional cocktail for this challenge is Warrior’s Blood. It is derived from rice wine, rare herbs grown near the South China Sea and the blood of a freshly slain jungle animal. Which animal? You’ll have to read to find out. At 2,147 words, enjoy Warrior’s Blood:
http://article94.blogspot.com/2014/01/warriors-blood.html
January 31, 2014 — 2:08 PM
Tami Veldura says:
I don’t have any wine experience, so I’m open to suggestions here…
The Queen’s Offering
fantasy, coming of age, betrayal!
http://www.tamiveldura.com/2014/01/the-queens-offering.html
January 31, 2014 — 2:12 PM
Mr Urban Spaceman says:
I actually had a very similar cocktail to this at my local Chiquito, it was called Dark And Stormy, and it was very very nice.
For those who tuned in last week, my protagonist will be familiar.
http://mrurbanspaceman.wordpress.com/2014/01/31/heart-stopper-a-flash-fiction-piece/
January 31, 2014 — 4:00 PM
JD Savage says:
Challenge accepted. I was a bartender back in the day. I actually did make this drink up. It actually did taste like shit. The third one was ok, though.
http://jd-savage.blogspot.com/
January 31, 2014 — 5:12 PM
Rebecca Douglass says:
I don’t think I’ve ever even HAD a mixed drink. That won’t stop me making one up. I’m a writer. I make things up all the time.
January 31, 2014 — 6:01 PM
Rebecca Martin says:
My cocktail is called a Rockin’ Titanic, made from equal parts of:
Irish whiskey
bourbon
dark rum
vodka
tequila
As one of my characters said “it’s like if a Long Island Iced Tea was cranked up to eleven.”
http://thereallydivinemissm.wordpress.com/2014/01/31/rockin-titanic/
January 31, 2014 — 6:53 PM
K. Zorn says:
My drink is called the Siege of Leningrad and it isn’t a drink at all. It’s a reminder.
http://kzorn1989.wordpress.com/2014/02/01/the-siege-of-leningrad/
January 31, 2014 — 8:04 PM
maeveautumn says:
I really love what you did with this piece. You took the prompt in a new and very insightful direction, and I enjoyed reading it. I like how you made the narrator an observer of the main character; it was a good character study.
Not only was the main character and his friend the narrator remembering the Siege of Leningrad, but it inclined the reader to do so as well. It had a pleasant bittersweetness to it, and your narrator’s tone really painted a very interesting, vivid portrait of inner strength.
February 3, 2014 — 11:34 AM
Nick Nafpliotis says:
My drink is called ‘Blast from the Past’
-One part Crystal Pepsi
-One part Zima
-One shot of Montauk Fluid
Fair warning; I went a bit over the 2,000 limit due to my growing attachment to the main character, Mandy. I will probably come back to this story in the future–ending up going in a very different direction than I initially anticipated.
http://www.ramblingbeachcat.com/2014/01/flash-fiction-friday-blast-from-past.html
January 31, 2014 — 11:27 PM
Bill Scott says:
Just the thought of Zima makes me want to rinse my mouth out with beer.
Interesting concept. I enjoyed it. It went in a completely different direction than I’d expected and could make a great opening for a novel. I will say that I would’ve expected Mandy to show a little more surprise when it actually worked for the first time.It also reminded me I needed to review subjunctive tense, which I always screw up. I also almost used the phrase “If I was/were being honest,” but ended up deleting it. Here is the link I have bookmarked if you have an interest. http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/verbs-subjunctive.htm
February 2, 2014 — 4:02 PM
Nick Nafpliotis says:
Thanks for the feedback and notes! Wish I had read them before I finished the story and sent it off to a couple places for publication consideration : /
You’re also right about Mandy needing to show more surprise. Definitely need to expand on that more when/if it comes back rejected.
February 2, 2014 — 4:26 PM
Paige S. says:
This is considerably shorter than 2000 words, so I am fine not being qualified for the beautiful flask *sob*. But here it is! The challenge reminded me of my original blog following my She-Dwarf-Ogre, Rog. “Deer Juice” is the cocktail and it’s written in the traditional Rog-style (which are short entries which have a web-comic feel without so many pictures.)
Hold your nose and take a swig!
http://pznb.wordpress.com/2014/02/01/deer-juice/
January 31, 2014 — 11:54 PM
Justin Walker says:
The Phantom Fairy…. yes, I made it up and yes, it does contain Absinthe… Enjoy!
http://justinwalkerbooks.blogspot.com/2014/01/terribleminds-flash-fiction-drink-with.html
February 1, 2014 — 12:08 AM
angelacavanaugh says:
Hope you like Westerns. 🙂
Two Shots of Whiskey, With a Splash of Death
http://angelacavanaugh.wordpress.com/2014/02/01/flash-fiction-friday-two-shots-of-whiskey-with-a-splash-of-death/
February 1, 2014 — 12:13 AM
angelacavanaugh says:
I’m naming the drink: The Western
February 1, 2014 — 12:16 AM
M.R. Dorough says:
Well, I tried it. The good news is that whiskey *does* taste better with a splash of death. The bad news is that I’m being held without bail…
February 1, 2014 — 1:19 AM
AJ Bauers says:
Good story, although I really hated Wester (figured that was the point though :)). And what a perfect yet awful moment when he forced Gerald to turn back around and finished up with him. Thanks for sharing!
