PREPARE TO GET PROBED.
Ha ha ha, no, no, silly, not like that.
I mean, “Prepare to get probed rectally.”
*checks notes*
Wait, I mean, “not rectally.”
Sorry! Sorry. Always get that one wrong.
So, from time to time it’s a good idea to shove your own penmonkey dreams under the lens of the microscope, see how things are going for you. As such, it’s time for a report card if you’re willing.
The questions — and you can answer as many or as few of these as you care to — are:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ’em.)
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
So: there you go.
A few self-eval questions to get you talking.
I’ll hang up and wait for your answer.
CARRIER LOST
Todd Moody says:
I had a mind to start with Moon River for some reason.
Anyway, I think the writing thing is going okay. I recently finished a major revision pass on my WIP, and I discovered Critters.org and my manuscript is going up next week for the group to break down. I’ve had a hard time finding a writing group that is local enough to benefit. This might fit the bill for me as a substitute. We will see. Critters requires you to actively participate critiquing others in order to get your own work reviewed.
I’ve started outlining a new project, which is something new for me (the outlining). I see the value. I recently finished writing the synopsis of my WIP and condensed 440 pages to 9. It might actually be great if you could write the synopsis first and then expand.
I’m finding that my vocabulary is stuck on certain words. I found that I used ‘look’ and ‘took’ and their various forms about a bajllion times. And I have only begun to break it down to try to condense it some. Not sure what that says, I didn’t notice it reading it through, but on doing word searches to find problem areas. Not really sure it it’s a problem or not at this point.
My other problem is immersiveness. I made my last pass with this in mind, but I still think I can go deeper. When do you know you’re done!?
I am writing Sci Fi, and would love to have a few Beta Readers if anyone is interested.
October 3, 2012 — 7:12 AM
Adam Short says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Not as well as it could be, but at least I’m still actually writing stuff. I guess that means I’ve not completely failed yet. I’ve actually been submitting stuff recently too, which has historically been the point at which progress has stopped. I have a lot of stuff cluttering up my hard drive that no one has ever actually read…
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Got a couple of things out in the world waiting for someone to say “Yes! We love it! We’ll publish it in our magazine! Send us more!” etc. Both short stories. Also sitting on two different barely-started novels (which is naughty, I should pick one and get the fucker done). I do at least have a reasonably well thought out plotline for one of them though, which means I actually can get something done with it instead of twiddling my thumbs and daydreaming about what it’d be like if people bought it and liked it.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Motivation is the main one. Novels are always going to be a long slog for me, I think. I don’t get that much time in which to write, and because there are often a few days between writing spurts it takes a while to get in the zone again. Often I’ve only just got in the zone when I’ve got to give up and go to bed, or be useless at work the following day. Sometimes I never get in the zone at all and I just waste a couple of hours doodling and writing crap that I’ll have to delete the next time I get some writing time. When a novel starts to be a real pain in my arse (after several failed attempts to write anything meaningful) I do what is probably the worst thing you can do, and leave it alone, sometimes for months. It’s bad and wrong, but I keep doing it.
Short fiction is easier, and I do manage to produce complete stories there at least. They tend to be vignettes rather than actual tales with a beginning, middle and end though, which bugs me. I’m not sure how to get out of the vignette mindset, but I don’t know if anyone else is going to be able to help with that.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Feedback is always useful. On the occasions where I’ve submitted stuff here for the Friday Flash I’ve had great comments, and I’ve felt proud of the work I’ve done, but being able to do that sort of thing with work I actually intend to submit to magazines would be awesome. If anyone feels inclined to read my stuff as I write it and offer honest feedback (and ideally nagging, cajoling and threatening so I write more) I’d be very appreciative. I respect your readers and their storytelling skills, so I’d be more than happy to reciprocate. The problem with websites set up specifically to allow people to critique each other’s work is that they rapidly descend into a series of equally unhelpful cliques; a circle-jerk of teenagers writing dreadful fanfic, a coven of desperate housewives writing dreadful romances, you get the drift. There’s not much craft there.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I’m still a software developer who occasionally writes, rather than a writer who does software development for a day-job, so I’m definitely not progressing as much as I’d like, but like I said before, at least I’m still writing.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I think my strengths are mostly technical, which is almost certainly the wrong way around. I can write. I can put words in front of one another until they do something meaningful in people’s brains. I can create sentences that have that certain “something”. I can do funny, most of the time.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I think they’re mostly in planning and plotting. I constantly try to be a pantser. I don’t like planning things out with spreadsheets or post-it notes or whiteboards, I’m never sure if I’m doing it right, for a start. Most of the time I just sit at my keyboard and write and see what happens. Works ok for short stories where you can get the bulk of the work done in one sitting and then revise it for the next week or so until your happy. Works not at all for novels. Before I know it I’ve written myself into a corner, or I’ve run out of interesting things to say. I have started planning things out a bit more, and I do have a notebook with scribbles in it, but frankly I don’t write in it enough and I don’t read it enough.
I think I’m the sort of person who needs nagging, which is a problem. I want to create stories, and coming up with the ideas is almost compulsive, but I tend to be happy with the ideas; with the act of mentally telling myself the story. I have a problem with trusting myself enough to actually write them down where other people might read and enjoy them. I either need to get myself some sort of inner taskmaster, who forces me to write stuff whether I want to or not, or obtain the assistance of someone willing to whip me into shape.
October 3, 2012 — 7:23 AM
Alex Beecroft says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Just finally getting back into the swing of things after the disruption of the summer holidays and seeing one child off to university. It’s nice to be back!
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
1k words on Monday, 2k on Tuesday. I’m aiming for 3K a day from today (weekends off.) I’m excited to be working on my first non-romance Historical Fantasy, featuring vampires and shenanigans in the Ottoman Empire.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
The writing’s a bit rough at present, and I have lots of notes saying [research this!] but that’s normal for a first draft. The agent says nobody’s buying vampire stories any more, but hey, what else is a muse for except to demand things get written at the wrong time?
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
You already are, with encouragement and distraction.
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Not too bad. I seem to be earning twice as much since last year. Not coincidentally related to having twice as many books out, I suspect. It’s still way less than I’d earn manning a supermarket check out, but the trend offers some hope that I might one day get there.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Apparently my style is ‘lyrical’ and I have a distinctive voice.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Heh, apparently my style is ‘overwritten and flowery’. But more seriously, in my own opinion I do have a tendency to rush my endings. I’m desperate to get it over with so I can start on the next one.
October 3, 2012 — 7:48 AM
Christopher Meyer says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Could be better…actually not great :/
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Current project #1: THE TECHNOCRAT; It’s stuck in its first chapter. Current project #2: untitled viking movie script; Just notes right now.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
THE TECHNOCRAT is stuck in its first chapter. I really thought I wanted to write this one, a sequel to my first self-published novel (that I’m attempting to get professionally published). I’m finding it hard to get motivated. Everytime I open the word document I sit and stare at it and dread writing it. :/ Maybe it’s time to move on?
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
I could absolutely use a beta reader or two for my works; we can start with THE TECHNOCRAT draft (chapter), but would love constructive criticism on my first book, too. Tear apart the writing. Maybe y’all will see something in the story that I can’t.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
The bigger picture is looking pretty good right now. My job scope for my full-time job is about to increase greatly and I’m about to get a raise. AND I’m about to get a Norwegian Elkhound puppy. I own a house and a Jeep Wrangler. Set to go to Vegas for New Year’s. Doin’ alright, big-picture-wise.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Editors have told me I am very good at keeping the pace of my stories going, and catching the reader’s interest from the first line of page one.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Descriptive words. Read: Simple Jack (I g-g-got a g-good braain!). I go to describe something and I have to dig to find words that capture the reader’s imagination. And characterization, I think. I’m a very blunt individual, and so much of my dialogue and characters tend to be a bit blunt. Trying to temper this by reading not-for-me-books (romance…other fiction that’s not sci-fi).
October 3, 2012 — 8:14 AM
Kate Haggard says:
In general, writing hasn’t been going for a while now. I mean, I’ve peen putting word to screen (and sometimes paper), but it’s mostly become an exercise in frustration. The last two-ish years haven’t been kind to my personal life, and a lot of those issues keep going unabated. I’ve kind of had to spend a lot of this time shoring up everyone around me emotionally, and at the end of the day all that’s left over for writing is strain, stress and exhaustion. It really shows in the last fistful of projects I’ve started then, at one stage or another, abandon because I just couldn’t muster up the emotional wherewithal to do the concepts justice.
I know that sounds like a metric crap-ton of excuse. And, really, it is. It’s no one’s fault I haven’t taken the time to care for myself. So the past month (because of Mr Rorz being awesome and getting the best job in the world and relieving us of the most immediate burdens) has really been about building myself up. Gently, because I didn’t realize until yesterday how much the last few years had shattered my confidence. And let’s face it – confidence is pretty damn necessary to produce anything worth reading.
Wow, that got more vent-y and introspective that I need to go. :-p Ok, about actual writing:
I’ve decided to shove aside the last two years worth of projects to the side for now. Get some distance from them and the ick I associate with them, and start fresh. Really, really fresh. I’ve gone back to my childhood roots and am attempting an epic fantasy. Something I haven’t done since I was 12 or so.
