Behold last week’s challenge: “Just The Opening Line.”
So, in less than two weeks now, my debut original novel — Blackbirds — enters into the world. Hopefully with a mad flutter of wings and not the thud of a dead crow hitting the windshield of a parked car, but that’s a thing that’s out of my control. The book aims to be a sharp-toothed tale about fate and free will, featuring a girl who can see how you’re going to die just by touching you. (Let me add, in a moment of self-promo whorishness, that if you pre-order the book now from Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), or B&N, and you email me proof of said pre-ordering to terribleminds at gmail dot com, I will toss you my short story collection and the first Atlanta Burns novella. For free, in PDF or MOBI format.)
What all this means is, today we’re talking about death.
The Big “D.”
Demise. Dirt-Nap. Stick a fork in me, I’m done.
You have 1000 words to write a short story that prominently features death. What that means is up to you, of course. And genre is also in your court.
But a death — or the concept of death, or an exploration of death — must be front and center.
I’ll pick my favorite before Blackbirds releases on April 24th, and I’ll send the winner an e-book of my novel from either Amazon (MOBI) or B&N (ePUB).
You’ve got 1000 words.
Post the stories at your blogs or online spaces — don’t post here in the comments as the stories are too long to live at Casa Terribleminds. I’ll delete stories that post here. I’ll bring the hammer down.
Deadline is — well, given that I’m traveling next week, let’s short the deadline by one day.
Your new deadline is Thursday, 4/19, by noon EST.
EDIT:
AND WE HAVE A WINNER.
*pant, pant, pant*
Man, took me a while to go through these — I thought I’d have time traveling but I suspect I underestimated how many of you would enter.
Some really great stories here. The game has been upped. I found myself having to pick apart entries based on tinier details to count them out.
Spritzing death with a douche-spray? Death’s ride? Red and the Wolf? Many many good entries. A couple-few that were hard to read (blogs with images behind the text are unpleasant at best). But mostly top notch.
I’m calling the winner for:
A De/composition.
By Ilona Rose.
It’s short and strongly written and struck me in a very sad way.
Ilona, contact me at terribleminds at gmail dot com.
Thanks, all!
Anthony says:
My daughter wrote this over summer break last year – She was twelve.
I’m posting it with her permission.
http://thesteakswillberazed.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=72#/d3gqrrd
April 13, 2012 — 7:56 AM
Lindsay Mawson says:
A Fatal Response
http://lindsaymawson.blogspot.ca/2012/04/flash-fiction-challenge-38-death-is-on.html
Enjoy…… if you enjoy death.
April 13, 2012 — 8:31 AM
Jim Franklin says:
“It started with a corpse… ‘ the lesser known Hot Chocolate song. Sorry just the latest ear-worm that’s now rampaging through my caffeine soaked mind.
Anyway, here’s my entry ‘Dead Memorable’
http://www.thezombiechimp.com/2012/04/13/flash-fiction-challenge-dead-memorable/
I’m interested to know what you think happened.
Thanks
Cheers
April 13, 2012 — 9:46 AM
Louise Sorensen says:
What a good day, Friday 13th, for a challenge on Death!
Today started off for me with my husband looming over the bed, an hour after he had left for work, saying “It’s Friday the 13th, right? On the way to work, the wheel of my car fell off.”
No injuries. (I’m glad my tummy has quieted down from yesterday’s food poisoning.)
I’m surprised mine is the first post today. Wishing you all health and safety.
Will ponder challenge.
April 13, 2012 — 11:10 AM
Misti Rainwater-Lites says:
A friend sent me your I Suck Moist Open Ass piece. I wrote it down with a brown Sharpie on white paper and tacked it to the wall above my computer. Here is my contribution to your challenge…
http://roxixmas.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/tornado-dance-2/
April 13, 2012 — 11:41 AM
Anthony Elmore says:
What would Death ride?
http://barelyok.com/wendigs-flash-fiction-challenge-death-is-on-the-table.html
“Are you looking for something sporty or business-ee?”
April 13, 2012 — 11:42 AM
Barry Napier says:
I assume you want new stuff right? Can these be stories we’ve had published in the past?
April 13, 2012 — 11:54 AM
terribleminds says:
@Barry:
The spirit of flash fiction is “new,” aye.
— c.