February 2, 2014 — 12:35 AM
Bill Scott says:
Nice work.
February 2, 2014 — 3:30 PM
angelacavanaugh says:
Thanks!
February 2, 2014 — 4:40 PM
curiouskermit says:
Here is my drink, and the story:
http://curiouskermit.wordpress.com/2014/02/01/flash-fiction-january-31-blood-is-thicker/
I think this might taste pretty good, but I’d leave out the blood, maybe.
February 1, 2014 — 10:30 AM
Shane Vaughan says:
RIGHT! This was hard… But I revolved my story around the Espresso Martini (which I rename the Night Before the Morning After.)
Johnnie Two Fingers is a low-end Private I in 1950s N.Y.
And he’s on a mission. The daughter of a Danish Monarch goes missing. Drug fiend Hector Almuerza is top of the suspect list. And Johnnie’s going in for the kill.
find out what happens in this barmy, alcohol fueled, drug heaped flash.
http://writesomethingsmidge.blogspot.ie/
February 1, 2014 — 2:01 PM
AJ Bauers says:
Interesting challenge! I had a lot of fun coming up with this cocktail, and although I haven’t actually tried it, I’m sure it’s delicious :). But here’s the story of ‘The Hermit Thrush’
February 1, 2014 — 6:50 PM
AJ Bauers says:
… and here’s the link. Oops!
http://ajbauers.blogspot.com/2014/02/the-hermit-thrush.html
February 1, 2014 — 6:51 PM
Shane Vaughan says:
Very nice. Concise and neatly wrapped up. That drink reads like it tastes delicious! ^^
February 1, 2014 — 7:27 PM
AJ Bauers says:
Thanks for reading Shane! I think I would yum it up too, but it’s hard to say without actually trying it 🙂
February 2, 2014 — 12:53 AM
maeveautumn says:
This is such a warm-hearted story, a very feel-good little piece. I really like your main character, he really does seem like a sweetheart, and I’d like to try the drink you invented, too!
February 3, 2014 — 12:20 PM
Nick Nafpliotis says:
Great stuff, AJ. I was having a bit of a down night, so the ending to this one definitely helped cheer me up!
February 1, 2014 — 8:08 PM
AJ Bauers says:
Thanks Nick, I’m glad I could provide a bit of an uplift to your day. Your story was fantastic by the way, and I can’t wait for the continuation 🙂
February 2, 2014 — 12:54 AM
underastarlitsky says:
I don’t drink, so have no knowledge of how to make anything alcoholic (i know we don’t really have to make a real drink, but I wanted to try and make something that was actually drinkable lol) so thanks to internet based generators, I came up with a drink that, if I DID drink alcohol, I would definitely like to try! (i could always make a non-alcoholic version, and i’m kind of tempted, because it sounds yum! :)). So without further ado, here is The Courageous Sheriff, at 1,999 words! Feedback welcomed.http://wp.me/pBqgu-8Y
February 1, 2014 — 7:17 PM
underastarlitsky says:
edit to say: it would be yum minus the pixie stick addition (i’m assuming)!
February 1, 2014 — 7:28 PM
Bill Scott says:
SEGUE TRANSPORTER
3 oz dark rum
6 oz coconut milk
one toasted butter soaked blueberry PopTart (non frosted)
a large dollop of cream cheese
0.5mg ketamine
blend until smooth
http://www.dirtysmellyhippy.blogspot.com
February 2, 2014 — 1:01 AM
curiouskermit says:
I really enjoyed reading this. Very funny, and just a little bit gruesome at the end. Perfect! I liked the style too, written as diary entries. Makes me think I should try that one of these days.
February 2, 2014 — 10:37 AM
Bill Scott says:
Thanks for reading.
February 3, 2014 — 11:57 AM
aysabaw says:
I’m still hesitating to post this as I’m not very well in writing yet but then, i though I would just share it anyway. Nothing to lose anyway and hey, any feedback will be appreciated 🙂
http://mylongshortstories.wordpress.com/2014/02/02/gin-pomelo/
February 2, 2014 — 10:38 AM
maeveautumn says:
I really like the narrator’s voice in this, it is very distinct, very personal, like a memoir. It’s also quite melancholy, almost a hopelessness to it. Your ability to create that sense of empathy in the reader is quite skilled. You also create a curiosity about where the character goes from there. It left me wanting to read more about her life and her siblings.
February 3, 2014 — 1:23 PM
aysabaw says:
Hi maeveautumn!
Thank you so much for taking time to read it, really. And the more I thank you for not getting bored while reading it.
I myself almost cried while writing this and I really wanted to know how a reader will also feel about it.
Your comment is a great motivation 🙂 and will surely write more and further improve.
