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		<title>By: Celia</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/12/15/please-to-meet-death-the-thief-of-conflict/comment-page-1/#comment-9837</link>
		<dc:creator>Celia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Apr 2010 03:59:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A silent part of me cries whenever I am reminded of Anya&#039;s death and these tears aren&#039;t the result of some poignant/epic end.  If anything they are tears of frustration.  Anya was my favorite character and I believe she deserved a better sendoff.  Her death felt rushed and unnecessary.  I understand the appeal of having a main character die in the series finale but I would have liked the Anya and Xander relationship to have been better defined at the end.  As it was, it seemed as if there was still so much left unsaid and unresolved between the two of them.  Then to add insult to injury I have to sit through pointless Faith/Robin relationship scenes.

I might have been able to forgive Joss for it had it not been for the deaths of Wash, Bennett and Topher in Firefly and Dollhouse respectively.  The man has a knack for killing off my favorites.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A silent part of me cries whenever I am reminded of Anya&#8217;s death and these tears aren&#8217;t the result of some poignant/epic end.  If anything they are tears of frustration.  Anya was my favorite character and I believe she deserved a better sendoff.  Her death felt rushed and unnecessary.  I understand the appeal of having a main character die in the series finale but I would have liked the Anya and Xander relationship to have been better defined at the end.  As it was, it seemed as if there was still so much left unsaid and unresolved between the two of them.  Then to add insult to injury I have to sit through pointless Faith/Robin relationship scenes.</p>
<p>I might have been able to forgive Joss for it had it not been for the deaths of Wash, Bennett and Topher in Firefly and Dollhouse respectively.  The man has a knack for killing off my favorites.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2009 11:51:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s interesting, Shadow Freak -- that might have been an interesting approach.

And as to &quot;Sam barely cares about his father&quot; -- I don&#039;t know if that&#039;s true. It&#039;s what the character of Sam was putting forth, but obviously he cares about his father. Further, the writing of the show could be made to reflect the situation accordingly.

And please, please, don&#039;t call me &quot;Mr. Wendig.&quot; Go with &quot;Chuck,&quot; or &quot;Charles,&quot; or, &quot;My Dark Overlord.&quot;

:)

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s interesting, Shadow Freak &#8212; that might have been an interesting approach.</p>
<p>And as to &#8220;Sam barely cares about his father&#8221; &#8212; I don&#8217;t know if that&#8217;s true. It&#8217;s what the character of Sam was putting forth, but obviously he cares about his father. Further, the writing of the show could be made to reflect the situation accordingly.</p>
<p>And please, please, don&#8217;t call me &#8220;Mr. Wendig.&#8221; Go with &#8220;Chuck,&#8221; or &#8220;Charles,&#8221; or, &#8220;My Dark Overlord.&#8221;<br />
 <img src='http://terribleminds.com/ramble/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Shadow Freak</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shadow Freak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2009 01:45:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For supernatural, it was said that the author thought about keeping Jess alive, make her become evil and choose to kill her. She is the driving force behind Sam getting back on the road. The guy barely cares about his father until the end of season 1. If Jess had live, he would never have left with Dean. 
Now, the way it was done... yep, it felt empty. But God! John&#039;s death makes up for Jess&#039;. Man I almost cried when the coffee touched the floor.
But still, I must agree with Mr Wendig: death must mean something. I must remember this every time I create a story. I&#039;m a killer. In a story I never completed the five main characters ends up dead. And I have a bad habit of killing main NPCs in my roleplaying games. It&#039;s a bad habit... but it&#039;s so much fun!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For supernatural, it was said that the author thought about keeping Jess alive, make her become evil and choose to kill her. She is the driving force behind Sam getting back on the road. The guy barely cares about his father until the end of season 1. If Jess had live, he would never have left with Dean.<br />
Now, the way it was done&#8230; yep, it felt empty. But God! John&#8217;s death makes up for Jess&#8217;. Man I almost cried when the coffee touched the floor.<br />
But still, I must agree with Mr Wendig: death must mean something. I must remember this every time I create a story. I&#8217;m a killer. In a story I never completed the five main characters ends up dead. And I have a bad habit of killing main NPCs in my roleplaying games. It&#8217;s a bad habit&#8230; but it&#8217;s so much fun!</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 23:31:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heather:

Righto. I&#039;ll note that I loved Serenity, actually, equal to my love for the TV show. Wash&#039;s death was the only I had with the movie (and Wash dying actually makes me forget about Book&#039;s death).