April 13, 2012 — 12:40 PM
Tracey Bloomfield says:
Okay I hope you like it. Jerry isn’t the only one that writes in this family 😉
http://firemare66.wordpress.com/2012/04/13/deaths-home/
April 13, 2012 — 1:18 PM
Anna Lewis says:
Ohh, man, could THIS theme have come at a more perfect time? Just when I’m wishing 27 ugly consecutive slow deaths upon the tweaker bastards who burgled my house yesterday and stole my new laptop…with my most recent revisions and research on it??
Yeah. I’m in on this one.
April 13, 2012 — 5:25 PM
Lesann says:
Flash fiction makes weird things come out of my head. My offering: http://lesannberry.com/2012/04/death-is-on-the-table.html
April 13, 2012 — 5:53 PM
Timothy John Whitcher says:
Not new, but fits.
http://helveticasindiehorrorstories.blogspot.com/2012/01/tenement-of-clay.html
I know, I suck it by not abiding by the rules.
April 13, 2012 — 7:18 PM
Drew says:
Brand new.
http://lastmoleman.tumblr.com/post/21051738389/flash-fiction-challenge-death-is-on-the-table-of
April 13, 2012 — 8:06 PM
Timothy John Whitcher says:
Okay. I broke.
Here’s my story:
http://helveticasindiehorrorstories.blogspot.com/2012/04/quietus.html
April 13, 2012 — 9:06 PM
oldestgenxer says:
Obviously, this is a punishment for me. Chuck, I have a searing fear of death. I apologize for my lack of respect on previous posts. You really know how to get back at somebody.
You said “any genre,” right? How about poetry? Is poetry a genre?
I have always maintained that anyone who writes poetry is fucked in the head. I haven’t found any evidence to disprove this thesis.
Life is Not a Metaphor
I originally wrote this in my early 20s, and it has been off and on my chopping block for 25 years–I’ve been editing, fixing, trying to figure out what I am trying to say in this piece. All from one trip to a nursing home. Imagine how dark it would be if I wrote something about death *now*. But hey, it’s less than 600 words.
April 13, 2012 — 11:39 PM
AJ Hayes says:
This might be a double up. But what the hell. “Exit Interview” here: http://ajhayes2.wordpress.com/
April 13, 2012 — 11:45 PM
Gary Weller says:
XIII
http://geweller-fiction.blogspot.com/2011/08/xiii.html
April 14, 2012 — 1:27 AM
Mike Herman says:
“Oh no. They killed Kenny again!”
994 words less than 1000, not mine but worth repeating, from South park.
(Delete if you must)
April 14, 2012 — 1:27 PM
Ellen M. Gregg says:
I totally didn’t want to accept this challenge, which meant I had to. *sigh*
http://www.ellenmgregg.com/2012/04/light-after-death.html
April 14, 2012 — 1:32 PM
John Vise says:
A Villain Dies, A Hero Dies
http://wp.me/pJy7b-2y
This didn’t come out how I expected, but I think I like it.
April 14, 2012 — 8:14 PM
Anna Lewis says:
Just when you thought it was safe to go camping for the pirate festival weekend….
All ye be warned: beyond this point there be “Bloody Pirates”.
http://corsairharbour.blogspot.com/2012/04/bloody-pirates-terribleminds-flash.html
April 14, 2012 — 10:10 PM
columbibueno says:
Creature moment
http://columbibueno.wordpress.com/2012/04/15/creature-moment/
April 15, 2012 — 1:13 PM
Athena McCormick says:
Here’s mine, The Long Road Home – Actually feel like I could do more with this, given an extra 500 words, but here it is as it sits now: http://devereauxcourt.blogspot.co.uk/2012/04/long-road-home.html
April 15, 2012 — 1:46 PM
DL Thurston says:
Later to the game than I usually am, here’s Death and Bob.
http://www.dlthurston.com/blog/2012/04/15/flash-fiction-death-and-bob/
April 15, 2012 — 3:10 PM
Shah Wharton says:
A Mother First – Hope you like this. Even a tiny big 🙂
April 15, 2012 — 4:37 PM
shah Wharton says:
PS: for the link, follow click my name 🙂
April 15, 2012 — 5:37 PM
Todd Terwilliger says:
Decided to throw my hat in the ring: “To Be or Not” – http://www.toddterwilliger.com/fiction/flash/to-be-or-not.html
April 15, 2012 — 6:15 PM
Sky says:
Well, here’s my first go at one of your challenges: My flash fiction piece, “This Night.”
http://literarycrux.com/?p=121
April 15, 2012 — 8:54 PM
oldestgenxer says:
This is my real entry, I suppose. No one likes poetry. Or maybe the fact that it was something old I had previously written?