Again thanks a lot 🙂
-aysa
February 3, 2014 — 11:35 PM
maeveautumn says:
Ok, this is my first participation in one of your awesome flash fiction challenges. (I’ve been creeping your blog for months though!)
The drink is called “Wicked Kiss of Youth.” If I tell you the ingredients now it’ll ruin my little plot twist, so you’ll have to read the story :).
http://thethreeofcups.wordpress.com/2014/02/02/flash-fiction-challenge-accepted-the-wicked-kiss-of-youth/
Please to forgive the slight overage on word count.
February 2, 2014 — 2:07 PM
theflyingcashew says:
I was wondering what to write for my daily writing. I’ve been stumped the past few days. Will post once done.
February 2, 2014 — 3:46 PM
J. Milburn says:
I made up two concoctions out of fictional ingredients:
Love’s Breath: Water, Essence of baby’s laughter, Mist of a rainbow, a unicorn’s tears of joy, the breath of true love’s first kiss, and a few drops of blood. Let breathe under the light of a full moon.
Sorrow’s Retort: Echo of traitor’s promise, a serpent’s tongue, some tears of a fallen angel, and a few drops of blood. To be buried for seven days with a freshly hanged murderer.
Here’s the story that goes along with them:
http://jeremymilburn.wordpress.com/2014/02/02/wendig-flash-fiction-challenge-loves-breath-sorrows-retort/
Hope you enjoy!
February 2, 2014 — 8:10 PM
maeveautumn says:
Wow, that was a very enjoyable story! Your narrative voice is very distinct and fits with the theme of your story, and it flows really well and is easy to read. I also love how you used a lot of familiar symbols and themes from traditional fairytales to tell your story, and added a satisfying definitive ending for the reader. I anticipating throughout the plot to find out how Emerald, the narrator, was connected to the storyline. Is it correct to imply that she is the witch who gave the prince the love potion?
Your two concoctions fit right into the theme. It actually kind of reminds me of a fairytale version of the Tudors, the TV series, what with the prince/king getting sick of his wife and wanting to be rid of her. I could totally see this fitting right into a collection of fairy tales.
February 3, 2014 — 10:52 AM
J. Milburn says:
Thank you! Emerald was telling the story from experience, so you’re correct that she was the witch in the story. I appreciate the kind words 😀
February 3, 2014 — 12:05 PM
Georgia says:
Sadly, I don’t have an online space so can’t share any stories, but I did invent a cocktail last year as part of a bartending course. Can’t resist sharing it here because it is genuinely delicious.
Hey, Fruitcake! (Because real fruitcake tastes like arse, and this is so much more useful at family gatherings)
45mL Famous Grouse Scotch
15mL Amaretto
15mL vanilla-bean infused honey syrup
30mL lemon juice
Pour over ice in a rocks glass, garnish with Grand Marnier-soaked sultanas skewered on a toothpick, and a glace cherry if that’s how you roll.
Stir before drinking, because it settles into pretty layers and you don’t want to slug straight lemon juice. Or maybe you do…
February 2, 2014 — 8:52 PM
Rowan says:
The Iced Fountain.
The recipe is at the end of the story, so yeah. I’m not old enough to drink, nor to buy any of the things to drink, so I cannot ensure quality of flavor!
http://inkstreams.blogspot.com/2014/02/the-iced-fountain.html
February 3, 2014 — 4:21 PM
Jon Jefferson says:
Here we go
http://www.10thdaypublishing.com/common-pilz/
February 3, 2014 — 8:33 PM
Francesca Carrillo says:
Mine features a simple Cape Codder.
Serve in 1/1.5 vodka to cranberry juice ratio if you want to meet the Devil.
Here we go:
http://francescacarrillo.blogspot.sg/2014/02/flash-fic-challenge-snarling-devil.html
February 3, 2014 — 11:53 PM
MK says:
Here’s mine: http://www.partisandaily.com/2014/02/04/flash-fiction/
I don’t drink, but if I win the flask, I promise I won’t fill it with apple juice and stick it in a lunchbox.:)
February 4, 2014 — 2:50 AM
andreaspeed says:
Okay, here’s my drink, and the story that goes with it: http://andreaspeed.com/2014/new-flash-fic-challenge-creme-de-nepenthe/
February 4, 2014 — 6:37 AM
Jeanne B. says:
Hi MK, I just wanted to let you know that when I click on your partisandaily domain link my anti-virus software won’t let me open it because of a “Blackhat SEO” virus 🙁
February 4, 2014 — 9:01 AM
MK says:
okay, thanks for letting me know! Aaaargh. I need a web valet. My site’s more of a shack than an estate, though.
February 4, 2014 — 10:43 PM
MK says:
glitches fixed, can’t say the same for the story, but here it is: http://www.partisandaily.com/2014/02/04/flash-fiction/
February 5, 2014 — 1:21 PM
Jeanne B. says:
Yay, my anti-virus software let me enter your shack 😉 Thanks.
February 5, 2014 — 2:58 PM
Jesse says:
Well I managed to produce something this week, so here it is http://fav.me/d7545nl
I don’t know much about drink mixing, but I think I managed alright.
February 4, 2014 — 5:56 PM