Flash Fiction Challenge: The Wheel, Part Two
Last week’s challenge: “Spin The Wheel.” (So many entries!)
The past challenge was rather successful, so — I think we’re going to do it again.
I love these “games of aspects.” Eeeee!
Ahem. Anyway. So! Another set of random parameters for you to choose from, whether by rolling a d10 or using a random number generator like this one right here.
As usual, you’ve got 1000 words. Post it at your online space. Link back here.
You have one week. Due by Friday the 18th, noon EST.
Randomly choose one (or if you don’t want random and hate fun, pick one) from each:
Subgenre
- Weird West
- Comic Fantasy
- Wuxia
- Bad Girls In Prison
- Zombie Apocalypse
- Alien Abduction
- Lovecraftian
- Teenage Noir
- Steampunk
- Locked Room Mystery
Conflict
- Betrayal by a loved one!
- Need to hide a body!
- Someone’s been poisoned!
- The character is being hunted!
- Enemy at the gates!
- Heist gone wrong!
- Man versus nature!
- Man versus technology!
- Revenge!
- Family torn apart!
Must Feature:
- Demonic possession
- A forbidden book
- A mysterious stranger
- A bottle of rare whiskey
- A vengeful god
- Someone gone or going mad
- A suitcase full of money
- Carnival folk
- A secret message
- A hidden tunnel


joeturner87
January 11, 2013 at 9:36 AM //
Rolled…3,6,7…should be…interesting
Stephen
January 11, 2013 at 10:23 AM //
Anyone wanting a random selection from the lists (rather than rolling / looking up) can get them here:
http://stephenemm.co.uk/flash-fiction/first-flash-fiction-challenge-of-the-year-part-2.php
Misa
January 11, 2013 at 11:35 AM //
The Random gods have been kind – I got 1, 6 and 4. If I can’t make a story from those, there’s no hope for me.
Sam Hume
January 11, 2013 at 7:45 PM //
cant wait to see
Alex
January 11, 2013 at 11:49 AM //
Rolled a 8, 5 and a 10. This should be good
csoffer
January 11, 2013 at 12:26 PM //
I am not going to enter this contest. I did, however, just buy Mockingbirds and Blackbirds. As soon as I can figure out which one I’m supposed to read first, I will dive in!!!!!! #ilovechuck
Curtis Edmonds (@Curtis_Edmonds)
January 11, 2013 at 1:08 PM //
There is, really, no such thing as random. Clearly, the random gods meant for me to enter this contest, and meant for me to choose “zombie apocalypse,” because OF COURSE, and “hunted,” because of the tie-in and, well, SHAMELESS RIP-OFF of a classical work of fiction, and “whiskey”, because it is by-God five o’clock somewhere. So I give you THOR SLAYMASTER’S DANGEROUS GAME.
http://www.curtisedmonds.com/thor-slaymasters-dangerous-game/
You’re welcome, America.
James
January 11, 2013 at 1:55 PM //
8, 1, 3.
I have no idea, but tonight… oh hell.
Chelsea
January 11, 2013 at 4:39 PM //
1,2,10 This does’t seem to hard I just kind of wish the random number generator had given me something a little weirder.
Sam Hume
January 11, 2013 at 7:51 PM //
I got 5, 7, and 7. which seems easy. So I roll again *shake the dice and 1 7 6. Dang Stephen king already did that one.
joeturner87
January 11, 2013 at 7:52 PM //
I got 3,6,7.
I don’t know if it could be called a Heist Gone Wrong, or if its Wuxia, but there is a Suitcase Full of Money. So one out of three ain’t bad.
http://joetblogs.wordpress.com/2013/01/12/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge-spin-the-wheel-pt-2/
erimeh
January 11, 2013 at 9:55 PM //
I rolled 6, 6, 8…this is going to be even weirder than the last one.
erimeh
January 18, 2013 at 12:24 PM //
I’m late I know I just spent the last 30 minutes fighting with my internet connection. I hope y’all enjoy it.
http://weirderthanithought.blogspot.com/2013/01/working-for-peanuts-flash-fiction.html
jreinmiller
January 11, 2013 at 10:20 PM //
7,8,10 for me. Second go at Lovecraft in the challenges. Happier with how this one came out than the last one.
http://www.jqpdx.com/2013/01/12/dear-friend/
Dave Scott
January 17, 2013 at 10:30 PM //
I was very impressed with this work. You were able to merge the (3) selections in a very unique way. You also did a great job on the ‘language’ of it – it ‘flavored’ the writing. Loved it.
