{"id":31677,"date":"2017-11-30T08:00:30","date_gmt":"2017-11-30T13:00:30","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/?p=31677"},"modified":"2017-11-30T08:00:30","modified_gmt":"2017-11-30T13:00:30","slug":"spencer-ellsworth-five-things-i-learned-writing-shadow-sun-seven","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/2017\/11\/30\/spencer-ellsworth-five-things-i-learned-writing-shadow-sun-seven\/","title":{"rendered":"Spencer Ellsworth: Five Things I Learned Writing Shadow Sun Seven"},"content":{"rendered":"<p class=\"p2\">\n<p class=\"p3\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/images.macmillan.com\/folio-assets\/macmillan_us_frontbookcovers_109W\/9780765395740.JPG?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter \" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/images.macmillan.com\/folio-assets\/macmillan_us_frontbookcovers_109W\/9780765395740.JPG?resize=700%2C1120&#038;ssl=1\" width=\"700\" height=\"1120\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><em><span class=\"s1\">A galactic empire falls\u2026 and a secret directive rings through the stars: kill all the humans.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\"><em><span class=\"s1\">A Red Peace left Jaqi and Araskar fugitives- the Resistance, the Empire\u2019s remnants, and the insectoid Matakas want them dead, especially now that John Starfire\u2019s upped the price on their heads. Nowhere is safe, but Araskar has a secret, and he uses it to make a deal with the Matakas. From the stolen high-level intel in his memory-sword comes a name: Shadow Sun Seven.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\"><em><span class=\"s1\">This hidden Imperial prison holds a cache of hyperdense oxygen, a priceless rarity from the Empire. It also holds a mysterious prisoner who knows secrets about the monsters in the Dark Zone, and thus Jaqi\u2019s destiny. If Araskar and Z can survive a prison pit fight, while Jaqi and her dodgy allies break in, they can stop John Starfire\u2019s genocide.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p3\"><i><\/i>1- The Great Secret Idea Source Is\u2026 Fun<\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\">My stories come from a specific place. Not a magical unicorn\u2019s butt, or any other magical butt, but from a three-foot square of Kool-Aid stained carpet.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Said carpet is occupied by a little kid who still lives in my head, despite years of boring adult stuff. He sits cross-legged with a bunch of toys loudly shouting:<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">SHWOOM!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">WHOOSH!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">PEW PEW PEW!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">This is pretty much what happened with my first novel <i>A Red Peace. <\/i>The kid provided space bugs. Memory-swords. Cyborg planets. Sun-eating spiders. You know, the stuff that goes KABLOOM. I added what I\u2019ve learned from writing short fiction about character, pacing and satisfying the audience, and wrapped it up in a story about totalitarianism and one\u2019s conscience. Once <i>A Red Peace <\/i>was drafted and done, the kid SKREEKAPLEWed a quick skeleton of events for the sequels.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">But the kid\u2019s attention turned elsewhere after that, and that was fine, because the book was in submission limbo, hanging out in the Great Vortex of an editor\u2019s desk.<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p1\">2- \u2026The Great Idea Source Will Not Have Fun on Command<\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\">And then Tor bought <i>A Red Peace. <\/i><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Not just <i>A Red Peace, <\/i>but two sequels! I had a genuine contract for <i>Unnamed Starfire Book Two <\/i>and <i>Solve For X Starfire Book Three.<\/i><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Victory. Novel deal. It called for a serious RASHKLAPOW!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Or so I thought. I presented the contracts to the kid and he\u2026<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Ran away and hid.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">When I tracked him (mentally) down, he said, \u201cWait! Here\u2019s ten other ideas I like better!\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Kid. Come on. I have a deadline.<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p1\">3. Don\u2019t Look At The End Product (Even Under Deadline), But Figure Out What Kind of Story You\u2019re Writing First<\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\">We did this for a while. Several months in which the kid would give me any idea except the one I was contracted for. The kid simply couldn\u2019t ignore the external pressure and play; SHROOKABOOMBUM was not achievable when I stood there yelling \u201cthis needs to be X amount of words, and as good as the first!\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Finally I stood back, took the limits off, and offered the kid just one suggestion. We could blow our deadline, we could write a piece of crap, we could put it all in iambic pentameter\u2026 it would all be okay, as long as we had some fun with this idea.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u201cOkay,\u201d he said, little face furrowing in suspicion.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><i>A Red Peace<\/i> had been an extended chase sequence. The sequel, turning the tides, would be a caper. Subterfuge. A daring break-in. A mysterious prisoner.