Ahem, ahem.
Hear ye, hear ye.
Here are the three opening lines I’ve chosen:
Brendan Gannon: “Everyone else remembers it as the day the saucers came, but I remember it as the day a man in a suit shot my father.”
Joe Parrino: “Three truths will I tell you and one lie.”
Delilah Dawson: “Thursday was out to get me.”
This was, as so many contests here are anymore, a tough one to pick. Nearly 200 entries (!) and many of them good. (Though, pro-tip: bad spelling and/or typos will never help you win here.)
Here’s roughly what I ended up looking for:
I wanted lines that told multiple potential stories. Meaning, a writer could read it and find a world of stories coming out of that one line — not just the one obvious one, say. Some lines were very specific to a genre or to an event and so I hesitated using them, despite their inherent awesomeness. The exception here might be the “saucer” one, but it was so cool I had to use it. Don’t judge me.
So, the three who won:
Contact me, I shall hook you up with a copy of Bait Dog.
(Bait Dog is now available, by the way. Just $2.99 until next Wednesday. Plug, plug, hint, hint.)
Everybody else:
You’ve got 1000 words.
Write a story using one of the above opening lines.
Due by Friday, Aug 17th, at noon EST. Post online, link in the comments.
You know the drill.
Icarus Mortis says:
“I wanted lines that told multiple potential stories.”
It was a good learning experience. I tried to think on from mine after I posted it, only then to realise how restrictive it was. I guess if I can’t be creative with it from the start, how is the reader?
August 10, 2012 — 10:29 AM
Darlene Underdahl says:
I didn’t win (sniffle), but I bought Bait Dog anyway. And I preordered Blake Crouch’s Pines. I’m going totally badass. I need to do some writing.
August 10, 2012 — 10:49 AM
Paul Baxter says:
Darkene, glad to hear that you’re going totally badass, because HALFassed badass would just be confusing.
August 10, 2012 — 10:57 AM
Casz Brewster says:
So, here’s how they look to me:
1. Sci Fi
2. Fantasy / Fairy Tale and/or Horror
3. Crime/Thriller.
I always write #1 & #2. Perhaps I should try #3?
Just curious which one pulls everyone else the most?
August 10, 2012 — 11:33 AM
Erik Mason says:
Here’s my effort for #1.
The Day the Saucers Came:
http://geekonablog.blogspot.com/2012/08/story-day-saucers-came.html
I hope you enjoy it!
August 10, 2012 — 12:22 PM
Bryon Quertermous says:
Booooooooooooo. This is because I questioned your creativity advice isn’t it? Boooooooooo *throws zombie hand back at Chuck*
August 10, 2012 — 1:05 PM
Darlene Underdahl says:
The Lie
http://darlene.underdahl.net/?p=174
August 10, 2012 — 3:50 PM
Richard says:
I wrote this on my phone, so please forgive any Autocorrect flubs I failed to catch in editing. It runs 991 words and is called The Forgotten Song of the Pink Rage. Enjoy.
http://byrichardlake.blogspot.com/2012/08/the-forgotten-song-of-pink-rage.html
August 10, 2012 — 4:41 PM
Richard says:
I believe I may have screwed up royally here by misreading the instructions. “Opening line” you say? Oops. Disqualify me immediately from the fabulous prize package.
August 10, 2012 — 5:57 PM
Michael says:
http://innocentsaccidentshints.blogspot.com/2012/08/terrible-minds-challenge-than-anything.html
August 10, 2012 — 6:08 PM
Bronson O'Quinn says:
I’m taking the first one, but I’ll be damned if I’ll be pigeonholed into a specific genre!
“Suits and Saucers”
http://www.disposabletea.com/2012/08/the-opening-lines-revealed.html
August 10, 2012 — 6:47 PM
Decaying Orbits says:
I’m going to count this as my first official rejection letter. I can’t decide which line to use. Decisions, decisions.
August 10, 2012 — 7:10 PM
R Thomas Allwin says:
Well, I bought Bait Dog before the winners were chosen, so I’ll just tell myself that Chuck decided it would be better to pick people who didn’t have it already… I like both the first and the last line equally.
August 10, 2012 — 7:10 PM
Smash says:
It’s been a while, but I’m back this week. Not very creative with the title, but this is “Thursday.”
http://thepantslesswonder.blogspot.com/2012/08/thursday-flash-fiction-challenge.html
August 10, 2012 — 8:48 PM
Shiri Sondheimer says:
*hangs head*
Seriously ashamed of my typos.
My chief critique-r (also knows as my husband) read this little piece and said, “I like it, but I don’t get it.” To which I was forced to reply, “I’m not sure I get it either.” Forced my brain in a direction different than that in which the line wanted to take me. On the other side of this link is the 940 words my brain barfed up in response to the challenge. Or protest. Possibly surrender…
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/this-just-in/saucers/
August 10, 2012 — 10:11 PM
Nicki Ivey says:
I was really excited by the saucers and suit opening line, and kind of even really like where it took me. It was an interesting first experience with one of these challenges.
http://offthebeatenplan.com/fiction/killsuit-or-the-day-the-saucers-came/
August 11, 2012 — 3:26 PM
Max says:
The Man Who Shot My Father
http://mjrhsstories.blogspot.co.uk/2012/08/the-man-who-shot-my-father.html
Considered trying to play around with “saucer” but looks like others got there first!
