What Are The Stakes? (Slap 'Em On The Table, 'Cause They Ain't Just For Vampires Anymore)

  • (Quick one today, because I have to vomit forth some robust word count lest shame overwhelm me and drag my sorry ass into the fetid pits of burping disappointment.)

    We know already that the meat-and-potatoes of fiction is conflict: life without conflict would be gooey and grand, while fiction without conflict would be redundant and dull. Conflict is the food that feeds the reader, and, if you permit me to get a little disgusting here (what else is new?), what the reader then, erm, regurgitates is tension. Tension is born out of conflict.

    But where does conflict come from?

    If you want to find one easy and necessary landmark on the road to conflict in your fiction, then it’s necessary early on to establish the stakes. You need to slap the stakes onto the table so that the reader knows them.

    Every character has something at stake. Every character wants something that you can take away or prevent him from achieving. Every character fears something that you can force him to encounter.

    What can be gained? What can be lost? What are the roadblocks, the pitfalls, the snares? Who are the enemies who will attempt to prevent the stakes, or claim the stakes for themselves?

    We know what Neo wants in the beginning of The Matrix: he wants to find Morpheus and answer the question — “What Is The Matrix?” But the stakes go beyond mere desire. The stakes incorporate all the things that a character believes about himself: Neo has a life as a hacker and as an office-worker. These are things he can lose. Neo also has a reality — the last thing he thinks is that his very understanding of the world in which he lives can be taken from him, yanked from beneath his feet, but it can. And so these go into the pot and help further answer that most critical question: What Are The Stakes?

    The stakes can change, too. What they are in the beginning needn’t be what they are in the middle, or at the end. As a character evolves, she may realize that what she held dear before was nothing compared to [fill-in-the-blank]. The love of her father. The spaceship she stole from her nemesis. Her freedom. Her vengeance. Whatever. In Star Wars, Han Solo sees the stakes change: his world goes from selfish and personal to a galactic one. Once concerned about himself and his lifestyle, he soon grows to fight for the Rebellion and he falls in love with Chewbacca Princess Leia and all these things represent the stakes on the table. So, when Han gets dropped into a hole and frozen into a hunk of carbonite, we know why that matters and share the anguish: he can no longer fight for the Rebellion, he cannot help new friend Luke, and he’s leaving his nascent love for Chewbacca the Princess behind.

    A story with muddy, uncertain stakes confers upon the world a story about which nobody gives two shabby shits. With stakes, you gain character information, you see character motivation, you know what you can give and what you can take away, you find conflict born and tension forged. A story empty of such stakes — or with stakes that feel hard to define — and you run the risk of losing all of that.

    Be clear about the stakes, and put them on the table early.

    Literally ask it of yourself as you write: “What are the stakes? And is the audience aware?”

    Don’t be shy about asserting their presence. Sometime in the first act, the stakes must be clearly and presently established. Be bold. State them outright if you have to. You can soften — make it organic — later.

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    July 19th, 2010 | terribleminds | 7 Comments

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Chuck Wendig is equal parts novelist, screenwriter, and game designer. He is the author of the novels DOUBLE DEAD, BLACKBIRDS, and MOCKINGBIRD. In addition, he's got a metric boatload of writing-related e-books available, including the popular 500 WAYS TO BE A BETTER WRITER. He currently lives in the wilds of Pennsyltucky with wife, dog, and newborn progeny.

7 Responses and Counting...

  • Josh 07.19.2010

    Great advice, and something to keep in mind while writing.

  • This is a great point to keep in mind – particularly the point about the stakes changing – and getting higher – as the story progresses.

  • @JR:

    To me, it’s always about escalation. When in doubt, escalate!

    And thanks!

    – c.

  • You know, this is the third post I’ve read this morning about stakes. Plus, I picked up Donald Maass’ book this weekend and read that chapter last night.

    Just thought you’d like to know that you’re a part of the subliminal messages that made things escalate way higher than I thought they would this morning. Also that you provided the shovel I needed to beat back some of those ninjas and vikings. Well on my way to the finish line again.

  • Even if Buffy saved the world every other week, we, we knew the stakes and fretted with them. Stakes make stories, and kill vampires.

    K

  • Yet another chance for me to think of writing a book called “everything i ever needed to know about writing, i learned from Raiders of the Lost Ark.”

    Gotta have stakes. (and giant boulders, and snakes, and a nazi monkey)

    And those stakes are wicked evil in the way they can change the rules around. Stake 1; Get the Ark. Stake 2; Get the Gurrl.

    Stake 1 trumps almost all the way through. He even can’t bring himself to blow it up in the name of achieving stake 2. But in the celebrity death match, stake 2 wins out.

  • and a second shout out to the Maass book. I’m enjoying it. Like all “how to..” books, it’s got a few generalisations in it that’ll drive you crazy if you let them. But it’s also quick and lean, and informed, and makes a lot of sense.

    still, i’m sure even Mr Maass himself would bow before, “everything i ever needed to know about writing, i learned from Raiders of The Lost Ark.”

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