(If you want to know, it’s a YA about a traditional-ish epic fantasy post-industrial revolution and tech boom. All of which was brought about when the laypeople revolted against the established domination of mages. So now mages find themselves in an increasingly restrictive system and more and more unnecessary to daily life. Magic system is based on drawing power from unseen spirits (think animism and Shinto sense of spirit) that can result in insanity and possession. There are also paladins whose main function is to be a mage’s constant companion, guardian, and nanny. Paladins are kind of like Shinto priests and miko, kind of, in that they can banish spirits and cleanse mages through elaborate ritual. Yeah, it makes sense in my head, I promise.)
And I’m doing it in 1st person – a POV I never, never, never use for anything longer than flash. It’s been difficult, but a good challenge to stretch myself out of my comfort zones. Although I do find myself falling into some of my usual tricks when writing action. Which works in 3rd limited, but not so much in 1st. Kind of finding my legs with the character and sinking into her voice. So far it’s mostly her, but I keep popping up here and there. It’ll smooth out as I get deeper in, I’m sure, and the beginning isn’t anything a good revision pass can’t fix.
But I ultimately chose to go with 1st to play up my strengths and hide my weaknesses. Characters have always been the easy part of writing. I can’t help it – I’m more attracted to character than plot in just about everything. A story can have the best plot in the world, but if the characters aren’t there, I can’t get into it. Plus, with 1st I don’t have to worry quite so much about description and setting. There’s not an obligation to add loving detail that the character wouldn’t notice and I can use the details I do include to reinforce the character. At least, that’s how I see it in theory.
As far as what you and the fine denizens of TM can give me? (Hi BTW. *waves* I haven’t been a regular commentor in a while, but I’m always lurking. I’m a Chuck hipster – I liked him before he was cool ^__^) Ego-stroking is always good and I could use the confidence boost. Although if I suck, I appreciate being told that too. Although, really, the sense of community is enough. It’s great connecting with other writers that understand how sometimes you have to spin in your chair and moan about how you should have become a plumber or something. Otherwise, keep on keeping on.
TL;DR – Whine, whine, fml. Oh well, back in the saddle.
– @ Adam Short: Check out the Absolute Write forums. It’s an excellent community with great critique boards. It’s not for the faint of heart (you’ll find absolutely zero coddling and ego-boosting there), but if you’re tough enough to handle the honest and constructive critiques (and learn to give them in return) you will come out a better writer.
October 3, 2012 — 8:17 AM
Helen Rose says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Pretty good. I’m actually *writing* for a change, which is an exciting step up from day-dreaming. It’s been a few years since I wrote just for the hell of it – mostly I’ve been doing the odd article or review here and there, and then the rest of my writey brain has been focussed on essays for uni, but I’m finally shaking that off and reminding myself that writing isn’t always a means to an end. It’s actually… fun.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I’m working on two projects at the minute, one play and one… novel? Maybe? The play is technically a bit complex – there are four ten-minute scenes that all show the same ten minutes in four different rooms in the house, and there’s one character (why do I do this to myself…) who moves between scenes. So his timing has to be spot on, as well as making sure that each scene doesn’t over- or under-run. It’s a lot of finicky thinking, but I’ve found that putting those constraints on myself has been paradoxically very liberating. Ten minutes is… ages. It’s been exciting, telling four little interlocking stories in such a huge-but-also-tiny space.
The other project is a sort of antidote to that. I’ve not planned it out beyond a vague outline – though I’ve got the characters pretty much down – and I tend to write it after a few beers and then edit the weird stuff out later. As part of making myself write instead of just think about writing, I’ve given myself free reign in this one to just bash it out and then deal with the aftermath… after. That way I don’t get snarly at myself for not knowing exactly how to move on to the next beat – I just move on and know that I’ll sort it out later.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Beyond the fiddliness of the play’s structure, I’ve also got a monologue in there which is annoying me. I can’t seem to get a hold on the character’s voice so it just sounds a bit jarring and weird.
For the novel, I’m doing OK. The clean-up’s going to be a bitch, but this initial stage of writing and sort of free-wheeling it feels really great.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Send gin. Gin and Doritos.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Terrifying, in a word. I’m in the last year of my degree and am staring at the ‘real’ world with horror. Can’t decide if I want to do an MA and a PhD and pursue a career in academia or if I want to actually try and get paid for writing fiction. People keep saying I can do both, which I think is a serious underestimation of the commitment both paths would need.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I find it very easy to build characters and find their voices, they feel very rounded to me. I can also write humour quite well – though it may be a little esoteric in places – and I like that I don’t feel like there’s any genre or medium that I couldn’t do. I have my comfort zone, certainly, but I like stepping beyond it sometimes and having a roll around in the filth outside.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I get bogged down in my own planning and tend not to start writing until I’ve plotted everything out, which is impossible because my other great weakness is coming up with plots. I have these characters rolling around and nothing for them to do. Premise is easy, plot’s a fucking nightmare. So, I end up not writing anything… But I’m staging a coup against my own derpy self and refusing to let myself wallow any more. It’s exciting.
October 3, 2012 — 8:19 AM
Ben Dodge says:
How’s it going writing wise?
Eh, I’ve been more of an editor these past few weeks; finishing off two short story entries to Apex Mag and Intergalactic Medicine Show (both are going to get rejected, but they always say to start at the highest markets) and finally slipping a PDF of flash fiction on the web- “Washed Out Fiction”. I’ve got a few ideas on the back burner for short stories.
How goes progress on any current projects?
The editing for my WIP novel, “Pit Stop 189” is going slowly. I need to finish up my first edit of the whole thing, and plug some major plot holes while also writing a series of interlude chapters…point is it’ll turn out ok, but there’s a lot more work to do. Same goes for the upcoming short stories.
Problems?
Breaking into writer’s markets is tough, though I figure I’m preaching to the choir on that particular score.
Anything Terribleminds can do?
Yup. Keep writing the way you do, keep the contests coming, and keep that profane and vulgar-flecked humour alive. You’ve a rare voice, and it’s one that keeps me going when the writing gears are squealing from lack of proper inspirational lubrication.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture going?
Seeing as I’ve yet to publish, there isn’t much of one right now. I’m very, very new to the world of professional writing, and as has been said above, breaking in isn’t easy.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I’ve been told I write like an impressionist paints; a tangle of emotions, feelings and broad actions, with interesting depth-of-character. I’m told I write action well, and I’m told I’m a decent world-builder.
More importantly, what are your weaknesses?
My plotting can be stale, and I struggle with accidently giving my characters credible motivations for their actions at times. I’m working on it.
October 3, 2012 — 8:20 AM
Wood says:
I am being paid to write poetry. Yesterday I made poetry on clay tablets, with clay sourced from the sea. On October 18th, my first play is performed. I am in the process of getting together a funding bid for next year to write my “proper” literary novel.
And I’m writing a short story about Frances.
Phew.
Issues: Well, I am working for a university with little or no arts provision, and they are… unused to having an artist in residence, let alone a poet.
But they’re helpful and they’re nice people. And they gave me an iPad.
My strengths: I use language in unexpected ways. I have an aesthetic and voice that surprises, confuses and shocks. I don’t sound like anyone else.
My weaknesses: I use language in unexpected ways. I have an aesthetic and voice that surprises, confuses and shocks. I can’t sound like anyone else, and sometimes it alienates.
Can you help me? Honestly, look at my work – you can find it on facebook and tumblr – and if you like it, tell folks. I’m all up for mutual shilling (scratch my back etc.), although I’ve moved outside of genre fields recently, just because of where I’m finding success.
October 3, 2012 — 8:26 AM
Fraser Alexander says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Improving. I’m not where I want to be yet, but I’m making every effort to get there. I start a new job next month too, which means a big push now, before that necessary evil starts sapping away my time.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Yesterday I finished the first draft of one short story. It is not readable. Today I’m starting the second draft of another short story. I plan for it to be readable. Meanwhile I have a couple of scripts – one screenplay, one comic script – gathering dust, and the second draft of a novel daring me to stop pussyfooting around with plans and outlines and start writing it.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
The novel is a complete bitch. It’s my first, and I’m sure everyone here will be shocked to hear this shit ain’t easy. For this next draft, I’m making big changes to the structure, reconfiguring character arcs, dynamics, adding bits, chopping others, etc. It’s a lot of work, but I enjoy putting in the time. But keeping track of the pieces while attempting to fit them together in all-new ways does fry my brain at times. Still, the past few days have been encouraging, so I plow on.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
If anyone can track down the god of time and flog his celestial nethers till he agrees to slow things way, way down for the rest of the month, that’d be swell.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Like I said, I’m not where I want to be yet, but I did take some big steps this year. Started and finished the first draft, put out my first short story, set up a website, and I’m taking steps to meet and support and learn from all the other writers out there.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I don’t waste words, and I keep my structures tight.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses
I worry far too much about the above. Saying a lot with a few words is valuable but sometimes you want to flesh things out or let them simmer. It’s not the easiest thing for me.
October 3, 2012 — 8:29 AM
J.R. Murdock says:
Well met, CHUCK! Longtime commenter, first time reader. Wait, that’s backwards, isn’t it? I don’t think I’ve ever commented here before. Anyway, since you asked.
How’s it going, writing-wise?
I set a goal at the beginning of the year to write 450000 words this year. It seemed ambitious, but I thought, if I’m going to take this writing stuff seriously, I need to have an ambitious goal. I’ve been dabbling for years with 12 finished novels and 100 short stories, why not make 2012 really count and be as productive as possible?
