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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/11/23/description-in-prose-the-screenplay-template/comment-page-1/#comment-2739</link>
		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 23:22:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Will:

I am into that. Some hybrid format would be interesting. Especially if you leave in tags or hooks for transmedia elements.

Hrrm.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Will:</p>
<p>I am into that. Some hybrid format would be interesting. Especially if you leave in tags or hooks for transmedia elements.</p>
<p>Hrrm.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Scionic</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scionic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 23:13:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve read parts of the Goldman books, and liked them... I think I live and die by Stracizinsky&#039;s book though (even though it&#039;s title eludes me).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve read parts of the Goldman books, and liked them&#8230; I think I live and die by Stracizinsky&#8217;s book though (even though it&#8217;s title eludes me).</p>
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		<title>By: Will</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/11/23/description-in-prose-the-screenplay-template/comment-page-1/#comment-2733</link>
		<dc:creator>Will</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 18:12:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, read the Goldman books.

I&#039;ve been tinkering with a quasi-screenplay format for fiction meant to be read online — something that&#039;s quick and jaunty, high on action, but able to offer more lingering visuals than a screenplay usually does. A new hybrid form, if you will. This is the form that I&#039;m riffing on for that &quot;Playing On A Wave&quot; post at GPW, too.

The trouble is that anything that&#039;s faux-screenplay is going to look like it&#039;s just desperate to get optioned, which isn&#039;t quite the point. (But, like all writing publishing online, is part of it.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, read the Goldman books.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been tinkering with a quasi-screenplay format for fiction meant to be read online — something that&#8217;s quick and jaunty, high on action, but able to offer more lingering visuals than a screenplay usually does. A new hybrid form, if you will. This is the form that I&#8217;m riffing on for that &#8220;Playing On A Wave&#8221; post at GPW, too.</p>
<p>The trouble is that anything that&#8217;s faux-screenplay is going to look like it&#8217;s just desperate to get optioned, which isn&#8217;t quite the point. (But, like all writing publishing online, is part of it.)</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:18:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>McKee&#039;s Story *is* dry as a bone. Useful, to be sure, but not a pleasant read.

Anything by Syd Field is useful, too, though not always super-pleasant.

I like Alex Epstein&#039;s books --

http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/

So too, Save The Cat!.

http://www.blakesnyder.com/

Finally -- Shane Black is a favorite. I hope he continues to work. Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is a new Black classic. That reminds me too to go back and re-read the script for Last Boy Scout. Hrrm.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>McKee&#8217;s Story *is* dry as a bone. Useful, to be sure, but not a pleasant read.</p>
<p>Anything by Syd Field is useful, too, though not always super-pleasant.</p>
<p>I like Alex Epstein&#8217;s books &#8211;</p>
<p><a href="http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/</a></p>
<p>So too, Save The Cat!.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.blakesnyder.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.blakesnyder.com/</a></p>
<p>Finally &#8212; Shane Black is a favorite. I hope he continues to work. Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is a new Black classic. That reminds me too to go back and re-read the script for Last Boy Scout. Hrrm.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Jesse Scoble</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jesse Scoble</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:15:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Personally, I think both of Goldman&#039;s books are great. My only wish is that he&#039;d write a new one that reflects the current state of the industry (even _Which Lie..._ is dated now).

They are about Hollywood as much as writing, if memory serves, and are certainly much more engaging than Robert McKee&#039;s _Story_ (which gets a lot of praise, but goddamn do I find it dry).

There&#039;s a fine balance between how much description to put down and how lean to make it. Shane Black&#039;s screenplays are a delight to read, for example.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Personally, I think both of Goldman&#8217;s books are great. My only wish is that he&#8217;d write a new one that reflects the current state of the industry (even _Which Lie&#8230;_ is dated now).</p>
<p>They are about Hollywood as much as writing, if memory serves, and are certainly much more engaging than Robert McKee&#8217;s _Story_ (which gets a lot of praise, but goddamn do I find it dry).</p>
<p>There&#8217;s a fine balance between how much description to put down and how lean to make it. Shane Black&#8217;s screenplays are a delight to read, for example.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeff Tidball</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeff Tidball</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:16:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>William Goldman&#039;s first book is called Adventures in the Screen Trade. It&#039;s not bad.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>William Goldman&#8217;s first book is called Adventures in the Screen Trade. It&#8217;s not bad.</p>
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		<title>By: Stoney</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stoney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:50:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>...