But death is a hard thing for me to…accept. You really have no idea what kind of a narcissist I am and how that amplifies my fear of dying. So here I go, confronting it. This is about me, and my fiance, and my ex-wife. The names have not been changed because no one is innocent, not anymore.
In My Time of Dying
The title is from a song by Zeppelin, off the Physical Graffiti album. Curiously, it is my favorite song ever in the whole wide world, so help me Jesus.
April 15, 2012 — 11:28 PM
Josh Loomis says:
Politeness & Respect.
http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2012/04/16/flash-fiction-politeness-and-respect/
April 16, 2012 — 7:48 AM
Matthew says:
My first stab at the flash fiction challenge:
http://mentalmachinations.wordpress.com/2012/04/16/the-chair/
April 16, 2012 — 11:25 AM
Jessa Russo says:
My entry:
WHEN SHADOWS CALL
999 Words
This was definitely a case of FLASH fiction for me. I don’t have a lot of death-centered writing in my arsenal. I enjoyed trying to find a slightly darker side of myself. I’m still far from dark! 😉
http://jessarussowrites.blogspot.com/2012/04/chuck-wendigs-flash-fiction-contest.html
April 16, 2012 — 1:07 PM
Cat says:
Definitely not my strongest piece but the other deaths for the stories I’m working on are too long for this.
http://cwhitteker.deviantart.com/art/The-Death-From-Drifter-WiP-296476953
April 16, 2012 — 5:13 PM
David Grigg says:
Mine is called “The Glance” and it’s here:
http://narratorium.com/2012/04/17/the-glance/
April 16, 2012 — 8:44 PM
Shiri Sondeimer says:
Late to the game (at least for me) this week and haven’t had a chance to catch up on everyone else’s stories (sorry!) I’m so sure that someone has played the “cake or death” card already. I swear I’m only ripping Eddie Izzard off (well, not really, I made sure I cited him, but you know what I mean).
Oof. Rambling. Apologies.
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/flash-fiction/cauldron/
April 16, 2012 — 10:49 PM
AmandaKay says:
I think a post on the differences between flash fiction and a chapter/scene would be helpful. (E.g. “Thirteen ways this isn’t a complete story, doofus!”) I know flash fiction is a complete story but the line between story and chapter/scene is a fine one. Or at least it is to me. It’s almost as fine as the line between funny and ridiculous.
And that reminds me, my story…
Death Hires a Stylist
http://amandagrein.com/12101.html
[I really like these challenges.]
April 17, 2012 — 12:07 AM
R.J. Keith says:
Death has a mouse in her pocket. His name is Cheesers.
http://rjkeith.wordpress.com/2012/04/17/somebody-that-i-used-to-know/
April 17, 2012 — 4:55 AM
Scott Weber says:
“Unfinished Business” – Some tasks don’t care if you are dead or not
April 17, 2012 — 1:58 PM
Scott Weber says:
http://scottweberwriter.wordpress.com/
“Unfinished Business” – Some Tasks don’t care if you are dead
April 17, 2012 — 1:59 PM
Volanta Peng says:
A bit morbid for me, but I hope you guys like it!
http://questionableexclamationpoints.blogspot.com/2012/04/type-away.html
April 17, 2012 — 9:17 PM
Philip Overby says:
My entry, “Necro-N-Hancer.”
http://philipoverby1.blogspot.jp/2012/04/story-time-necro-n-hancer.html
April 18, 2012 — 9:20 AM
Sigil says:
A Dark Soul:
http://imaginedrealms.typepad.com/writing/2012/04/a-dark-soul.html
April 18, 2012 — 10:10 AM
jimmytwiz says:
I’m late in the game and don’t have time to write up a bright and shiny new one, but this is relatively new 🙂
http://parttimewriter.wordpress.com/2012/02/08/zombies-dont-wear-pants/
April 18, 2012 — 10:13 AM