To date I’ve written 361,000 words. That includes 5 new short stories, 3 completely re-written old short stories that I enjoyed (2 published, 6 on submissions to pro-level zines, one short-listed). 4 Novellas (2 self pubbed). A serialized, monthly podcast, and great starts on 3 different novels that I’ll have finished off by the end of the year.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I have three books I’m working on simultaneously. I know I should get my ass to finish one, but I find I work best when I have multiple projects taking up my attention so if I don’t feel it for one, I can hope to another (or write a short story). It seems to have helped my productivity. Books I’m currently working on
Of Gnomes and Dwarves Book 1 – 58000 words
Golden West (serialized Podcast) – 30000 words
To Fall From the Sky (alien invasion) – 44000 words
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
The only issue I have is Angry Birds distracts me when I should be writing. I need to fix that. At this point I should be able to just sit and write, but getting started on my daily words is sometimes a challenge. Once I actually start typing, it’s hard to stop and realized that I need to go to bed.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
If anyone needs anything to read, please let me know. As a writer I love feedback and I’d love to hear what others think of either my completed stories that are looking for homes or WIPs
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I am currently on an agent hunt for a couple of my completed novels. I’m in the process of doing a total re-write on Of Gnomes and Dwarves just because those were so much fun to write and very personal that I feel I should make them the best stories they can be before I send them out into the wild. It’s been a productive year and reading blogs like this one have been a tremendous help.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I think (and I’d love for others to tell me I’m wrong) my strengths lie in setting up a great character(s) and tearing the person apart, getting the reader to care. I like to make people laugh even when a situation for a character seems dire.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Here’s where I’d love feedback to hear where I’m lacking. I have friends that read my stuff and a couple do great edits for me, but have trouble saying “Hey, this part… dude, WTF?” So I’m unclear where certain stories might be lacking.
Thank you for letting me get all that off my chest. It’s been a helluva a year. I’m 20,000 words ahead of schedule and if I end like I want (now) I’ll be at around 500,000 words for the year and have at least 3 completed novels. Writing seems to be the easiest part so far. It’s finishing and getting out the door that I need to work on next.
October 3, 2012 — 8:33 AM
James R. Tuck says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Not bad. Busy. It’s all spec, which sucks ballz, but the projects are good and moving right along nicely.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Lovecraft Mythos based urban fantasy is kicking ass. Steampunk/action adventure/romance has been set aside. Illustrated space horror novelette is in works. Zombie short story conversion to comic book script going well.
Major collaboration on a project with a NYT Bestseller should kick at months end.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Time to draw the illustrations. lol.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Just love me.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Good. Should be getting a royalty check soon. I am making moves to position my career for the next level.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I write fast and I come up with dark, fresh ideas. Action is a specialty, I write a mean action scene, bub.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Plot and character motivations being revealed to the reader. Sometimes I have bad guys who come off as evil for evil’s sake.
October 3, 2012 — 8:51 AM
Jason Beech says:
It’s going great, but my targets were initially far too optimistic. I set out to self-publish my first novel in August, which I thought very polished. Thankfully I left it be for a while and then had one “final” look – realising that it needed a proper edit to rid it of passive voice and a couple of scenes that would equal the delay on I-295 on a Monday morning (about 8.37am). So now it is having a proper edit.
Also, trying to gain a presence out there has led to eight short stories on my blog, all written in the space of three months, which has slowed down the novel. I have outlined and started my second novel, but I optimistically thought I could have that published in January 2013. Not a chance.
One thing I’ve learned: be patient, but work hard.
The biggest thing I love about now taking it all seriously is that I feel like a student again – outlining your project, sitting down to write it, staring out the window for a couple of hours…
Except I now have a wife and a toddler who likes to bite my ankles. And a day job…
October 3, 2012 — 9:27 AM
Kevin Shelton says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
It is going, which is better than not going – albeit going slowly between day work, kids, outside development projects, etc. Never enough time, and if there were enough time, I’d find a way to waste it.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I’m working on a collection of novels. I wouldn’t call them a series since the chronology isn’t terribly important. They are about a small town in South Carolina that has abnormally high occurrences of, well, the abnormal. I’ve worked out the outlines to about six novels set in the town so far, and have two in progress. They will have multiple recurring characters though the protagonists will vary from story to story. As noted above, progress is slow. My wife is a professional editor, so there is that benefit but, I have to have things written in order for them to be edited.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Besides finding the time, the issue I’m having is of disclosure. Each of these novels will be stand alone stories not requiring reading of any of the others. However, this begs the question of how much description to give each character, primary and secondary (including the town), that keeps the reader informed and engaged with the story but doesn’t bore readers who will have read the other novels. I guess it just becomes a matter of varying descriptions and adding additional or different detail from book to book to inform and then let previous readers discover something new each time.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Any additional suggestions on the above problem would be appreciated. I have read many novels that have the same issues and have come upon times where they tend to repeat themselves. I know some repetition will be necessary, just any novel (pun intended) suggestions of different ways of dealing with it would be appreciated.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Bigger picture is looking good. Glad I discovered your site (and books), Chuck. The community here is great and fun and inspiring. Thanks mucho.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
My strengths are more in the story telling and creation. The writing – style, voice, etc. – is getting better. I am economist by education and early trade and have worked for law firms and statistical organizations but changed careers to the tech field. So my writing career has consisted of economic papers, support data and arguments for legal briefs, and technical manuals for content management systems. This has made me succinct and direct. I can move a story along, it’s just the language isn’t very flowery (bad term, I know). I usually have a thesaurus always open to vary my vocabulary. I also tend to fight my tendency to be so literal and move the story too quickly from point A to B. While my stories do have procedural elements, I don’t want them to be just an episode of Dragnet with a ghost thrown in.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
As stated above, interesting turns of phrase and descriptions are my weakness. I handle dialogue and character voices and spoken colloquialisms well, it is just creating engaging character and setting descriptions that bugger me (and not the British use of “bugger”).
October 3, 2012 — 9:28 AM
Andrew Reid says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Not bad. I had a momentary post-Con crisis of confidence that almost saw me deleting my work in progress and starting again, but my level-headed other half told me to sleep on it.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Two projects. One is a straight-up fantasy called Kingdom’s Fall. It’s out on submission at the moment, so all I’m doing is tweaking the pitch every other day and trying not to press F5 too much.
The other is an alt-history Weird Western where the discovery of radium is displaced back by about 60 years and the Gold rush is immediately followed by a Radiation rush. It started off quite tame, but the outline has evolved into something like madness as I’ve cranked the adventure dial ever higher. It’s called Gunslinger Symphony.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I have terrible issues with querying. I need to man the hell up, for starters, but also the pitches I’ve been writing feel a bit too generic. Any hints or tips on picking out the key points for pitching would be appreciated.
The Western is going well. It’s really kicking my ass putting it all together but I love writing it.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
See above about pitching tips.
Besides that, you – and the community – are already helping. I love writing, but it’s lonely as fuck. Knowing you’re not the only footsore pilgrim on the path is a real lift. So thanks for that. If we ever meet at a con, I’ll buy you a pint of something. Except saliva. You are are banned from ordering pints of saliva.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Really good, actually. I’ve got a big stack of ideas, enough books to read to see me through the Apocalypse (spare glasses – check), and a ton of support from my friends in the genre community. It’s hard going, but it feels like hard work in the right direction.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I’m funny. Not puns or gag funny, but I’ve got a good sense for comebacks and there’s no such thing as l’esprit d’escalier in my writing. I edit well and have no reservations about striking a line through lines – even pretty good ones – that just don’t work.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Timing and revelation. My first attempt at a novel was a third of a novel stretched thin. I struggle to get the key beats lined up in early drafts and edits and lean heavily on my extremely helpful and very patient beta readers to spot the problems with the through line for me.
Dialogue, and emotional connection with the reader. Again, it’s something my beta readers have helped massively with, but there are times when I’m heart-in-throat writing a scene and it just doesn’t make it across to the reader. It needs work.
October 3, 2012 — 9:31 AM
Jeff English says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
-Not bad, it hasn’t really been better. I know you will think of this as an excuse but the wedding is really getting in the way of me finishing two stories that I really like. Raptor didn’t do very well in the reviews but that’s ok, it is posted on jeffenglishfiction.com for anyone who wants to read it.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
-1st drafts are done on Augmenter and Post-Apocalyptic Heist Gone Wrong With Sea Monsters. I need to go through them both with a red pen and make changes. I am thinking about PAHGWWSM as a longer story, maybe not a novel but a longer story. I will keep thinking and try and plot it out. Maybe I’ll write it in 1st person, which I’ve never done before (right now doesn’t count.)
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
-Yes. I am not sure I like Augmenter at all. I like the idea of Nikki going insane and looking out at the giant rock that just appeared in the ocean, but I think I failed in the execution of it. PAHGWWSM is good. I like it – actually I hate the first draft, but I am thinking about re-writing it. Making it longer and exploring Captain Newman more as a character. Using it to stretch my wings. It’s kinda funny that the story that was meant to be a 1000 word flash piece is turning into a “novel?” – whereas the novel idea I had is getting shorter and shorter “Lakeshore is very similar to Augmenter.” Also the more I type it the more I hate the name Augmenter. I’m not sure it’s even French.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
-I need reviews. I need people to read it and tell me where I am fucking up without fear of hurting my feelings.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
-I want to get a book of all of the Flash Fiction I’ve worked on and have it on amazon. We will see about an actual novel when I actually write one.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
-I think I am strongest in later drafts. I usually hate all of the first drafts that I ever do, but when I have something written and I can take it apart and make it better without that feeling of trying to birth it out into the world. I work better.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
-Dialog. I suck at dialog.
