Behold last week’s challenge: “Just The Opening Line.”
So, in less than two weeks now, my debut original novel — Blackbirds — enters into the world. Hopefully with a mad flutter of wings and not the thud of a dead crow hitting the windshield of a parked car, but that’s a thing that’s out of my control. The book aims to be a sharp-toothed tale about fate and free will, featuring a girl who can see how you’re going to die just by touching you. (Let me add, in a moment of self-promo whorishness, that if you pre-order the book now from Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), or B&N, and you email me proof of said pre-ordering to terribleminds at gmail dot com, I will toss you my short story collection and the first Atlanta Burns novella. For free, in PDF or MOBI format.)
What all this means is, today we’re talking about death.
The Big “D.”
Demise. Dirt-Nap. Stick a fork in me, I’m done.
You have 1000 words to write a short story that prominently features death. What that means is up to you, of course. And genre is also in your court.
But a death — or the concept of death, or an exploration of death — must be front and center.
I’ll pick my favorite before Blackbirds releases on April 24th, and I’ll send the winner an e-book of my novel from either Amazon (MOBI) or B&N (ePUB).
You’ve got 1000 words.
Post the stories at your blogs or online spaces — don’t post here in the comments as the stories are too long to live at Casa Terribleminds. I’ll delete stories that post here. I’ll bring the hammer down.
Deadline is — well, given that I’m traveling next week, let’s short the deadline by one day.
Your new deadline is Thursday, 4/19, by noon EST.
EDIT:
AND WE HAVE A WINNER.
*pant, pant, pant*
Man, took me a while to go through these — I thought I’d have time traveling but I suspect I underestimated how many of you would enter.
Some really great stories here. The game has been upped. I found myself having to pick apart entries based on tinier details to count them out.
Spritzing death with a douche-spray? Death’s ride? Red and the Wolf? Many many good entries. A couple-few that were hard to read (blogs with images behind the text are unpleasant at best). But mostly top notch.
I’m calling the winner for:
A De/composition.
By Ilona Rose.
It’s short and strongly written and struck me in a very sad way.
Ilona, contact me at terribleminds at gmail dot com.
Thanks, all!
Jessica Friday says:
I’ve loved everyone’s stories! Here’s my contribution:
http://www.jfriday.com/2012/04/flash-fiction-challenge-victory-after-death/
April 18, 2012 — 11:04 AM
Jeff Xilon says:
Ok, here is my entry:
“The Price of Wisdom”
http://www.jeffxilon.com/the-price-of-wisdom/
Now I can start reading everybody’s stories.
April 18, 2012 — 12:06 PM
Danya says:
BOOM!
“Just The Job” – http://crayonyellow.wordpress.com/2012/04/18/just-the-job/
These stories are full of win.
April 18, 2012 — 2:51 PM
Alexa Muir says:
How could I resist this challenge. My entry; “Death Duty – Apply Within”
http://awannabewriters.blogspot.co.uk/2012/04/flash-fiction-challenge-death-is-on.html
April 18, 2012 — 5:04 PM
Paul Ellis says:
Here is my answer to the challenge. I give you … “Cookies”
http://dsnite.blogspot.com/2012/04/flash-fiction-cookies.html
April 18, 2012 — 6:58 PM
Shane Liebling says:
“Every Breath You Take”
http://github.com/shanel/flash_fiction/blob/master/low_tide.txt
April 18, 2012 — 8:51 PM
Ian Brown says:
Man, this challenge was fun to do. Plus I had a chance to write in first-person present tense! My first submission to the Terrible Minds flash fiction, too.