Natalie Maddalena
January 11, 2013 at 10:49 PM //
Lovecraftian. Need to hide a body! A secret message.
http://highlightonwords.wordpress.com/2013/01/12/rlyeh/
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 10:26 AM //
Loved this! Well crafted and strange.
troylefman
January 11, 2013 at 11:05 PM //
8 2 10 challenge accepted!
S.W. Sondheimer
January 11, 2013 at 11:13 PM //
Locked room mystery. Family torn apart! A bottle of rare whiskey!
A new moment with some old friends.
http://swsondheimer.wordpress.com/this-just-in/whiskey-in-the-room/
Tia Kalla (@tiakall)
January 12, 2013 at 12:11 AM //
I got 10, 10 and 7. To which my brain promptly went “okay, time to be a sick motherfucker! Let’s take ‘a family torn apart’ LITERALLY!”
So I present my not-safe-for-hematophobes-or-anyone-with-taste, “A Forensic Puzzle”: http://itt.ymakadomain.com/?p=69
darleneaubol
January 12, 2013 at 8:13 AM //
I give you The Bearded Lady
http://darlene.underdahl.net/?p=204
aka Darlene Underdahl
http://www.VermillionRoadPress.com
Alexa Muir
January 12, 2013 at 6:05 PM //
Rather enjoyed this and pleased that the gods of story gave me three things that turned out to be a prequel to another idea I’d had a while back. I give you, 1. Weird West, 5. Enemy at the gates and 6. Someone gone or going mad. Or as I called it, “Sunset”.
Hope you enjoy and happy for any feedback.
http://bit.ly/X2X690
Tami Veldura
January 12, 2013 at 7:35 PM //
Very pleased with my dice rolls: steampunk, enemy at the gates, vengeful god
I give you: To Heaven and Back Again, another short in my Approaching Lightspeed steampunk-in-space
http://www.tamiveldura.com/2013/01/to-heaven-and-back-again.html?zx=1ac83a3532ed3587
AM Gray
January 12, 2013 at 9:59 PM //
I scored, 2 Comic Fantasy
· 6 Heist gone wrong!
· 1 Demonic possession
It’s called ‘Hobbit heist’
http://amgray.blogspot.com.au/2013/01/hobbit-heist.html
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 3:00 PM //
Enjoyed!
Jim Franklin
January 13, 2013 at 10:19 AM //
Here we go then.
I rolled Weird West, Someone’s Been Poisoned, and Mysterious Stranger, hope you like it.
The Untold Legend of Skull Ridge
http://writewayround.wordpress.com/2013/01/13/flash-fiction-untold-legend-skull-ridge/
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 2:48 PM //
Hah! Amusing, and definitely the weirdest west I’ve read about.
Anthony Elmore
January 13, 2013 at 12:31 PM //
I pulled from the hat Locked Room Mystery, Someone’s been poisoned, A bottle of rare whiskey. The challenge has been accepted.
http://www.barelyok.com/terrible-minds-flash-fiction-challenge-the-wheel-part-ii.html
Dave Scott
January 16, 2013 at 9:13 PM //
I loved your character development and attention to the small details – it makes it feel so much larger than the 1000 words written. Great job man – loved it.
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 10:34 AM //
Oh, this was fine. Didn’t find the locked room, but loved the dark humor, clean writing, and mystery. Well balanced.
ljpaddock
January 13, 2013 at 4:05 PM //
Here’s mine. Great fun! Louise
http://ontheedgeofinfinity.wordpress.com/2013/01/13/spin-the-wheel-flash-fiction/
whirlingnerdish (@whirlingnerdish)
January 13, 2013 at 8:20 PM //
Okay, finally got my nailed down. I got: Steampunk, the character is hunted, and it must feature a demonic possession. It came in around 978 words.
Doing the Devil’s Work: http://whirlingnerdish.blogspot.com/2013/01/flash-fiction-challenge-doing-devils.html
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 3:07 PM //
Oooh! Good writing. I enjoyed this. I don’t usually like steampunk, but you really captured the flavor of…everything.
Anthony Elmore
January 14, 2013 at 1:24 AM //
BTW, I’ve given myself a challenge. I will do all Flash Fiction Challenges by the close of 2013. That’s right, Every mother frogging one! Statistically speaking, it’s impossible to write 50 consecutive crappy stories. By the end of the year, I should have at least 5 that are salable. Can he do it?
Link to the blog category for the FF challenges: http://www.barelyok.com/category/terrible-minds-flash-fiction-challenge
erimeh
January 18, 2013 at 12:43 PM //
My goal is to do at least 75% of the challenges. It’s far more ambitious then I normally am but I, like you, feel that at least some of my stories will not be totally craptacular
Josh Loomis
January 14, 2013 at 7:58 AM //
9,3,9 – A return to Steampunk. Interesting.