October 3, 2012 — 9:42 AM
Tim says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
-Things are looking up after a long slump. I’m excited about a bunch of projects, and actually working on them too.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
-The scif-fi novella I’m writing just hit 3000 words this morning, but my big techno-fantasy ground to a halt at 52,000 about this time last month and I’ve had trouble getting back into it. Hence, the Novella.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
-My main issue with both projects is that they feel pretty samey in style after a little working. Not sure if that’s really a problem or not.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
-Actually I really need readers of some sort. I’ve got two novels I didn’t mention above, one of which really needs some good feedback, and the other of which is a draft back from that stage.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
-All is well, but I’m still not getting paid. Probably should submit more.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
-Dialogue was my talent, but I think my main strength is a well exercised imagination.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
-My description is a little dry, and I’m not skilled with metaphor yet.
October 3, 2012 — 10:22 AM
everwalker says:
Hey! I found your blog last week and really enjoy the style and approach. Having gone through most of your back catalogue, I figured I ought to comment at some point. This is that point.
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Pretty good, really. Just finishing editing the second draft of a 90k word story which I’m planning to submit to Harper Voyager’s open house this fortnight. Two more stories planned, the narrators of which are both bugging me when I try to sleep.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Three in a fantasy series. Think fae and goblins in the Roman Empire. Lots of politics, philosophy and battles; minimal throwing jewellery into volcanoes.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I get bored with editing. Sorry. It just doesn’t do it for me. I know that’s a terrible flaw in a writer, and I do it anyway, but it doesn’t really press my buttons.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Um… it’s lovely of you to offer but asking a complete stranger to beta read 90k words is a bit much.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
What, life? My life rocks. The worst possible thing I can say about my life is that I live in a London flat which isn’t big enough to have a pet cat, so I am under-qualified to be a crazy cat lady.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
My strengths are, according to others, dialogue (both spoken and physical). I have a very visual imagination and, at least where people are concerned, I find it relatively easy to get that down on page clearly.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
For some reason I seem to have a blind spot where inner monologue is concerned. Given that I usually write in first person, this is a weird and definitely unhelpful weakness. I’m working on it.
October 3, 2012 — 10:27 AM
Sara Taylor Woods says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
GREAT. I’ve spent the week absorbing paid time off I didn’t realize I had (yay) and what is probably a frankly unhealthy amount of French roast, speaking to almost no one and working on revisions.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Harper Voyager recently gave me (okay, and everyone else on the internet) a kick in the ass by announcing a month ahead of time they’d be taking unagented, unsolicited full manuscript submissions. So I’ve got this thing that got queried earlier this year, rejected, and drawered. I’d been thinking since March the thing probably could have used another round (or seven) of revisions, so I figured, what the hell? Let’s do it now. NOW. So I’m doing it, and god, it’s going so brilliantly. (Famous last words before form rejection, eh?)
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Time off + aforementioned copious amounts of coffee = revising/rewriting faster than full-time-jobbed beta readers are reading. Going to have to start offering sexual favors to sweeten the deal.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
I love this place, and I love you guys. Never leave me.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Brilliant. I also have a full manuscript out with an agent, and I’m waiting on that reply. I’ve entered the “Every Time My Email Alert Sounds, I Get All Pukey” stage of waiting. I don’t do that anymore for shotgunned queries, which was a nice thing to move on from. It wouldn’t have worked with all this coffee I’m drinking.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Character. It’s the thing I have to have before I start any book or short story, and at the risk of sounding all LitFicky, I think the character arc is insanely important. People read for story, of course, but if they can’t identify with the person going through all this shit we’re putting them through, then story hardly matters. Your characters have to reverberate within the skull-shell of your readers if you want them to finish the book and buy the next one (and, sweet baby Jesus willing, tell their friends). Without character, you’ve got a ninety-thousand word synopsis, and, Christ, no one wants to read that.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Logistics and plot. I can’t remember who left what car where, or how many miles away the hospital is from the bar, or any of that shit. I just got a chapter back this morning, in fact, where the only comment was, “uh huh. When did she get her car back?” And plot: because I don’t do it. I mean, I don’t verb-plot. This has worked out both very well and very poorly for me in the past. (If you’re a pantser like me, however, I firmly believe that kind of craziness can be covered up by revisions.)
October 3, 2012 — 10:37 AM
Jason L Blair says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
–Current project has stalled due to time constraints but will pick up tonight. That’ll clear a big portion of the plate for 2013 novel push.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
–At the day job, I’m working on a big video game project. It’s going well. For personal projects, I’m working on the first Streets of Bedlam supplement, Five-Story Drop.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
–Finding the energy.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
–You’re all very lovely but I’ll get through on my own, thanks.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
–Good. I have ambitious plans for next year but big changes require big efforts.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
–Dialogue, reflection.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
–Clearly defining wants, plotting. I work hardest at those.
October 3, 2012 — 10:39 AM
Jim Franklin says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Got hundreds of idea’s bubbling around in my head, but still have to finish the first draft of my debut novel first. You told me so. I have less time to write than I would like, life got busy again with a wedding to plan and being made redundant etc. but figured once I write my multi-million dollar best selling novel, it won’t matter so much. It’s all research, I suppose.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
First novel, had to completely rewrite it because it was complete and utter unsalvageable bilge.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
It took a while to get going on the new version. I think it was because the ‘new project enthusiasm’ had all been used up when I wrote the first version. After I restarted, I had this feeling of ‘been here and done that’ so I dragged my heels and worked on other things. I’m back on track now, and my word count is climbing again.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Keep doing what you’re doing? The flash fiction challenges are good writing practice, and your advice is supernaturally helpful. Even just connecting with other writers on this site helps more than you may think…
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Imagination, sometimes I scare myself with the weirdness that spews from my brain.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I suck at description. I just forget to put it in. I must believe that everyone can see exactly what’s in my head. Oh, and experience but that’s an easy one to sort out.
October 3, 2012 — 10:50 AM
Brendan Gannon says:
Things are going okay writing-wise, but there is something I could use a hand with. Is there such a thing as “beta writers”? I need beta writers.
I’m building an online RPG/interactive fiction platform. I’m also putting together a demo game for it, but most of my time goes toward building the platform, and I’d love to get some interested parties to contribute to the demo game. It’s called “Escape From Innsmouth”, and it’s a sequel/homage to Lovecraft’s “The Shadow Over Innsmouth”. It’s a choose-your-own-adventure with a layer of RPG mechanics. And horrible fish-monsters.
If anyone’s curious, click my name to the left to check out the project. Contributing writers will get early access to the game platform (the private beta should be ready for testing in December/January) and bucketfuls of gratitude. Bring your own bucket.
October 3, 2012 — 10:53 AM
David Kazzie says:
Really well.
Other than writing a 100K manuscript and forgetting that GOOD IDEA doesn’t necessarily mean GOOD STORY until I’d written. oh, about Word Number 98,875.
I mean, other than that, it’s going really well!
Mapping out the core storyline. Plot. Always my biggest problem. Nothing makes me feel more mentally feeble as a writer than my weakness at this.
October 3, 2012 — 10:59 AM
Eric H. says:
How’s it going, writing-wise? – Pretty good. I’m getting a patter down of completing 1-3k words every day. That’s big for me, as a father of a new baby w/ a day job. The more regularly I write, the more I write.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on? – I’m working on an urban fantasy novel about a woman who unlocks her magical powers by nearly being the final victim of a horrible summoning ritual.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having? – The only issue right now is that I have decided I’m going to have to overhaul the chapters I’ve written from the antagonists’ viewpoints. But I think it will make the characters more fully fleshed out, and their decisions more believable.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with? – Actually, your “250 things you should know..” book and your columns have already helped a lot. Thanks.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking? I’m pretty pleased.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller? Vocabulary, pretty widely read. Patience.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses? Lack of experience, and the possibility that what I find interesting will not be interesting to anyone else.
October 3, 2012 — 11:09 AM
Jamie Wyman says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
October 3, 2012 — 11:09 AM
Adam Short says:
@Kate Haggard – Thank you! I’ll take a look at Absolute Write this evening and see how I get on.
October 3, 2012 — 11:09 AM
Jamie Wyman says:
Okay, now that I’m not an idiot and submitting things before they’re ready…. grr….
How’s it going, writing-wise?
-Hit and miss. I took a couple weeks off of serious writing and now getting back on the horse is rough and tumble.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
-Editing a novel, outlining another one and writing a short story for a shot at an anthology.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
-No clue how the short is supposed to end. I mean I have a vague idea but I’m drawing a blank on what happens when we get there. Oh, and I’m second guessing EVERYTHING.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
-Uncertain.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
-Terrific. I realized lately just how much I’ve grown. Not just in my writing craft itself, but in the other areas. I no longer struggle with the Fraud Complex on a daily basis. I actually think I deserve to be called a writer.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
-I think I’m damn good at character voice and descriptive prose. I can put you inside a scene and make you taste my words.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
-Each individual project has its own pitfalls, but on the whole I am still wrestling with making every word count. I worry that my stories ramble, but then I worry that I’m skimping and in so doing completely eliminating my voice. I’d say I also have some structure issues: I put the bones in the wrong order sometimes and drive myself crazy.