And you nailed part of my issue with the Penny death. Whedon didn&#039;t weave in the throughline of darkness throughout, as he did with, say, Firefly or Serenity. Penny&#039;s death shatters the tone of the previous episodes, and for me, not in a good way.

For the record, though, I hope Whedon continues to champion the Internet model and really make something of it.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heather:</p>
<p>Righto. I&#8217;ll note that I loved Serenity, actually, equal to my love for the TV show. Wash&#8217;s death was the only I had with the movie (and Wash dying actually makes me forget about Book&#8217;s death).</p>
<p>And you nailed part of my issue with the Penny death. Whedon didn&#8217;t weave in the throughline of darkness throughout, as he did with, say, Firefly or Serenity. Penny&#8217;s death shatters the tone of the previous episodes, and for me, not in a good way.</p>
<p>For the record, though, I hope Whedon continues to champion the Internet model and really make something of it.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: heather</title>
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		<dc:creator>heather</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 23:00:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[Spoilers be here, although that should be redundant at this point]

I liked Serenity more than most people did (like I&#039;ve said before, for some reason I&#039;m less critical about my movies than my books). That said, Wash&#039;s death was a &quot;WTF?&quot; moment for me. Not merely for its purposelessness, but for its flippant tone, which was WAY jarring. That significantly brought me out of the narrative and mucked with my experience of the movie.

Similarly, Penny&#039;s death in Dr. Horrible was jarring to me as well. In just the way that Wash&#039;s death was an oddly flippant and silly moment in a tragic and tense set of scenes, Penny&#039;s death was an oddly tragic moment in an otherwise wacky and light-hearted narrative. Not that you can&#039;t have those things together, but it takes some real skill to pull off, and it just didn&#039;t work for me there.

I agree that Joss became overly reliant on killing off characters. I think that&#039;s part of why it started to feel out-of-place and discordant to me---if the death doesn&#039;t serve a purpose, then it&#039;s likely to feel rather random.</description>
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<p>I liked Serenity more than most people did (like I&#8217;ve said before, for some reason I&#8217;m less critical about my movies than my books). That said, Wash&#8217;s death was a &#8220;WTF?&#8221; moment for me. Not merely for its purposelessness, but for its flippant tone, which was WAY jarring. That significantly brought me out of the narrative and mucked with my experience of the movie.</p>
<p>Similarly, Penny&#8217;s death in Dr. Horrible was jarring to me as well. In just the way that Wash&#8217;s death was an oddly flippant and silly moment in a tragic and tense set of scenes, Penny&#8217;s death was an oddly tragic moment in an otherwise wacky and light-hearted narrative. Not that you can&#8217;t have those things together, but it takes some real skill to pull off, and it just didn&#8217;t work for me there.</p>
<p>I agree that Joss became overly reliant on killing off characters. I think that&#8217;s part of why it started to feel out-of-place and discordant to me&#8212;if the death doesn&#8217;t serve a purpose, then it&#8217;s likely to feel rather random.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 18:37:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Glad you ducked out, Julie. I told you! Here there be spoilers! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Glad you ducked out, Julie. I told you! Here there be spoilers! <img src='http://terribleminds.com/ramble/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 18:28:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fred:

First point, you&#039;re selling me a little more on Penny&#039;s death as conflict and character motivator. I&#039;m still sure I would&#039;ve done it differently, and I still cast a wary glance at Whedon for hobbling along on that crutch one too many times. But, I&#039;ll grant you good ideas.