The very first movie I did was a horror movie that was a unique take on film conceits.  In other words, YOU HAVE AN AUDIENCE OF ONE, GUARANTEED.  (If you have comcast, you should be able to view it on in demand: Blood on the HIghway.  Note: not for people that don&#039;t appreciate a coarse dick joke.)

GOOD LUCK.  The Hollywood machine can be brutal, but there are some awesome producers/financiers out there.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230;</p>
<p>The very first movie I did was a horror movie that was a unique take on film conceits.  In other words, YOU HAVE AN AUDIENCE OF ONE, GUARANTEED.  (If you have comcast, you should be able to view it on in demand: Blood on the HIghway.  Note: not for people that don&#8217;t appreciate a coarse dick joke.)</p>
<p>GOOD LUCK.  The Hollywood machine can be brutal, but there are some awesome producers/financiers out there.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:42:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t want to say much about the screenplay. The good news is, we have a producer, we&#039;re scaring up financing, so the stars seem aligned to get this puppy made. I&#039;ll just say that it&#039;s a... unique take on certain horror film conceits.

I will definitely find that book and eat it. I mean, read it.

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t want to say much about the screenplay. The good news is, we have a producer, we&#8217;re scaring up financing, so the stars seem aligned to get this puppy made. I&#8217;ll just say that it&#8217;s a&#8230; unique take on certain horror film conceits.</p>
<p>I will definitely find that book and eat it. I mean, read it.</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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		<title>By: Stoney</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stoney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:37:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The book is just what you&#039;re talking about (well, kinda.)  He shows you scripts and why they work, but the main focus is adaption FROM prose to screenplay.  I can&#039;t remember if The Princess Bride came as a book first, or movie, but that&#039;s a terrific example of how to trim and yet maintain the elements of the story and all of the details, too.

The book is so much exposition - so much description and inner dialog, I think it will suffer on screen as a result.  You have something like No Country For Old Men that is pretty spare, too, but there is so much action and so many characters that you can use to further the story, and The Road centers on The Man.  I dunno, I think it would take a pretty spectacular screenwriter and director to pull that one off.

NICE.  I should make a solid 10 bucks in nine weeks time, SWEET!

If you&#039;re comfortable with it, I&#039;d love to hear about your screenplay, but I also completely understand the need to play those cards close to your vest on a public blog.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The book is just what you&#8217;re talking about (well, kinda.)  He shows you scripts and why they work, but the main focus is adaption FROM prose to screenplay.  I can&#8217;t remember if The Princess Bride came as a book first, or movie, but that&#8217;s a terrific example of how to trim and yet maintain the elements of the story and all of the details, too.</p>
<p>The book is so much exposition &#8211; so much description and inner dialog, I think it will suffer on screen as a result.  You have something like No Country For Old Men that is pretty spare, too, but there is so much action and so many characters that you can use to further the story, and The Road centers on The Man.  I dunno, I think it would take a pretty spectacular screenwriter and director to pull that one off.</p>
<p>NICE.  I should make a solid 10 bucks in nine weeks time, SWEET!</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re comfortable with it, I&#8217;d love to hear about your screenplay, but I also completely understand the need to play those cards close to your vest on a public blog.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:29:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Damn, no, I haven&#039;t read that. (makes mental note)

The Road -- I&#039;m not sure how the film will translate, but I think it might. I don&#039;t know that I want to see such misery on the big screen, though.

As for that doormat -- well, there you go. Cafepress that shit. Get out there. Make some bank. You&#039;ve found your meal ticket!

-- c.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Damn, no, I haven&#8217;t read that. (makes mental note)</p>
<p>The Road &#8212; I&#8217;m not sure how the film will translate, but I think it might. I don&#8217;t know that I want to see such misery on the big screen, though.</p>
<p>As for that doormat &#8212; well, there you go. Cafepress that shit. Get out there. Make some bank. You&#8217;ve found your meal ticket!</p>
<p>&#8211; c.</p>
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