1000 Words: “The Last Flight of the Wayward Albatross” http://www.blueinkalchemy.com/2013/01/14/flash-fiction-last-flight-of-the-wayward-albatross/
Victoria Huntley
January 14, 2013 at 12:15 PM //
http://eyeofthewriter.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/not-so-different.html
I rolled Bad Girls In Prison, Enemy at the Gates and A Bottle of Rare Whiskey. ^^
chelsearthompson
January 14, 2013 at 4:20 PM //
Not flash-fiction, as it’s way too long, but fulfills Weird West, man vs. nature (desert of DEATH), and a rare bottle of whiskey. Written in honor of my BFF’s birthday. http://chelsearthompson.wordpress.com/2013/01/14/the-shortest-and-most-puerto-rican-sherrif-in-the-west/
Becky Rae
January 14, 2013 at 8:45 PM //
I rolled Bad Girls in Prison, Enemy at the Gates, and Carnival folk. I had a lot of fun! Thanks for posting!
http://a-curious-person.blogspot.com/2013/01/flask-fiction.html
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 3:18 PM //
Some great and quirky writing here. I read this piece with a smile on my face, and was really into it. The ending shocked me (in a good way).
Dave Scott
January 17, 2013 at 10:23 PM //
I really liked the tempo of your writing. It made me laugh more than once and yet there were some nicely grimy visuals. Great job
Clay Ashby
January 15, 2013 at 1:53 PM //
I’m a novice by every meaning of the word, but I’m practicing every day and this little competition is a great opportunity to do that.
My random was 5, 1, 1
I even started a blog for this, and it doesn’t even have a real domain name yet
http://www.thegnomecomputercompany.com/ClayAshby/the-end-of-salem/
Rebecca Douglass
January 15, 2013 at 2:59 PM //
Had to cheat a little. First two genres I rolled I didn’t even know what they’d look like. (What IS Wuxia?). So I took comic fantasy and then rolled 3 & 6. Halitor the Hero (or maybe Halitosis the Hero) coming soon. . .
Meghan
January 15, 2013 at 4:46 PM //
I rolled 7, 9, and 4…high standards to live up to – here’s hoping I do Lovecraft justice!
Riley Hill
January 16, 2013 at 2:16 PM //
6,2,10. Alien abduction, need to hide a body, a secret tunnel. That was fun, though the listed conflict hit more in the second part of the tale. Trimmed to under a thousand words. http://authorrileyhill.com
Dave Scott
January 16, 2013 at 9:04 PM //
This, is, awesome! You had me captured to a point in the end where I audibly said “What?!?” My wife asked me “What, what?” I couldn’t explain – she had to read – we loved it
Brilliantly done Riley.
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 10:15 AM //
Thanks, Dave. It was a blast to write. It started out around 1500 words, so I had to bite it down a bit. I might flesh it out and use it in a collection.
Clay Ashby
January 17, 2013 at 10:44 AM //
I really enjoyed your story! I felt like it had not just one twist, but two.
lwpatricks
January 17, 2013 at 7:27 PM //
Hey Riley! I’m thrilled you enjoyed my story =) I read through yours and loved it. You’re a fantastic writer and I love your voice and prose. How hard was it to cut words from your work? I shaved off 300. You know what they say: ‘Kill your darlings’ lol.
Cheers!
Riley Hill
January 18, 2013 at 12:52 PM //
Added another link since it moved down in my posts: http://authorrileyhill.com/archives/218
Sarah O'Hara
January 16, 2013 at 5:11 PM //
Not entirely on topic, but fun nonetheless.
http://authorsarahohara.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge_16.html
Dave Scott
January 16, 2013 at 8:51 PM //
Oh yeah – 7, 6, 8 – Lovecraftian : Heist gone wrong! : Carnival Folk !!!
I wrote it from the standard H.P. (almost the modern found-footage-type film) docu-style creeptastic mystery. I got it to 1060 words and cut it back to 995.
I hope this is even close to as enjoyable to read as it was to write – I honestly had a blast writing this one!
Here is “Case #207″
http://www.cf.frickbat.com/davescott/?p=321
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 10:13 AM //
Well done, Dave. I enjoyed more than one chuckle. Having encountered a few police reports, I couldn’t help but imagine how the readers of these would react. This was a fun read.
lwpatricks
January 16, 2013 at 10:19 PM //
Damnit Chuck!
Your addictive contests are taking 1000 words away from my own project weekly lol. Here’s my story entitled the Path of Crows – A kung fu fable with flavours of wuxia, revenge, and the reason why Nickelback exists — a vengeful god.
http://lwpatricks.com/publications/flash-fiction-the-path-of-crows-a-kung-fu-fable/
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 2:43 PM //
A Native American friend of mine used to comment on the laughter of crows…I completely enjoyed this story. I found it elegant, with twisted humor and wonderful characters. Thank you for a fine read.