Here it is, “A Walk in the Woods:”
http://www.humming-rain.com/2012/04/18/flash-fiction-a-walk-in-the-woods/
April 19, 2012 — 2:30 AM
Michael says:
Here’s my own last eleventh-hour entry, “Cold Calculus”. Win or lose, I hope people like it.
http://verdantartifice.com/2012/04/flash-fiction-cold-calculus/
April 19, 2012 — 3:28 AM
Ilona Rose Graham says:
A short one from me this week, and eleventh-hour as well. Can’t wait to read everyone else’s.
http://ilonatherose.wordpress.com/a-decomposition/
April 19, 2012 — 7:30 AM
Marijke Brick says:
Please find my entry, Death Happens, via the link below.
http://mkbrick.blogspot.com/
April 19, 2012 — 8:17 AM
Andy Goldman says:
The Brief Afterlife of David Sinclair:
http://lithicbee.wordpress.com/2012/04/19/flash-fiction-challenge-death/
Thanks for the inspiration.
April 19, 2012 — 8:28 AM
Karen says:
Here’s my submission:
http://unseelieorvampire.blogspot.com/
April 19, 2012 — 9:16 AM
Ed Skinner says:
Been monitoring for a while and finally took the plunge, graphic included: http://flat5.net/2012/04/evil-eye/
April 19, 2012 — 10:14 AM
Robert L Meyer says:
Please don’t make any assumptions about this. Or call the cops. It won’t do her any good.
http://the-writer-blocked.blogspot.com/2012/04/my-mistress-death.html
April 19, 2012 — 10:49 AM
Drunkle says:
Long time lurker, first time participant. Enjoy!
http://mindofdrunkle.com/2012/04/19/heres-my-attempt-at-flash-fiction-because-all-the-cool-kids-are-doing-it/
April 19, 2012 — 11:10 AM
Mrs G says:
Freshly flashed today: Infinitely More Difficult
Not for those who are queasy about matter-of-fact discussion of suicide. JSYK.
April 19, 2012 — 11:16 AM
Amanda says:
A tale of how a god dies, when they cannot die.
http://amandalyngordon.blogspot.com/2012/04/flash-fiction-ala-chuck-wendig-death.html
April 19, 2012 — 12:00 PM
Louise Sorensen says:
Here’s mine.
Death Visits http://wp.me/p1BAlV-2T
I look forward to reading the rest of the entries. You are all very good.
April 19, 2012 — 1:52 PM
Bex says:
I wasn’t able to make the deadline for this challenge, but having read through the other entries, I have to say that the piece by the ‘lastmoleman’ is fantastic! Have bookmarked your site Mr Moleman and will be checking out your new stuff regularly. Nice work!
Bex
April 19, 2012 — 3:05 PM
Ilona says:
I agree Bex. Drew / lastmoleman – beautifully haunting. So far this list has made me chuckle, given me goosebumps, and made me think.
I need to do this more often.
April 19, 2012 — 10:15 PM
Mike says:
Just in time – a quick write this morning. Fairy tale characters pitched in to help.
http://www.ravensview.ca/ravens/2012/04/death-is-on-the-table.html
April 20, 2012 — 11:58 AM
terribleminds says:
So, for the record, this list is epic.
Some great stuff here — I’m still getting through it all whilst traveling.
Expect an answer come Tuesday. 🙂
— c.
April 22, 2012 — 12:20 PM
raskyred says:
Just wrote it. I know this is late but wanted to share for anyone who comes across this archived 😛 Hope that’s ok
http://raskyred.wordpress.com/2012/04/24/flash-fiction-april-13-late/
April 23, 2012 — 8:24 PM
terribleminds says:
AND WE HAVE A WINNER.
*pant, pant, pant*
Man, took me a while to go through these — I thought I’d have time traveling but I suspect I underestimated how many of you would enter.
Some really great stories here. The game has been upped. I found myself having to pick apart entries based on tinier details to count them out.
Spritzing death with a douche-spray? Death’s ride? Red and the Wolf? Many many good entries. A couple-few that were hard to read (blogs with images behind the text are unpleasant at best). But mostly top notch.
I’m calling the winner for:
A De/composition.
By Ilona Rose.
It’s short and strongly written and struck me in a very sad way.
http://ilonatherose.wordpress.com/a-decomposition/
Ilona, contact me at terribleminds at gmail dot com.
Thanks, all!
— c.
April 27, 2012 — 7:45 AM