August 11, 2012 — 5:18 PM
Erin H says:
I chose #2. I hope you believe it sucks less than being poked in the eye.
http://deafchickie.tumblr.com/
August 11, 2012 — 6:55 PM
Robin Dunn says:
Thanks for the cool prompts. Got 900 good words out of the Thursday one 😉
Cheers- RWD
August 11, 2012 — 10:51 PM
BJ Kerry says:
My Story
http://kerry-mutterings.blogspot.ie/2012/08/chuck-wendig-flash-fiction-challenge.html
August 12, 2012 — 11:41 AM
AB Singer says:
This would be mine. Nasty, nasty thoughts you gave me…
http://ultravioletandinfrared.blogspot.co.uk/2012/08/the-story-teller.html
August 12, 2012 — 12:00 PM
Shedrick says:
So, here’s mine–based on “Everyone else remembers it as the day the saucers came, but I remember it as the day a man in a suit shot my father.”
Calling Down the Stars: http://serialdistractions.com/2012/08/12/calling-down-the-stars/
August 12, 2012 — 1:16 PM
Ben says:
http://cinaphile.blogspot.com/2012/08/three-truths-and-lie.html
August 12, 2012 — 2:14 PM
David Grigg says:
Funny, I never intended to pick this sentence, but then I got an idea.
It’s a little over length again, but not too much, I hope.
It’s called (boringly): The Day the Saucers Came. http://narratorium.com/2012/08/13/the-day-the-saucers-came/
August 13, 2012 — 3:38 AM
Josh Loomis says:
Like others, I chose “Thursday” for a title. Not sure how many others chose this particular subject, though.
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2012/08/13/flash-fiction-thursday/
August 13, 2012 — 7:41 AM
Phil Norris says:
I’ve gone for “Thursday was out to get me” and here is my little offering called “Bad Day”
http://philnorris63.wordpress.com/2012/08/13/bad-day-short-story/
August 13, 2012 — 9:51 AM
J.M. Dow says:
I went with the “saucers” sentence, but because it was so OBVIOUSLY science fiction, I decided I absolutely did not want to write a sci-fi story. I took saucers a little more literally in this instance, and I came up with a sort of…heist-like story.
http://whirlingnerdish.blogspot.com/2012/08/flash-fiction-challenge-thirteenth.html
August 13, 2012 — 12:51 PM
Beth L. says:
Can’t resist three truths and one lie! I give you The Fool.
http://knotachance.tumblr.com/
August 13, 2012 — 9:57 PM
Jo Eberhardt says:
This was kinda fun. I had story ideas for all three opening lines, but finally decided to go with option two. I give you:
The Game
August 14, 2012 — 2:11 AM
Jim Franklin says:
I chose number three. It turns out I really need to work on my titles because this one is called ‘Hunted by Thursday’.
http://www.thezombiechimp.com/2012/08/14/flash-fiction-hunted-by-thursday/
I would love to know what you think.
August 14, 2012 — 8:50 AM
Tim Whitcher says:
I’m drawing a blank. This sucks.
August 14, 2012 — 5:18 PM
Casz Brewster says:
I started to write something really creepy and stalker-ish and it turned out more cutesy. It is what it is. I hope you like it.
I chose: Thursday was out to get me.
http://www.casondrabrewster.com/?p=809
August 14, 2012 — 7:01 PM
Cari Hislop says:
“Everyone else remembers it as the day the saucers came, but I remember it as the day a man in a suit shot my father…”
“Your old man was run over by a lawn mower. Suits and Saucers my ass…”
http://blogspot.regencyromancenovels.com/?p=3013#more-3013
August 15, 2012 — 10:39 AM
Esme Pilbeam says:
Elizabethan Dread
by Esme Pilbeam
Three truths will I tell you and one lie, only this and no more.
My time is short. They will be coming for me soon. I pray there will be time enough to conclude this Confession before the axe separates my head from the rest of my body.
August 15, 2012 — 2:53 PM
Mike says:
I had an idea to do a twist on ‘saucers’, but after a quick scan I think the twist would be to actually have flying saucers in the story. Sigh. Thinking cap back on.
August 16, 2012 — 11:42 AM
Jeremy Jones says:
I went with the three truths I will tell you, and one lie.
Cheers!
http://alleywayrover.blogspot.com/2012/08/the-kook-thief-tyrant-skeptic-and.html
August 16, 2012 — 12:09 PM
Leslie says:
Saucers!
My offering: http://lesannberry.com/2012/08/messy-business.html
August 16, 2012 — 2:00 PM
Scott Weber says:
Love this challenge. I have always felt that some days were better than other so I chose “Thursday was out to get me”.
Usually you say something like that when you have a string of bad luck, but maybe, just maybe the day really is out to get you.
http://scottweberwriter.wordpress.com/2012/08/16/thursday-was-out-to-get-me-chuck-wendig-story-challenge/
August 16, 2012 — 2:02 PM
M. A. Brotherton says:
This turned out to be a lot more difficult than I thought it would be:
http://mabrotherton.com/flash-fiction-the-accident/
August 17, 2012 — 12:05 AM
Jenna Bird says:
I overshot the word limit. I have trouble feeling shame about that, since most times I don’t make it TO the limit, or within 100 words. (And I cut the ending short/rushed to not go too far past the limit – and because it was 2:30 in the morning…)
I picked: “Thursday was out to get me.”
http://jennaelf.blogspot.com/2012/08/flash-fiction-challenge-opening-line.html
August 17, 2012 — 4:37 AM
Icarus Mortis says:
Finally finished my entry; what a challenge, but a good one.
I (ab)used Brendan’s line to write: Dustbin > Erase All; 1,000 words exactly! O_O
http://blog.icarusmortis.co.uk/2012/08/17/dustbin-erase-all/
August 17, 2012 — 5:28 AM