Beth L.
January 16, 2013 at 11:06 PM //
I freely admit, I do not roll. I take what I like most, and leave the rest. That being said, here’s steampunk, someone’s been poisoned, and a secret message.
http://knotachance.tumblr.com/
Laura Libricz
January 17, 2013 at 5:55 AM //
I like Stephen’s random picker. And I am also goofing off writing Flash Fiction instead of working on my book.
“But it’s a great exercise in focusing,” she said.
Teen Noir: http://lauralibricz.blogspot.de/2013/01/914-flash-fiction.html
Laura Libricz
January 17, 2013 at 2:51 PM //
No, wait, that was Teeange Noir, Somebody blocking the exit and a suitcase full of money. But that wasn’t 914 was it? Did Stephen slip me a mickey? Or was that me?
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 10:47 AM //
Tight! Nice ending–didn’t see it coming. What were your “3″ random selections from the categories (I got the whiskey and money). Fun read.
louisesor
January 17, 2013 at 5:36 PM //
My setting was Weired West, the conflict man vs. tech, the must have, Forbidden Book.
Wild Wild Horse http://wp.me/p1BAlV-3u
Rebecca Douglass
January 17, 2013 at 7:03 PM //
Okay, here it is. 999 words, sub-genre comic fantasy, conflict is someone has been poisoned, and must-have is someone going mad. Introducing Halitor the Hero.
http://www.ninjalibrarian.com/2013/01/halitor-hero-short-story.html
Riley Hill
January 17, 2013 at 9:14 PM //
Funny and fun!
Kirstie
January 17, 2013 at 7:43 PM //
So much fun! I missed out last time because my toddler was sick so I couldn’t write.
I rolled 7, 8, 1 so behold: Emily’s Typewriter, a Lovecraftian man vs machine tale featuring demonic possession(I know, it’s almost too easy, right?!).
I fudged up though and I’ve gone over the word limit(1,200) so I’m not eligible to win, but I’d still love it if anyone wants to drop by and give me any feedback.
http://www.storybookperfect.com/flash-fiction-emilys-typewriter/
Alex
January 17, 2013 at 8:11 PM //
Well, I got 8-6-4; a Teen Noir heist for rare whiskey gone wrong.
Folks, I present “Tessa Collier In the Drink”
http://mahoganyandink.blogspot.com/2013/01/terribleminds-flash-fiction-challenge.html
M E Lucas
January 17, 2013 at 8:50 PM //
Ok, here we go…
Rolled the following: Subgenre: 3. Wuxia / Conflict: 2. Need to hide a body! / Must feature: 7. A suitcase of money.
New to all this writing stuff, especially Flash type, and went a few over on the word count, please don’t scold me!
http://melucas.co.uk/Scribblings/terribleminds-01.html
Melanie Marttila
January 17, 2013 at 9:14 PM //
I got zombie apocalypse, family torn apart, and forbidden book.
For what it’s worth:
http://melaniemarttila.ca/2013/01/17/spinning-the-wheel-for-chuck-wendig/
h.vert
January 17, 2013 at 9:30 PM //
I rolled Teenage Noir, Enemy at the Gates!, Carnival Folk.
(too bad I’m not sure what teenage noir actually is, lol.)
http://qandotherletters.blogspot.com/2013/01/flash-fiction-teenage-noir-enemy-at.html
Ryan
January 17, 2013 at 11:57 PM //
you can read my entry by clicking my name
Its a comic fantasy story about revenge featuring a mysterious stranger.
Enjoy!
Julie
January 18, 2013 at 12:11 AM //
Mine can be found here:
https://www.facebook.com/groups/320934261350504/doc/321434207967176/
Subgenre: Locked room mystery, Conflict: Man vs Nature, Must Feature: Someone gone or going mad
Entertaining challenge!
Amanda
January 18, 2013 at 10:37 AM //
This was a lot of fun. Feels good to be writing again.
I rolled: Teenage Noir; A family torn apart; Carnival folk
http://alarrasgate.blogspot.com/2013/01/the-wheel-part-2.html
jay wolf
January 18, 2013 at 11:11 AM //
Lovecraftian, Heist Gone Wrong, Forbidden Book. This Particular Body of Work:
https://www.evernote.com/shard/s112//sh/84b4e9bf-b7f1-4840-b00a-63ce2b433f0c/0f38c91b3dc690c86c9b3d9a79c6bc9a
A vignette with two Miskatonic U professors I created for another story.