October 3, 2012 — 11:18 AM
Nicki Hill says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
I picked up a pencil and made some scribbles yesterday. Better than the nothing which has been happening lately.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I have three-ish novels in progress and a fourth one percolating. The three in progress all lean toward contemporary romance, two of them much more heavily than the third. The first, which first draft I completed back in June, has gotten stalled in rewrites, mostly because it pretty much IS a full rewrite and not just a series of revisions. I lost the spark for it, though I know it would not be that hard to slog through and get it done – I can reuse a lot of the material I already had, especially towards the end of the manuscript. I think I’m just tired of the story because I’ve spent so much intimate company with it over the last year. The second is stalled at the second chapter and has been set aside for now in favor of working on the third, which is a really exciting concept in my head but slightly less so on paper; I need to figure out how to show the details rather than tell them in a high-stress, frightening scene and its aftermath. I’ve never really written action or thriller scenes before, so it’s a learning curve right now. And the one that’s percolating – I’m in the process of character development, and while I expect it to have romantic elements, it’s leaning much more towards an alternate history/biopunk/atompunk/apocalyptic feel, though there’s no real plot as of yet.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Motivation. I’ve got tons of time to work during the day, being a second-shifter, but I’m lazy. Again, project #1 is stalled 6 chapters into rewrite because I’m tired of poking at it; project #2 is stalled because I think I started on it too early, when it wasn’t really ready to see paper yet; project #3 is bothering me because I know the writing’s not as pretty as it could be and I’m letting that distract me from just getting the story down; and I’m letting project #4 take its time figuring out what it wants to do and enjoying learning about the characters in the meantime.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Actually, the Game of Aspects challenges have been terrifically helpful. I don’t write flash fiction and I have a hard time veering off from my comfortable course of writing what’s familiar to me, so making myself consider the different aspects was a really good start. I did write a short story based on the first Game, which is posted to my blog, but it’s definitely not “flash.” And project #4 suggested itself from the second Game and some other ideas that had already been floating around in my head. So just getting me out of my rut of “normal” has been really good for kickstarting the creativity again.
I do love visitors to my blog, though, and encouragement and feedback is always appreciated. I’ve also got two projects up at Book Country, which I’ve found to be an excellent online community of serious writers, and you’re all welcome to pop over there and check them out under this pen name (Nicki Hill). I write mostly gay romance, usually with erotic elements if not outright erotic scenes. There’s your warning. 😉
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I’m actually really excited that I have all this time to write right now, even if I’m not taking advantage like I should. It was my dream as a kid that I would be a writer and a teacher when I grew up, and right now I’m sort of getting the best of both worlds – I’m a private tutor in the afternoons/evenings, and I get my days to myself to write whatever I want (since I have no agent, no editors, no anybody except myself giving me deadlines or demands). I do not yet have the writing lair I imagined having, but I also don’t own a house yet, so that’s forgivable.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Rarely do I have to edit for mechanics. I’m the annoying one who has a hard time reading past grammar, etc, errors in a first draft to the core of the story in order to figure out whether the plot is any good. I’ve also been told that I’m very good at dialogue and character development (though that was up for debate in a recent contest I entered).
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I have a hard time with world-building – I’ll ignore the fact that there should be extras hanging out in the background of public places, and I’ll use only 2 or 3 senses in a scene rather than deepening it up with more artfully arranged details. I focus on the action at hand and put blinders on to anything else surrounding the scene. Also, I like to think that I have a good grasp on the difference between showing and telling, but in practice it doesn’t always work out as well as expected.
October 3, 2012 — 11:19 AM
Anthony Laffan says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Writing wise things are going ok. They could be better though. I got sick last week and haven’t been able to write in that time due to trying to catch up on other work. Aside from that my daily word counts are lower than I’d like (even sans break) but at least progress is going forward. Mostly I just need more discipline on weekends and after work to get more writing in.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Current WIP is going well. I decided to say “screw it” with something marketable and for a first full length novel (which likely won’t be publishable anyhow) go with a story I want to tell. So, I’m telling a story about Super Heroes focused on a girl who has been hiding her Superman-esque powers while working for the government, and then has herself revealed to the world; and a boy who is kind of like the son of Batman now out for revenge on all the powered people because he blames them for all the innocents who get caught in the cross fire and killed in the collateral damage of their super powered brawls.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Every now and then I come up with a plotting issue like “why the hell would you go this route?” which needs to be explained or mulled over, but for the most part it’s going fine aside from Ass In Char time.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Send cookies? Whiskey? Enough money to ignore the day job for a month and focus on writing? Not really at a point right now where I can accept help otherwise. Thanks though 😀
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Big picture is going slow but well. I have my first official publication credit on a short story, and am now raking in the rejection letters for other attempts. I seem to have found a kindred spirit writer in my cousin’s wife so we’ve been helping each other with proof reading short stories and finding places open for submission. I’d like to get a novel out on submission, but I’ve got to actually finish writing one first. I’m currently on track to hopefully have my current WIP finished before November so I can use the energy from NaNo to jump start another project while I gain distance from what I am writing.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I am honestly not sure. A lot of reviewers who liked my story in “Corrupts Absolutely?” like it either for the corporate crime angle and the fact it was the most “comic book” like. I’d like to think I have strong characters that act believably, but I don’t have enough ground to test that theory yet.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Descriptions, I need more of them and need to find a way to work them into the prose without sounding like I’m writing fan fic smut. I don’t think I described either main character until like chapter 3 or 4 in the current WIP which isn’t all that good really. I also tend to not describe locations beyond their basic parts, but then again, the locations don’t matter much beyond that.
Also, plotting. I run into plotting issues all the time. Like, I’ll have a plot laid out and outlined and all that fun stuff, then when writing it just doesn’t feel right or natural. I run into the 5 year old problem – the one where even a five year old can tell you that response sucks and is stupid. I can still work through issues, but it’d be nice to not suddenly slam into them when I am writing through that part.
October 3, 2012 — 11:22 AM
D.J.D. says:
How’s it going, writing-wise? There aren’t enough hours in the day. I can’t process my ideas into the computer fast enough. The scribbled bits of paper are piling up. They’re in my lunch bag, the bottom of my purse, the back of my car, and I’m pretty sure some are wedged down inside the Lazy Boy.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on? This is the novel I’ve been dreaming about all my life. I finally found the common thread that makes the story work.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having? Other than the hours in the day? The constant daydreaming? The middle of the night character analysis? Lack of fresh air? Nope, everything’s great!
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with? I’ll need to winterize my garden soon. Any takers?
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking? I try to imagine how those who know me will view me after reading this novel. Those closest to me won’t be surprised, just mildly terrified that my mind works this way and I have the nerve to put in on paper.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller? My writing is tight and my stories have meaning. I don’t speak if I don’t have something meaningful to say and then it’s said in as few words as possible. I hate unnecessary noise even if it’s ink-based.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses? I may be too emotionally attached to this story. There could be an issue with my OCD perfecting it into my grave. I may have to stipulate in my will, “It can be submitted now.”
October 3, 2012 — 11:43 AM
Raechel Hudson says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Well… Not good at the moment actually. As someone who has only been writing for a few years, I have only managed to produce one manuscript, several short stories, and the beginning of a new novel. Unfortunately, I have recently come to the conclusion that my finished manuscript is absolute rubbish. This conclusion is very depressing. It means I have to either scrap the story completely, or re-write it for what feels like the fiftieth time. The fun of writing it was pulped out a long time ago.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
My current project is a few pages worth of an interesting fantasy novel.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I just gotta get a firecracker under my butt. I have absolutely no motivation when it comes to writing.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Some beta readers would be lovely actually. I have a page and a weeny bit of an intro that people can read here http://raechelhudson.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/creative-jucie-it-flows-again.html
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I believe I have a real passion for writing. I love taking people on rides with my stories. I think this is probably a good quality for a writer. I also have reasonable grammar and spelling skills, which somehow seems to be a rare quality in this online world.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
My major weakness, as pointed ouot above, is a horrible lack of motivation. Months can go by where I haven’t written a word. It feels bad, but I just can’t get back into it…
October 3, 2012 — 11:45 AM
Dave Redman says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Slowly but surely. One day several hundred words of crap, the next only 50 of pure face slapping brilliance.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Slogging along. Half Way through main project. Started penning sequel, outlining treacle(?), and vomiting up random paragraphs for two side projects. All novels. Main project is epic (check), fantasy (check), dark (check), tragedy (check). A little on the depressing side but it will not let me change it.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Transition and character movement – I am having problems with transitiong from one scene to the next and with moving characters (gets a little repetitive).
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Keep doing what you’re doing. The blogs and comments are a welcome distraction sometimes.
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Just starting, so it looks like a grey dot on an otherwise blank canvas…..a canvas that is burning….the flames….oh the pretty flames.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Writing individual scenes. Metaphor, description, emotion.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Transition, character movement and getting in the groove. Seriously, one day the words will spill like guts from a splayed ringtail, others…..nothing….less than nothing. Many days I end up with a net word count in the -100s. But, what I end up with I like. Makes it a hell of a long trawl for me, but hopefully worth it in the end.