Second point, I think the creative curse is a myth. That assumes that the creator is smarter than the audience, which I don&#039;t think is true. My wife counts firmly as &quot;audience,&quot; and she&#039;s *constantly* able to guess the outcome of events in shows and films before I do. Point is, People Who Watch TV have seen it before. People Who Watch Whedon as fans are fully aware of what someone like that has done in the past, and are looking for repeats. I&#039;ve little doubt some people really dug Penny&#039;s death in Horrible; that said, I know of people who responded to it much differently than those who watched it with you, who saw it as kind of an eye-rolling &quot;duh&quot; moment rather than a surprising or heartbreaking conclusion.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fred:</p>
<p>First point, you&#8217;re selling me a little more on Penny&#8217;s death as conflict and character motivator. I&#8217;m still sure I would&#8217;ve done it differently, and I still cast a wary glance at Whedon for hobbling along on that crutch one too many times. But, I&#8217;ll grant you good ideas.</p>
<p>Second point, I think the creative curse is a myth. That assumes that the creator is smarter than the audience, which I don&#8217;t think is true. My wife counts firmly as &#8220;audience,&#8221; and she&#8217;s *constantly* able to guess the outcome of events in shows and films before I do. Point is, People Who Watch TV have seen it before. People Who Watch Whedon as fans are fully aware of what someone like that has done in the past, and are looking for repeats. I&#8217;ve little doubt some people really dug Penny&#8217;s death in Horrible; that said, I know of people who responded to it much differently than those who watched it with you, who saw it as kind of an eye-rolling &#8220;duh&#8221; moment rather than a surprising or heartbreaking conclusion.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Julie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 17:15:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Clipping along at a nice pace and saw &quot;Supernatural&quot; come up and had to stop reading and scroll down here uber quick.

Seasons 1-3 are wrapped and waiting for me to open on Crimmas Morn.

I&#039;ll come back to this post in a few months. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clipping along at a nice pace and saw &#8220;Supernatural&#8221; come up and had to stop reading and scroll down here uber quick.</p>
<p>Seasons 1-3 are wrapped and waiting for me to open on Crimmas Morn.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll come back to this post in a few months. <img src='http://terribleminds.com/ramble/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Fred Hicks</title>
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		<dc:creator>Fred Hicks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 17:07:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think you&#039;re suffering from the Creative Curse there, though -- the tendency, through your craft, to look ahead from the current moment and see where things could end up.

I watched Dr. H with several people who don&#039;t suffer from the Curse, and the heartache and genuine emotional response that Penny&#039;s death got for them is something I&#039;d want to be able to create.

And for my own creative itches, I like seeing protags get hit right in the teeth with consequences of their choices. You&#039;re right; H could have had Penny if he&#039;d been less villainous. But he chose to be villainous even though it was clear his heart wasn&#039;t in it, letting his ire at Hammer overtake his chance to be a better guy. And so his heart got ripped out for his trouble, externalized in her death. 

I sit down to watch something Whedon does, I&#039;m in it for the tragicomedic elements. Penny lives, I&#039;m feeling I get a weaker story, not a better one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think you&#8217;re suffering from the Creative Curse there, though &#8212; the tendency, through your craft, to look ahead from the current moment and see where things could end up.</p>
<p>I watched Dr. H with several people who don&#8217;t suffer from the Curse, and the heartache and genuine emotional response that Penny&#8217;s death got for them is something I&#8217;d want to be able to create.</p>
<p>And for my own creative itches, I like seeing protags get hit right in the teeth with consequences of their choices. You&#8217;re right; H could have had Penny if he&#8217;d been less villainous. But he chose to be villainous even though it was clear his heart wasn&#8217;t in it, letting his ire at Hammer overtake his chance to be a better guy. And so his heart got ripped out for his trouble, externalized in her death. </p>
<p>I sit down to watch something Whedon does, I&#8217;m in it for the tragicomedic elements. Penny lives, I&#8217;m feeling I get a weaker story, not a better one.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 16:54:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gloria:

Totally agreed on that point. A master stroke, indeed. Placed perfectly, made so we really care, and remains a powerful driving force -- doesn&#039;t remove conflict, but creates it, and creates motivation.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gloria:</p>
<p>Totally agreed on that point. A master stroke, indeed. Placed perfectly, made so we really care, and remains a powerful driving force &#8212; doesn&#8217;t remove conflict, but creates it, and creates motivation.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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