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		<title>By: Amanda</title>
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		<dc:creator>Amanda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Mar 2011 23:28:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>But! But but! I _love_ that scene! So what if it doesn&#039;t fit into the plot anymore, and I&#039;m tearing my hair out trying to slide it in? So what if I wrote it when I was first starting out, and just writing to get the mood of the story. I _love_ this scene, I can&#039;t take it out!

Sigh. I know exactly what you&#039;re talking about in this post.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>But! But but! I _love_ that scene! So what if it doesn&#8217;t fit into the plot anymore, and I&#8217;m tearing my hair out trying to slide it in? So what if I wrote it when I was first starting out, and just writing to get the mood of the story. I _love_ this scene, I can&#8217;t take it out!</p>
<p>Sigh. I know exactly what you&#8217;re talking about in this post.</p>
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		<title>By: Welcome To Editordome</title>
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		<dc:creator>Welcome To Editordome</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Dec 2010 05:03:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] that&#8217;s not enough reason for it to survive. (You want help identifying your darlings? &#8220;Strangling Your Darlings In A Clawfoot Bathtub.&#8221;) You need to start reading with an eye toward these skin tags, these hangnails, these [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] that&#8217;s not enough reason for it to survive. (You want help identifying your darlings? &#8220;Strangling Your Darlings In A Clawfoot Bathtub.&#8221;) You need to start reading with an eye toward these skin tags, these hangnails, these [...]</p>
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		<title>By: One&#8217;s Own Hype :Blue Ink Alchemy</title>
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		<dc:creator>One&#8217;s Own Hype :Blue Ink Alchemy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 16:54:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] have to kill our darlings. We have to turn our work over and make sure everything stays put. We have to throw it [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] have to kill our darlings. We have to turn our work over and make sure everything stays put. We have to throw it [...]</p>
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		<title>By: TERRIBLEMINDS: Chuck Wendig, Freelance Penmonkey &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Strangling My Darlings In A Clawfoot Bathtub (Part Two Of Two)</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2010/01/11/strangling-my-darlings-in-a-clawfoot-bathtub-part-one-of-two/comment-page-1/#comment-4538</link>
		<dc:creator>TERRIBLEMINDS: Chuck Wendig, Freelance Penmonkey &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Strangling My Darlings In A Clawfoot Bathtub (Part Two Of Two)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 13:39:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] you missed it &#8212; and why would you? were you drunk? &#8212; I did a post yesterday ruminating on that old writing chestnut, &#8220;Kill Your [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] you missed it &#8212; and why would you? were you drunk? &#8212; I did a post yesterday ruminating on that old writing chestnut, &#8220;Kill Your [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Maggie Carroll</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maggie Carroll</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 01:00:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shoe: One thing I&#039;ve noticed about &quot;mainstream&quot; vampire fiction: the authors tend to live in their own self-deluded little worlds, where blatant and ridiculous Mary Sues are perfectly accepted, even expected.  PC and Kristin Cast, Anne Rice, Stephanie Meyer, Laurell K. Hamilton, Christine Feehan... and that dude who writes the Vampire Diaries.  

It&#039;s because of these kinds of stories being so widely dispersed that would-be vampire authors abort their brainchildren before their horror can be inflicted upon the world.

VtM nothwithstanding. :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shoe: One thing I&#8217;ve noticed about &#8220;mainstream&#8221; vampire fiction: the authors tend to live in their own self-deluded little worlds, where blatant and ridiculous Mary Sues are perfectly accepted, even expected.  PC and Kristin Cast, Anne Rice, Stephanie Meyer, Laurell K. Hamilton, Christine Feehan&#8230; and that dude who writes the Vampire Diaries.  </p>
<p>It&#8217;s because of these kinds of stories being so widely dispersed that would-be vampire authors abort their brainchildren before their horror can be inflicted upon the world.</p>
<p>VtM nothwithstanding. <img src='http://terribleminds.com/ramble/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 21:03:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heh.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heh.</p>
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		<title>By: Shoe</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shoe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 20:08:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How much more respect would we all have for Anne Rice if she had, years ago, given &#039;preternatural&#039; the strangling-at-birth it deserved?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How much more respect would we all have for Anne Rice if she had, years ago, given &#8216;preternatural&#8217; the strangling-at-birth it deserved?</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 16:18:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lugh:

You&#039;re right, for the most part -- my only caution is, a lot of darlings will always be that. Darlings. Giving them a support system can, in some cases, be the same as plugging arteries into a fatty tumor -- you&#039;re just letting something unnatural live on because *you* like it, not because it&#039;s worth keeping around from a narrative audience perspective.

But it can&#039;t hurt to keep those things sequestered away, sure. 

Me, I mostly just kill mine. Once I find them, I generally accept they&#039;re going to be empty calories now and later.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lugh:</p>
<p>You&#8217;re right, for the most part &#8212; my only caution is, a lot of darlings will always be that. Darlings. Giving them a support system can, in some cases, be the same as plugging arteries into a fatty tumor &#8212; you&#8217;re just letting something unnatural live on because *you* like it, not because it&#8217;s worth keeping around from a narrative audience perspective.</p>
<p>But it can&#8217;t hurt to keep those things sequestered away, sure. </p>
<p>Me, I mostly just kill mine. Once I find them, I generally accept they&#8217;re going to be empty calories now and later.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Scionical</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scionical</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 15:52:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love that.  Witness relocate your darlings.  Genius!

I&#039;ve mentioned this sentiment before, though more about your favorite parts of a draft - not the specific characters.  This is an amazing piece Chuck, and has given me more than just a little bit to think on.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love that.  Witness relocate your darlings.  Genius!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve mentioned this sentiment before, though more about your favorite parts of a draft &#8211; not the specific characters.  This is an amazing piece Chuck, and has given me more than just a little bit to think on.</p>
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		<title>By: Lugh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lugh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 15:06:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One bit of advice that I got out of a previous writing article was that you don&#039;t actually have to *kill* your darlings.  Witness relocation is a valid alternative.

Once you&#039;ve copied that darling out to a blank file and decided it doesn&#039;t belong, copy it again to a &quot;Darling Purgatory&quot; file.  After all, if it really is a clever turn of phrase or nifty bit of scenery, it can be used to spice the hell out of another dish.  (Is that a mixed metaphor now, or cannibalism?)

You can periodically go through your purgatory file, and pull out darlings.  Build flash fiction around them, tie three or four together as the skeleton of a new story, or suddenly realize that this bit is exactly the hook you need to make that paragraph in your British Parliament slash-fic really work.

So, maybe rather than killing your darlings, you should think of it as &quot;encouraging them to seek more appropriate opportunities in another avenue of employment.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One bit of advice that I got out of a previous writing article was that you don&#8217;t actually have to *kill* your darlings.  Witness relocation is a valid alternative.</p>
<p>Once you&#8217;ve copied that darling out to a blank file and decided it doesn&#8217;t belong, copy it again to a &#8220;Darling Purgatory&#8221; file.  After all, if it really is a clever turn of phrase or nifty bit of scenery, it can be used to spice the hell out of another dish.  (Is that a mixed metaphor now, or cannibalism?)</p>
<p>You can periodically go through your purgatory file, and pull out darlings.  Build flash fiction around them, tie three or four together as the skeleton of a new story, or suddenly realize that this bit is exactly the hook you need to make that paragraph in your British Parliament slash-fic really work.</p>
<p>So, maybe rather than killing your darlings, you should think of it as &#8220;encouraging them to seek more appropriate opportunities in another avenue of employment.&#8221;</p>
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