October 3, 2012 — 11:50 AM
Mark H says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
This is my first year of being serious in my goal to be a writer and so far it’s going well. The whole year had been a progress but I’ve gone from spending 10-20 hours a month of writing to 40, having spent about 260 hours so far this year. That’s a big jump over the amount of time I spent writing last year and it doesn’t even count November which could be 80-100 hours this year. I’ve also made some good progression on the craft of writing and of my productivity while working. In other words, I’m pleased.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I just, on Monday, finished the latest draft/rewrite of my novel from NaNoWriMo 2011. That’s going to marinade for a few weeks while it goes out to my critique group for some feedback. In the meantime, I’m snowflaking for this year’s NaNoWriMo and then I hope to find time to re-read the latest round of edits before the month is over.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Only that I can’t decide what I want to write this November. I’m toying between picking up one of about three unfinished manuscripts from years past or writing a new idea, but I haven’t yet decided which one. Unfortunately I’m running out of time to decide.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Pretty good. I’m still a writer with a day job, a social life and other hobbies, but I’m impressed with how much time I’ve been able to devote to the craft and how much I’ve learned by doing so. I expect to hear back this month from a publisher who asked to see the first three chapters of my manuscript after I pitched to him at When Words Collide (Which I really did because I wanted to try it, not because I hoped to get asked). To be honest, I’m not sure I expect to hear back on the affirmative but I’m hoping I’ll get some good feedback that I can use. I also got some solid feedback during When Words Collide when I submitted the manuscript to some editing and reading.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Because of years of thanklessly worldbuilding for roleplaying games, the worlds I develop for my stories are quite strong. I have no shortage of ideas of things to write about. I write very solid action scenes and I’m not an overly wordy writer.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
This is a little harder to gauge. My characters have very defined wants and needs in my mind, but conveying those desires in the text is something I’m not sure I do as well as I would like. I worry, as well, that the faults in those characters that are clear in my mind don’t come across that way. I also have a bad habit of sprinkling far too many commas into my writing. I’m hoping the latest critiques from my readers can tell me more because I spent some time working on the things I perceived that I needed to do, like making sure my characters felt consistent and exploring their senses more. We’ll see how I did.
October 3, 2012 — 11:53 AM
Paul Philip Carter says:
Chuck, first of all you are incredible. I love your blog and I have “Blackbirds” which is amazing and I can’t wait to get more of your books. (There, was that $5 bucks worth? Check’s in the mail, right?)
No but really, thanks for this wonderful opportunity.
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Going really well actually. One book pubbed, another in the wings as soon as the cover illustration is done and another getting some flesh on it.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Yes of course… wouldn’t be human otherwise. Oh wait, AM I human? Uh-oh…
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
I gotta say you have some of the BEST comments from readers in the world. I have traveled to MANY of the blogs/web pages of your blog readers and these are some TALENTED freaking people!!! Just keep doing what you all do best.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
All in all, big picture stuff is working out well. I feel pretty on track with what I have had planned out and hope to make some significant progress to finish out 2012 and make a gigantic big ass start to 2013 (provided we are still HERE after 12-21-2012 if you know what I mean…)
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Dude I am SERIOUSLY weak for a Margarita on the Rocks with extra salt… makes my WHOLE body relax and opens the door to A LOT of possibilities… but as a writer? I think like most initially the ability to complete a project was the biggie. I had my epic fantasy manuscript floating around for three years before I finally got off my fat ass and stopped waiting for “someone else” to do it all for me. Indie authorship is not everything, but it sure beats doing nothing at all. I suggest everyone to at least try it once… you may never go back!
Thanks Chuck!
October 3, 2012 — 12:06 PM
Curtis Edmonds says:
* How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Two projects, one I’m working on and one I’m not. One is a Kindle Single (or what we hope will be a Kindle Single) with a collaborator about… erm… a very topical issue that I don’t want to discuss too publicly, but it’s a hell of an idea and we’re having a lot of fun with it.
I have two chapters written on a legal pad that’s been sitting on my nightstand since August. I haven’t had the time and energy to transfer it from paper to pixels. Strong female protagonist, derelict spaceship, mysterious alien presence, and that’s all I have right now.
* Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
On the first one – working with a collaborator on a longform thing for the first time, and we’re pulling it in different directions. I think we’ll work it out, but it’s going fairly slowly and I’m almost getting tired of it.
Everything else is really about time. I have a thin window of time to write anything (9:30 when I put kids to bed to 11:30 when I go to bed) and that’s taken up by querying right now, and playoff baseball here in a week or so.
* Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
I need a time-turner, a foolproof exercise and weight loss program, and a literary agent who’s willing to give a struggling a writer a chance. (I understand that all of these three things are mythical.)
* Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Querying. Ay ay ay ay ay. Querying is like putting the biggest kick-me sign on your pants and showing it off to the universe. And it’s not just rejections, you understand. Rejection is bad enough. Right now, it’s either insta-rejection – the agent is up at three in the god-damned morning, rejecting queries, which has got to be the best argument for not being an agent that anyone ever came up with – or the long, slow wait for the clock to run out on the agent not responding. You have to set that aside; it’s part of the natural order of things. But every other stupid thing in the world conspires against you, and because your defenses are down, they find a way in.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
“I’d have to say dialogue.”
“What makes you say that?”
“Because I’m good at it, bitch.”
“Are you just saying that to make yourself look tough, or are you insulting me?”
“Well, maybe just the first thing.”
“Thought so.”
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Relying too heavily on dialogue and not fleshing it out more.
October 3, 2012 — 12:10 PM
Laura Libricz says:
Writing? Cool. Only because I’ve made it my top-priority. I’ve just independently self-published my first historical novel, have written 50,000 words of the second in the series and really want to start the third in Nov. with NaNo. I love writing Flash on Fridays because it’s really helping me focus and tighten up.
If anyone is up for writing a review, please contact me.
The big picture? My house is a mess (because my top-priority is time-consuming), we have mice and we can’t get rid of them even though we have two different types of poison out and every trap on the market. My cat loves mice but more than two or three a day is even too much for him. My daughter has moved out and I’m left here in this man-cave. At least they don’t complain when the place is a mess, as long as there’s something to eat.
October 3, 2012 — 12:11 PM
D. Moonfire says:
1. How’s it going, writing-wise?
I hit two million words written since I started putting things into my source control repository. 🙂 That’s a couple hundred short stories and eight novels (mostly given as holiday gifts). And I’m averaging 8-10k words a week because I like setting words down on paper.
2. How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I have a good number of irons in the fire right now. I have one novel (FOTS) that I’m trying to get the first couple chapters to be more alluring. I’m four chapters from the end of a short novel (BAM) and twelve chapters from the end of my weekly serial (PM).
3. Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Yeah, mainly with FOTS. I’m struggling to get the introduction to the novel stronger, but I don’t know what I’m missing. There is also the general appeal of the story. I’m told the middle and tail end are pretty good but the introduction is a “long rail”.
4. Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Beta readers for FOTS would be fantastic, either the first three chapters or the entire piece. I can pretty much create any format needed (Word, Mobi, EPUB), but I’m looking for what doesn’t work. I want that “I let the bathtub get cold” or “I was up at three in the morning” moment but I’m not sure how I’m missing it. Even if the reader doesn’t finish, I want to know *where* and *why* they gave up.
5. Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Sluggishly moving forward. I have a lot of projects, but no real movement. My last two attempts at getting published have not been that successful for reasons I’m not entirely sure why. I had a short story on Kindle but it appears to have fallen flat.
Mostly, I’m having a lot of trouble moving from the “given everything away” and into the “maybe make a few pennies on this”.
On the other hand, I’m getting very good at creating ebooks and typesetting physical books. 🙂
6. What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I’m pretty good at creating characters with depth and villians with a bit of heart.
7. More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I’m not good at describing the scene because either I get the “infodump” or the wave a brush and letting the reader figure it out. I’m also very verbose and have to work on reducing my word counts… significantly.
I also screw up words a lot, so I usually need an editor to catch the tense problems. *sigh*
October 3, 2012 — 12:17 PM
Laina says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Fantastarifficwondrous!
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
First Draft is about 30% through evolving into a Second Draft. I have a few people who are interested in reading, and I’m hoping they pull through and don’t hold back with the criticisms!
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Ensuring the skeletal structure is solid before adding the muscles, tendons, veins, etc. In other words, making sure the overall story is solid before getting bogged down in the gritty details. There is also a subplot that’s eluding me.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
YES! Advice on where to find: crit groups I can join and publications and/or contests I can submit sci-fi/fantasy pieces to. Or otherwise advice on how to find them myself. I’m at a loss!
Oh, beta reader are also welcome.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
The improvement in writing quality between Last Year’s Stuff to This Year’s Stuff is striking, and encourages me to keep going. Big picture = go!
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I’m telepathic and can magically transport readers into the worlds I build through words alone.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I am too critical of myself and I see every mistake I make as a gross sin upon writers everywhere. Though it helps make my writing better, it wears me down as well. I also have no idea how to publicize or gain any sort of following. I have a blog. I post stuff to it regularly. I don’t know what else to do to get my name out there.
October 3, 2012 — 12:50 PM
Quinn says:
Totally nabbing Mister Moonfire’s setup to answer the questions. I’M TOO LAZY TO REWRITE THEM DON’T JUDGE ME.
1. How’s it going, writing-wise?
Meh. Mehhh. Enghhh.
Things could be much better as far as writing goes. A few months ago I was putting out articles for a gaming organization, but once I found out that they didn’t plan on paying me (they said they would), I got out of there fast. Working for SoloMid is an amazing experience. However, my work consists of ghost writing and database entry.
This isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but I know that I need to be doing more. It’s just a matter of me figuring out what to do and where to do it. IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN *Wink*
2. How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
At the moment I’m working on the final touches on an assignment for my Journalism course. Lately I’ve had to put a ton of energy into writing things for college. Time management is something I definitely need to work on during the coming months. I need to figure out how to write things other than assignments.
3. Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I HAVE ZERO MOTIVATION. IT’S LIKE SOMEONE PISSED IN MY OFFICE CHAIR AND THEN RUBBED SHIT ALL OVER IT. CAPSLOCK.
After the recent cancer scare involving my father and my grandfather’s imminent death, all the events in the past month have left me emotionally and physically exhausted. Dealing with ‘real life’ issues comes first, but now that things are looking up I still feel depression. No motivation, no will to do anything other than what I absolutely have to do. Lately my depression and anxiety problems have been even worse and it’s starting to get on my nerves.
4. Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Send hugs. Or wish my happy birthday. October 8th is the day in which I become legal, but no one wants to hang out with me. It’s not really helping the whole depression thing.
OR YOU CAN SEND ME KITTENS. I LIKE KITTENS.
5. Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
The bigger picture is, uh, picturey? I think I’ve finally found what I want to do with my life. Journalism would allow me to travel and write. I’m sick and tired of living such a stagnant life. Something so fast paced and demanding would be good for me.
6. What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Characterization is something that I’ve never struggled with.
7. More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I switch tense a lot in my fictional pieces. Fucking tenses, I know how you work, but my brain doesn’t want to work. I think my brain is full of magnets.
I have also been told that my fictional pieces are too dry and they come off sounding more like an essay than a story. That makes me sad. 🙁
October 3, 2012 — 12:51 PM
L. Blankenship says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Well. I’m in a groove, it would seem.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I am self-publishing and everything’s on track to release my baby into the wild on Nov. 1.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
The ants in my pants are getting to be squirrel-sized, w/r/t that… but like the fish said: just keep writing, just keep writing…
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
You already are. Thanks for giving me things to laugh about. 🙂
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I’m publishing Part I of a six part story. I hope to start writing Part VI soon. Which is good, but also stressful. I’ve been actually writing this thing for about a year now, and it’s been in my head for far longer… I’ll be glad to have it done, but the hole it’s going to leave is intimidating.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
From what I’ve been told: world-building, exposition, and dialogue.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Getting emotions on the page. I naturally lean toward an objective voice. Which is okay in my science fiction, not so good in the fantasy.
(tips hat to all) Long time lurker, first time poster. See you around!
October 3, 2012 — 12:59 PM
Scott Zachary says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Ebbs and flows. When I’m writing every day, it flows. When I get distracted with petty little things like The Day Job, it ebbs. If I let too many days pass, I start doubting myself. Immediately moving on to the next story after I post my last piece keeps the momentum going and doesn’t leave time for my inner editor to remind me that I both suck and blow.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Focusing on trying to produce at least one flash fiction story every week. Outlining two larger projects but decided to hold off starting either of them until I’ve sharpened my pen nibs on short stories for a while. It’s been a damn long time since I wrote anything—the last month has seen more completed works than the previous fifteen years—and that’s not saying much of anything.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I’m a plotter who should be pantsing. Honestly. I’ll outline things to death and attempt to apply all the hot new plot structures the cool kids are using these days, simultaneously, which results in formulaic dead wood. I also get stuck researching things to death. There is a point of diminishing returns. I realize this. It’s pure and unadulterated procrasturbation.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
The flash fiction challenges here really helped me get off my ass and start writing, so thank you. Otherwise, just keep being your wonderful selves. The balance of advice, support, and “stop your damned whining” on TerribleMinds is perfect. Comments on the stories I post at my blog are also greatly appreciated—especially constructive criticism (but be gentle, because I’m a pretty, pretty pony with tissue paper skin). Beta readers would be awesome—and I would happily return the favor.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I plan on exploring different formats—comics, plays, screenwriting, whatever. Time will tell. The more stories I can produce the more confident I will feel about this whole writing thing. My plan is to post at least one story a week—hopefully upping the word count progressively—for the rest of the year. By then I hope to feel confident enough to start submitting short stories for publication. That’s the plan, anyway. Or I discover I’m not a writer after all and I take up underwater basket weaving.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Still trying to discover what those might be. Maybe dialogue? The “dialogue + terse description” format of screenplays and comic book scripts feels the more natural to write in.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
At this point? I’d say everything. But what frustrates me the most is how long it takes me to write anything. Even when I shut off the internal editor, I’m lucky if I can pump out five hundred words an hour. That’s a good hour. And I’m not a slow typist. Also, finishing what I start. To that end, I’m seriously thinking about doing NaNoWriMo this year, because it would force me to improve in both those areas. Or my heart will explode from the caffeine IV drip I’ll be hooked up to all month.
October 3, 2012 — 1:11 PM
Bryce says:
>> How’s it going, writing-wise?
I’m suffering from extreme lack of focus.
>> How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
My novel has been stalled for a couple of months. I’m intimidated by the amount of work involved, and my (quite reasonable) fear that it’s not going to be the amazing thing that’s banging around in my head.
Instead, I’m playing around with short stories, which feel uninspired and are a chore to finish.
>> Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Covered in previous answer.
>> Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
The people who have read my book so far have been quite complimentary. I suspect it ought to be selling better than it is now (five sales a month, tops), but I have no idea how to market. Advice?
>> Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Self-published one novel, and put a few short stories up on my website. Tried making the transition to “full-time writer” after losing my job in February. Book sales aren’t even covering beer money, and let me tell you, I’m a light drinker.
>> What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I think I do humor pretty well, and handle the “science” part of science fiction in a relatively accurate way. My dialogue feels legit, though my characters seem to suffer from interchangeable voices. Top-notch speller.
>> More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Non-existent descriptions, loose plotting, clueless marketing.
October 3, 2012 — 1:16 PM
Tracy Barnett says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
I’d say well, when I get to write. It’s more of an issue of making the time and keeping my focus when I sit down at the keyboard.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I’m in the scenario-writing stage for School Daze, which is fine, but I have to write directly into Adobe Acrobat (long story), which is a bucket of suck. For One Shot (which is Kickstarting right now: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/sandandsteam/one-shot-a-roleplaying-game-of-murder-and-vengeanc), I’m doing rewrites based on editor notes and playtest feedback. Those are going fairly smoothly. The other projects I have in the hopper (A Verbis Ad Verbara, and TerrorForm) are making zero progress. I need to make more time to write.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
One Shot is an interesting beast. I believe very much in the project, and think it’s a great game. However, it’s a two-player tabletop RPG, it deals in loving and lingering detail with the subjects of vengeance and murder, and I’m not done refining it yet. I had hoped that the reaction to it would be more pronounced when I launched the project.
I’m not concerned about it making it to the funding goal; I think that will happen. However, I can’t help but think that I’ve missed something in the presentation that will reach out and grab people.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
If you like gritty, noir-style vengeance, you should check out One Shot: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/sandandsteam/one-shot-a-roleplaying-game-of-murder-and-vengeanc If it’s up your alley, spread the word, and if it doesn’t flip your switch, let me know why. Need to know if I’m missing an audience, or if the project is aimed in the wrong direction.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
The bigger picture is looking good. Work is going well, I’m sleeping well, enjoying life, and have managed to find ways to de-stress and relax that don’t require me talking to other people (I tend to use people as crutches).
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I am emotional and evocative. I can convey mood and feeling very well.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I tend to not write enough to flesh out what I’m trying to say. I over-rely on the mood and the feeling and don’t spell out what needs spelling out. This leads to my writing being vague and purposeless. Lots of feeling, but no substance.
October 3, 2012 — 1:18 PM
Dawn says:
How’s it going, writing-wise? There aren’t enough hours in the day. I can’t process my ideas into the computer fast enough. The scribbled bits of paper are piling up. They’re in my lunch bag, the bottom of my purse, the back of my car, and I’m pretty sure some are wedged down inside the Lazy Boy.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on? This is the novel I’ve been dreaming about all my life. I finally found the common thread that makes the story work.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having? Other than the hours in the day? The constant daydreaming? The middle of the night character analysis? Lack of fresh air? Nope, everything’s great!
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with? I’ll need to winterize my garden soon. Any takers?
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking? I try to imagine how those who know me will view me after reading this novel. Those closest to me won’t be surprised, just mildly terrified that my mind works this way and I have the nerve to put in on paper.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller? My writing is tight and my stories have meaning. I don’t speak if I don’t have something meaningful to say and then it’s said in as few words as possible. I hate unnecessary noise even if it’s ink-based.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses? I may be too emotionally attached to this story. There could be an issue with my OCD perfecting it into my grave. I may have to stipulate in my will, “It can be submitted now.”
October 3, 2012 — 2:27 PM
Andrew Jack says:
First up, Happy Birthday Quinn! I hope you are given the foodstuffs of your choosing.
How’s it going, writing-wise?
Up and down. I finished a novel which is good…but the novel was bad…which is not nearly as bad as I thought it would be. Moving on to the next one which I’m pretty happy about. One of my short stories got bought for actual money so I’m stoked about that!
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Currently on novel two and a short story about elder gods on the internet.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I’m still consolidating what I learned writing the first novel about story structure and plotting. I think I know enough now to know I don’t really know anything.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with? You mean beyond the constant free advice, motivation and laughs you already provide? No, I think I’m good.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Pretty good, I’m better than i was last year and last year i was better than the year before that. I’ve got my depression under control which was a huge step and things all around are looking really positive. There’s still a lot of work to do but I think I’d be oddly disappointed if it was easy.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I can write a good action scene and snappy dialogue.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
EVERYTHING ELSE. Coherent plotting is currently my biggest issue closely followed by chronic restart disease.