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">The kid got a little excited. A caper? What\u2019s the break-in? Wait, I\u2019ve got it. It\u2019s a prison built in the guts of a giant space tick. There\u2019s someone who has living guns. There\u2019s blob people and scorpion things and a tower in the middle of the desert and an alien crime queen bug\u2026 SKA-PLOW-WHAM!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">The problem with writing on commission is this: you have to get your head out of the end product (sequel that moves story X distance, with Y wordcount, for Z deadline) and go back to the part where things were fun. This is most difficult when you haven\u2019t actually written on commission before, and writing has always been an exercise in all-fun, few consequences.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">So don\u2019t start from the limits. You can worry about that in rewrites.<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p1\">4. Big Fascist Bullies Will Make You Feel Bullied\u2026<\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\">The kid and I, of course, both stopped in horror when a piss-haired fascist monster was elected President halfway through writing the book.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">My agent called to check on me and said \u201cHalf my clients are frozen with anger and panic, and half are writing more furiously than ever, to kill fascism with their art.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">I don\u2019t know if I felt either. I (and the kid) felt like we were right back at Scout Camp, getting picked on and missing our toys and our square of carpet. But it turns out\u2026<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"p1\">5. \u2026You <i>Can<\/i> Punch Right Back With Words<\/h2>\n<p class=\"p1\">Given that my books are about the downfall of a galactic despot, the kid and I found that SHA-BLOOM could be rather therapeutic, after all, as long as we included some marching and a lot of calling our elected reps. In some ways, it was easier to say \u201cSomeone might read this and stand up to fascism\u201d for both me, and the kid, and that made us even more excited for the THIRD book, when fascism gets what\u2019s coming to it.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">What\u2019s that? You, yourself, like a little SKRAPLOW? You want to know who the mysterious prisoner is in the heart of the space tick prison, and what\u2019s up with the living guns, the blobs and the tower? You too want to stick it to a galactic fascist? <a href=\"https:\/\/publishing.tor.com\/starfireshadowsunseven-spencerellsworth\/9780765395740\/\"><i>Shadow Sun Seven<\/i><\/a><i> <\/i>comes out November 28th from Tor.com, and if you haven\u2019t please take a look at <a href=\"https:\/\/publishing.tor.com\/starfirearedpeace-spencerellsworth\/9780765395726\/\"><i>A Red Peace, <\/i>out now, to SKREEKABLOOIE, er, pretty great reviews<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\"><i>Spencer Ellsworth has been writing since he learned how. His short fiction has previously appeared in\u00a0Lightspeed Magazine, Fantasy &amp; Science Fiction,\u00a0and at\u00a0Tor.com.\u00a0Over the years, he&#8217;s worked as a wilderness survival instructor, paraeducator in a special education classroom, and in publishing; he currently lives in the Pacific Northwest with his wife and three children and works at a small tribal college on a Native American reservation.<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><strong>Spencer Ellsworth: <a href=\"http:\/\/spencerellsworth.com\/\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Website<\/span><\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><strong>Shadow Sun Seven: <a href=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/2i2LnLM\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Amazon<\/span><\/a> | <a href=\"https:\/\/www.barnesandnoble.com\/w\/starfire-spencer-ellsworth\/1126314303?ean=9780765395757#\/\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">B&amp;N<\/span><\/a> | <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kobo.com\/us\/en\/ebook\/starfire-shadow-sun-seven\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Kobo<\/span><\/a> | <a href=\"http:\/\/www.powells.com\/book\/shadow-sun-seven-starfire-02-9780765395757\/18-0\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Powells<\/span><\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A galactic empire falls\u2026 and a secret directive rings through the stars: kill all the humans. A Red Peace left Jaqi and Araskar fugitives- the Resistance, the Empire\u2019s remnants, and the insectoid Matakas want them dead, especially now that John Starfire\u2019s upped the price on their heads. Nowhere is safe, but Araskar has a secret, [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":{"0":"post-31677","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"hentry","6":"category-theramble","8":"no-featured-image"},"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/pv7MR-8eV","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31677","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=31677"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31677\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":31678,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31677\/revisions\/31678"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=31677"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=31677"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=31677"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}