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	<title>Comments on: Stagger Forth, Bloody And Triumphant</title>
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	<description>Chuck Wendig: Freelance Penmonkey</description>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/07/16/stagger-forth-bloody-and-triumphant/comment-page-1/#comment-441</link>
		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 20:11:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Agnes -- yeah, maybe some day. I&#039;m kind of over the whole &quot;angels and demons&quot; thing (for now),  though there&#039;s an angle somewhere in there that I&#039;m hot for.

But really, Kevin Smith dicked me over on that one with Dogma. Fat little bearded bastard!

*shakes fist at him*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Agnes &#8212; yeah, maybe some day. I&#8217;m kind of over the whole &#8220;angels and demons&#8221; thing (for now),  though there&#8217;s an angle somewhere in there that I&#8217;m hot for.</p>
<p>But really, Kevin Smith dicked me over on that one with Dogma. Fat little bearded bastard!</p>
<p>*shakes fist at him*</p>
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		<title>By: Associate Producer Lucifer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Associate Producer Lucifer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 19:46:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well done, Weaver.
Now how about Agnes?

--hza

PS: Wood, how about &quot;ramjob,&quot; &quot;tinman&quot; or (my personal favorite) &quot;Mr. Chips&quot;?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done, Weaver.<br />
Now how about Agnes?</p>
<p>&#8211;hza</p>
<p>PS: Wood, how about &#8220;ramjob,&#8221; &#8220;tinman&#8221; or (my personal favorite) &#8220;Mr. Chips&#8221;?</p>
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		<title>By: Wood</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/07/16/stagger-forth-bloody-and-triumphant/comment-page-1/#comment-439</link>
		<dc:creator>Wood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 13:11:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am still rewriting Memory Sticks, you know. I&#039;m uploading it for a print version to sell in Swansea, like, next week, and it&#039;s... still not done. 

If you have any better idea for a discriminatory and prejudicial term for a cyborg than &quot;kithead&quot; do let me know. I am killing myself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am still rewriting Memory Sticks, you know. I&#8217;m uploading it for a print version to sell in Swansea, like, next week, and it&#8217;s&#8230; still not done. </p>
<p>If you have any better idea for a discriminatory and prejudicial term for a cyborg than &#8220;kithead&#8221; do let me know. I am killing myself.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/07/16/stagger-forth-bloody-and-triumphant/comment-page-1/#comment-437</link>
		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 18:35:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Out of all seriousness, Will, it&#039;s a really good question -- how does one know when any writing project is truly finished? 

I mean, on one hand, there exists a gut level reaction to something. You can say, &quot;Okay, certain parts of this are locked down; I don&#039;t intend to do much more with them.&quot; 

But always, pieces float. Some of it is a writing thing, a grammar and spelling thing, a tweaking thing, but it also might be a plot thing, or a story thing, or a character thing -- you can just keep trimming and adding, cutting and grafting. 

So, you have to know when you need to do more, and you have to know when to stop. 

I&#039;ve written novels, but have done nothing with them, so I&#039;m no expert, here. Revising novels for me has always been painful. I&#039;m learning to love it, though. I look forward to cracking open the bones on this one and seeing how the marrow tastes.

But seriously, your question is a very real one, and one I don&#039;t know how to answer, yet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Out of all seriousness, Will, it&#8217;s a really good question &#8212; how does one know when any writing project is truly finished? </p>
<p>I mean, on one hand, there exists a gut level reaction to something. You can say, &#8220;Okay, certain parts of this are locked down; I don&#8217;t intend to do much more with them.&#8221; </p>
<p>But always, pieces float. Some of it is a writing thing, a grammar and spelling thing, a tweaking thing, but it also might be a plot thing, or a story thing, or a character thing &#8212; you can just keep trimming and adding, cutting and grafting. </p>
<p>So, you have to know when you need to do more, and you have to know when to stop. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve written novels, but have done nothing with them, so I&#8217;m no expert, here. Revising novels for me has always been painful. I&#8217;m learning to love it, though. I look forward to cracking open the bones on this one and seeing how the marrow tastes.</p>
<p>But seriously, your question is a very real one, and one I don&#8217;t know how to answer, yet.</p>
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		<title>By: Will</title>
		<link>http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2009/07/16/stagger-forth-bloody-and-triumphant/comment-page-1/#comment-436</link>
		<dc:creator>Will</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 18:32:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve never finished a novel. I don&#039;t even know how one knows when one has. I was curious.

Also, felicitări, felicitaties, поздравления, συγχαρητήρια, 祝贺, Glückwünsche, gratulationer, congratulations, Chuck.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve never finished a novel. I don&#8217;t even know how one knows when one has. I was curious.</p>
<p>Also, felicitări, felicitaties, поздравления, συγχαρητήρια, 祝贺, Glückwünsche, gratulationer, congratulations, Chuck.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 18:29:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wood&#039;s on the list, for sheezy.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wood&#8217;s on the list, for sheezy.</p>
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		<title>By: Wood</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wood</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 18:13:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You &lt;i&gt;know&lt;/i&gt; I&#039;m on that list.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You <i>know</i> I&#8217;m on that list.</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chuck</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 17:01:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Consider yourself on the list!

And thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Consider yourself on the list!</p>
<p>And thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Filamena</title>
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		<dc:creator>Filamena</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2009 16:54:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m signing up to beta read. I will take no as an answer, but I&#039;ll whine about it. 

You shouldn&#039;t celebrate small. Seriously, party like you&#039;re in a Prince video. It&#039;s important.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m signing up to beta read. I will take no as an answer, but I&#8217;ll whine about it. </p>
<p>You shouldn&#8217;t celebrate small. Seriously, party like you&#8217;re in a Prince video. It&#8217;s important.</p>
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