October 3, 2012 — 3:07 PM
marlanesque says:
>How’s it going, writing-wise?
I am making slow but steady progress on the sequel to my first published novel. I am trying to focus on the tasks at hand and not at how much work is in front of me. I’m also praying that the drafts stop sucking soon.
>How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
Aside from the in-progress sequel, A Latent Dark has been getting some great reviews. For a first novel, it’s strange seeing complete strangers say nice things about my brain baby.
I have a sci-fi bio-horror novel coming out soon. That’s with an editor right now and I am debating whether to attempt to Kickstart it or not.
I also wrote a thing, based off some flash fiction pieces that might end up being a serialized collection of sci-fi Kindle ebooks. That’s a ways off though.
>Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I have no idea what I am doing on Kickstarter. Some projects that seem completely uninteresting to me are getting 500% funding, while others seem to flounder. As an obscure self-publishing author, I find the whole process terribly intimidating.
>Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Happy to hear from any Kickstarter participants who have success/failure stories to share. I wish I had something ready for beta reading right now, because this community would be awesome for that.
(This is also a good time to ask for beta readers if you need ‘em.)
>Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
Consistent. I manage at least 1500 words a day, usually more while working a full time job.
I have several projects in different phases of development and it feels pretty good. I am blown away by how well some people have received my first book, and it makes me a little nervous about rushing the next one in the series. Trying not to do that.
>What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I would like to think that my stories are entertaining and interesting. I work hard at that.
>More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I tend to overwrite, ramble, go down unnecessary rabbit holes. I need to be more economical with my words.
I am also a retard at social media and a bit of an introvert on Twitter. I think I could probably gain more readers if I were willing to be more visible, but that falls outside my comfort zone.
October 3, 2012 — 3:16 PM
Sporkdelis says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
I think everything is going very well. I am going to miss my present personally set deadline for a large WIP I’m working on, but it was probably unrealistic knowing the schedule I already had for my summer. The deadline was set purely to attempt to get a large piece of work copy edited for free as I randomly won a contest. That’s not happening, and so a short story I wrote that looks ridiculously promising will get the edit, and I will have to fork out money for the novel to be edited when its time is right. But it will be right.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
My novel is hard going at the end. It is on its third re-write, and the ending still sucks. I have ignored my blog since July trying to get it done, and it’s just not going to happen before next year, so I’m going to get back to that. I probably shouldn’t have stopped, but couldn’t read with a short deadline on a big project and my blog is a book review blog (for now. With the difficulties of working 40hrs at a job I hate with a 2 year old and a side business, I’m thinking my blogging could be about other things next year).
I’m taking a little time to write for the flash challenge this week
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
I think I’ve mentioned them several times now, and it feels like whining to say them again.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
I actually need names of liquer and beer brands with animals on the logo or in the name. I’m sure someone knows a brand or two.
I wish I could ask for beta readers, but maybe that will have to wait for January. You’re going to do this again then right?
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I think I have stars in the eyes going on. but I have a game plan for marketing, a book nearly finished and several shorts getting ready to go to magazine submissions and probably then straight to the e-book market, plus three more well fleshed out ideas to choose from when I’m done. It looks as good as it can for a debut as far as I can know such things.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I can convey characters in short amount of time, and really make someone care about them.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I think my dialogue sucks.
On top of that I’m increasingly concerned about whether or not I’m doing it right punctuation and grammar wise. I feel like I have the whole dang thing wrong.
October 3, 2012 — 4:02 PM
Jon says:
Thanks for asking, Chuck. Here’s as good a place to spill as any :).
> How’s it going, writing-wise?
That depends entirely what the goal is. The goal WAS to get a novel written (I’ve completed two, of which one is decent, of which neither has been written in the past 8 years). And I got 8 chapters in, 30k words or so. And realized that the magic system is broken (urban fantasy) and 4 of the 8 chapters are digressions. I’m not in a funk about it, but I’m finding it easier to get a flash fiction site up and running and to write a few short stories to submit than I am to get back to the piece.
> Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
Apart from the explosion of suck in the novel? Not really :). It’s very frustrating to be a technically competent writer who can’t tell stories.
> Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Brain transplant from someone who can tell stories?
> What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
Words, images, pacing. I can write the fuck out of a sentence, paragraph, or scene. Flash are a lot of fun because they’re just a single scene, usually.
> More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
Did I mention stories? Front-to-back, multi-chapter stories. I know how it’s *supposed* to work, but none of the fiddly bits ever fit together right and I end up giving up in disgust half the time. The one I have now, I’m definitely not giving up on – I have a fairly novel concept for the world, a good group of characters, and a story engine that could ride to a series if I could write the first #$#*$ing book.
I’ve tried every method I can think of – cards, whiteboards, rigid outlines, loose outlines, freestyling, etc., etc. I’ve managed to finish 1 by headlights – my first, 15 years ago before I knew how to write – and my second by cards > outline, but I just can’t seem to make it work in the last 8 or so years.
It’s hard now b/c I only have 2 writing days – 3-year-old twins and a 3/5 work at home job means that I only have my 2 commute days to write (all other time is solidly accounted for, believe). So there’s no momentum… and I don’t know that that’s going to change in the next 5 years, either.
Sigh. Okay, vent over. Back to writing flash, which at least is bite-sized and achievable 🙂
October 3, 2012 — 5:14 PM
Wendy Withers says:
How’s it going, writing-wise?
It was going well. Now I’m bogged down with school and work and writing a graduate thesis. I need more hours in my day.
How goes progress on any current projects? Whatcha working on?
I’m currently working on Riven, a vampire novel with a twist. The twist is that the protagonist has a kind of vampire multiple personality disorder. She is human by day and vampire by night, but she can’t remember any of the things she does as her vampire self. It’s my self-publishing experiment. I’m 140+ pages in and more than halfway finished with the draft that I’m working on.
Any problems with said projects? Issues you’re having?
The issue that I’m having is that some readers get very confused in the first few chapters because I introduce a lot of characters. Some readers don’t have this problem and have been very positive in general. I also need to just finish the thing.
Anything I or the lovely community of terribleminds can help with?
Beta readers would be helpful. Also, any advice on finding a book doctor and working with Scrivener to format ebooks would be awesome.
Beyond individual projects, how’s the bigger picture looking?
I just got feedback from a designer about my website. I am stressing out a bit about my graduate thesis, but I have enough money right now to work on my website and do things like buy cover art and hire an editor, so I’m actually better than normal.
What are your strengths as a writer and storyteller?
I have a good command of the English language and have some awesome ideas.
More importantly: what and where are your weaknesses?
I make things too vague for the reader while trying to build up suspense.
October 3, 2012 — 5:33 PM
Patrick Regan says:
Well, the biggest thing in my writing life is that I’ve decided to move out west to Los Angeles so I can better make my way in film-monkeying. So a lot of my work lately has been moving to that goal! If anyone lives in LA, has any advice about getting a day job there, or the city itself, I’d appreciate it!
As for the actual writing projects, I’ve got two on deck. One is a rewrite of my feature. In point of fact, the feature is something I’ll be pitching at the Austin Film Festival Pitch Contest. Writing an awesome pitch is doing wonders for helping me realize the important parts of the script, get what my professor called the “nugget” of the story right. The essence, the key conflict.
I’m also working on the first draft of a pilot. It was originally my first feature screenplay for film school. The feature? A mess. This pilot? Man, I’ve got some exciting ideas for it.
October 3, 2012 — 6:00 PM
Kyoko says:
As far as questions, here’s mine: do you have any particular source that you use for real life research? So far, my methods are shoddy and while I can get by with Googling, I really want a reliable source for some of my often highly specific questions. I’ve contacted the FBI and they’ve been nice and helpful, but the time frame for getting feedback from them is way too long. It takes up to two weeks and sometimes more to get a reply to my research questions. So if you have any suggestions about whose brain I can pick with a decent turnaround time, I’d be grateful.
I’m currently 300 pages and 115K words into my third novel, and 349 pages and 132K words into my fourth novel. My first novel is still unpublished but I’m revising my query letter to start sending it out to agents again. I had a dry period where I didn’t send anything out over the summer because I got a bit rundown from rejection letters.
I’m 23, and I just moved to a new town and I’ve got a daytime job, but I’m still trying to figure out what to do about my writing. I want to get published because I love being a writer with all my heart and soul, and also because I want to do this full time and get paid for it. However, I’m still unsure as to whether I should go the traditional route or take the risk and self-publish. I worry that I’m wasting time with publishers, but at the same time, traditional pub would get me resources I won’t have on my own. Ugh. It’s seriously a pain-in-the-ass to be me right now.
The genres that my novels are in are urban fantasy and high fantasy. I’m working on two different stories–one that will be a trilogy and one that is an epic. I think they are both marketable and relatively well written (but hell if I know, I wrote this crap) but it’s still hard to get any traction since the only accomplishments I have are a B.A. in English and the fact that I won NaNoWriMo last year. I still need a consistent Beta reader/editor too, so if you have any info on that in future posts, I’ll be ecstatic.
And thank you for asking about us, Mr. Wendig. I wish I had found you sooner because you’re by far one of my favorite authors and your advice is extremely helpful. Take care.
October 3, 2012 — 7:18 PM